ArHi SS: Seduction *Thread Four* (COMPLETED) - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
congrats on the new thread loved the update rocking they got married loved that they have decide to live and let live but still looking for the cure to the curse loved that they got married so cute thy have a baby girl loved it wonder if the baby first word of love to its mother will break the curse or it it unconditional love that breaks it amazing update beautifully done thanks for the pm and an amazing story
Edited by dumas - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Edited comment on pg.64 on previous thread for chapter 8...😳

Now off to read chapter 9..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Chapter 9 was awesome!!!

So it was Anjali who came all the way from London to make sure her brother was okay.. Of course she would be concerned as he has been so much in is life and can't see him hurt again..

I know Arnav feels that she is interfering in his life but she is only looking out for his well being ...

So Aman and Anjali so have a thing, well really Aman has a thing for Anjali more than she does. But she does look forward to talking and loves to confide in him too.

Aman was able to notice that Khushi is in love with Arnav.

Anjali is looking out for Arnav and she had the talk with Khushi to let her know the concern she has and doesn't want him hurt again..

After the talk with Anjali, Khushi realized that she wants to be with Arnav and fully committed to him. She voiced that out to Arnav too, but now she is need of help of Arnav to get rid of this curse desperately...so she can be with him fully...

So does the lake have to do anything with all this??

Also why was Khushi so worried at the end?? What did she forget?? What does the date have to do with anything???
Still so many question...

Now eagerly waiting for the next chapter ...

Thanks for the pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Congrts on new thread
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
congrats on your new thread.
Waiting for update
Edited by shubhanjli - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Congrats for the new thread..waiting for the next update eagerly..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
congo on new thread dear...😊😊
Eagerly waiting 4 the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Yaayyy!! Excited for the update today!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
So i cudnt control myself and read this ss b4 when ur still writing it:p
and thank god story is not at such point that i wud make me go crazy wid all d possibility:D

first thing off...u made me realize how mch m missing out by not reading suparnatural stories...i somehow dont like jadu..pari...curse wali stories much...i used read those when i was kid:p
but may i loved this coz of arhi and d way u wrote it...
It was so beautifully written and wid all mystery around khushi's character and passsiooonnn and d great sexual tension which is integral part of ur stories...
Attraction between d couple from d first meeting...
I loved how u used '' nafrat pass ane na de...'' tagline in 2 diff ways in shattered and now in seduction...
When i read the whole IT wala part half blushing half laughing and nail biting...coz i was hoping that she just wudnt go in d painting half way leaving arna high and dry and crying...
I bet all d readers were in d same situation..no writer made me go thro this while reaing that:p
but arnavji was more intelligent that i had thought thank god he saved them both and us:p
so its tym for celebration tym yeyyy...arhi's baby wl break that curse...no mystery till d end :D:D

and sorry if u dont find my comment meaningful coz pehle toh i get nervous while commenting on ur work(dont ask me why:p) and second i dunno what to say so i blabbered like this:p

ps... Y do u love ''S'' so much?:p
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
thread 4...
wow..as a writer you actually write really really good...
and this thing is the proof..
10 chapters in 4 threads...
congrats on that...
may you have many more if not for this then for others...
and coming to the chapter..
as everyone me also waiting waiting waiting for
the new one..
and the CELEBRATION chapter's update...
will surely be a CELEBRATION for us...

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