ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn #10 - REMOVED - Page 9

Waiting for their heated conversation

Plz continue it as soon as possible

N haayyee...men waari jawan iss arnav pe...

Such a sweeet update...

Very much enjoyed reading it

Thnks for d PM..

:)

coming to update wt an emotional update it is...must say "our" arnav stole the undate :)...:)

good to c them happy in their life...so much caring...small small things yet very imp in meaning like...eating together ...sleeping together..;)..her massaging and kissing on his forehead till he sleeps peacefully...him offering his first morsal of food thats so sweet...very small gesture bet very strong one in their impacts:)

thank u for making changed her inner wear...loved that all fun time u have written...laughters...gigglings...love making ...any time and any place(did u mentioned any place or its my wild imagination;))...:)...so so sweet

khushi having feeling of stress sometimes on mentioning of her father...ur father in town...i can well imagine its like our teacher home ur parents home...uff poor soul well imagine the stress level u have shown by using "ur father in town"...hehehe

deepu girl u r awesome in writing whole scene regarding sarghi and kerwachauth...u have written it so beautifully...love u even more for that... arnav inner turmoil while he entering farmhouse...as he got it loud and clear his loss is her loss too...wow ...yaar tussi great...superb words...i was having tears to be honest when he opened the gaint gates of farm house and seen with craving,hurt, eyes full of memories of loved ones ... beta tum agay...uff ...anjali...father...him having his head against the door...doing all only and only for khushi ...i have not read it ...seems to me i have seen it live...which u r capable of doing so...love u yaar...

hmmm his slender tender non exsitsance butts...wow wt a defination of butts...lol...too good deepu...

i think wt ever the talks going to happ between father and son in law...deepu u have given enough strong foundation...for trust and forgiveness...garima and arnav scene is way much importance...and i have feeling...when he will going to take decision ...this conversation btw garima and arnav will surely going to help arnav...

loved their bedroom talks...very entertaining in deed...:)...

loved the update to the core deepu...love u🤗