Ariya ss PYAR MARTHI NAHI HAI ***** completed***** - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Hai guys iski part tho mere dimag me ghoom rahi hai.Isliye iski update derahihooon here is the next part

part 3

Kuch der baad Arjun ko hosh aathi hai. Every one feels relief .

Rathore sabhi ko jaane ke liye kahtha hai. Rathore wahi rukhtha hai.

Arjun "Tum kyoon rukgaya jaavo"

Rathore "Kyoon? Akele hi marna hai?"

Arjun "Tu ...My kya kaha aur tu kya bolrahe ho? Tere tabiyath teek hai?"

Rathore "Very good .Good Q . Aisa hi poochana hai.Warna tu Arjun kyoon hoge hai na?"

Arjun "Kya hua tujhe ?Aisa taane kyoon maarrahe ho?

Rathore "Aur kya karna maaloom nahi isliye"

Arjun"WOOff. Hmm tho you are serious .burst out Rathore "

Rathore " Burst out .Are nahi nahi tujhe koyi kuch bolsaktha hai.Nahi "

Arjun "..."

Rathore "...Kyoo karrahe ho aisa Arjun?'

Arjun "Kya karraha hoon?"

Rathore "Anjaana math bano. Tum khana sona choddiya. Aisa kiasa chalega?"

Arjun "You know na .Roshini chalne ke baad..."

Rathore "Ha I know .Roshini ki darawa mouth tujhe sone nahi deraha hai.Lekin khana ye tum teek se khana Roshini ke baad nahi Arjun 5 saal pahale choddiya.Hai nahi?"

Arjun "Aisa kuch bhi nahi .My Roshini ke baad hi..."

Rathore "Kisise jhoot bolrahe ho Arjun .Mujhese tumhare jindagi ki har panna patha hai mujhe.Kyoon karahe ho aisa? Kyoon nahi booljathe ho use?"

Arjun"My kithane baar kahchuka hoon Rathore ? My use bhool chuka hoon"

Rathore "Really tho ab phir isko prove karne ke liye phir shadi karlo thab my maanoonga"

Arjun"Paglal math bano Rathore . "

Rathore "Kyoon ? Tum kaharahe hona ki tu use bhool gaya .Ab shadi karne ke liye kya problem hai?Wo tho bachoon ke saath kush rahrahi hogi"

Arjun smiles.

Rathore "SMILE😡 kya Mujhe ye bathane ka kast karoge,Kyoon hasrahe ho?"

Arjun "Nahi yaar uski aadathein tho bachhi ki tarah hai.AUr usko bachhein😊 .Kiase sambalthi hogi is bachhi un bachhoko😆"

Rathore "Arjun pagal ho? My kaharah hoon wo kushise hai tere bina . Phir bhi tum uske liye smile karahe ho?"

Arjun"Hmmm jo bhi na wo kushi se hogi na.Ye kafi hai"

Rathore "Tho tum use aaj bhi bhoola nahi .Maanlo Ab tho tere dil ko kholke mujhse share karo kamse kam stress tho kam hogi.please ""

Arjun kuch der silence rahtha hai.

Rathore " Please Arjun speak out. Dosth hoon tera ,My tujhe aisa dekhnahi paaraha hoon. Mujhese share karo please."

Arjun "Ha BHOOL CHUKA HOON Rathore use

My bhoolchuka hoon uski ankhome dekhthe tho usi ankho me hi doobker marne ka ichha hothi hai.

My bhoolchuka hoon ki uski smile mujhe ye ehasas dilathi hai ki my is duniya me sabse jyada kush naseeb hoon us smile ko kareeb se dekhpaya hoon.

My ye bhoolchuka hoon ki uske saath hatho me haath milake chalthe waqth mujhe lagtha hai ki I am the king of the world.

My bhoolchuka hoon ki Uski baathein sunne ka mouka mile tho mujhe is duniya me kisi aur cheez ki nazar bhi nahi aathi hai.

My bhoolchuka hoon Uske hotose aayi hue mere nam ki pukar kafi hai mujhe jeene ke liye.

My ye bhoolchuka hoon ki mere dil kahathi hai ki uski touch kafi hai ki wo dhadakne ke liye.

My ye bhoolchuka hoon ki Is hawa me uske saanse ki mehasoos hona rukthe hi mere saanse rukjayenge .Usi pal rukjayenge .

Ha Rathore my use bhoolchuka hoon.Bholchuka hoon use.

Arjun ki ankhose paani behrahhi hai.

Rathore stunned.

"Arjun aaj bhi is pal bhi,Paanch saal baad bhi.Wo inko bhoolaker kisi aur ke saath kushi se jeerahi hai.Ye patha chalne ke baad bhi Arjun usko uthana hi pyarkarraha hai.

Wo sirf uski kushi hone kush horaha hai.Us ki sans rukhthe tho jaane ke liye tayar hai is duniya se.

Ye sab kya hai? PYAR ha PYAR. Wo kisine kahthe hue suna

PYAR MARTHI NAHI HAI

Wo sach hai ,wo sach apne aankhose dekhraha hai."

Wo waha nahi rahapaatha hai.

Arjun ankhe bande karke deerse unka pyar ka naam letha hai.

"RIYAA...(.takes deepsigh and again) RIYAA"

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Riya ghar me aathi hai.

Riya ki father "Kiase ho beta tujhe dekhke kithane saal hogaye hai?"

Ria smile karke "Saal ha paap saal hogaye hai"

Father "Waise Rohan kaha hai?"

Riya "Wo bahar hai. bolke ROHAN ...ROHAN"

"Ha mumma .My yehi hoon"

4 years boy gave answer to RIya .

Riya "Yehi ho .Avo nana ji se milo "

Father "hai Rohan .Kaise ho beta ?'

Rohan "fine ,aap kisae hai?"

father "Bilkul fine."

Riya "Avo fresh hoke aayenge"

Rohan "Teek hai.My abhi aathi hoon nanaji"

Father " hmmm "

Riya apne kamare me jaathi hai

rohan "Mumma ye aapka kamara hai?'

Riya "Ha beta javo fresh hoke aavo"Rohan wash room me chalth ahi.

Riya apne cupbord kholke waha sabse nech wali dress ko nikalke usko kholthi hai.

Usme hue photo ko dekhker touch karke

"ARJUN ...kiase ho?"

Kaisa laga ?⭐️ comments please⭐️⭐️

for part4 click here

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3822928/ariya-ss-pyar-marthi-nahi-hai-completed?pn=19

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Edited by SATRISHI - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Wonderful
It was heart touching. The way arjun described everything to Sameer.
Is Rohan riya and Arjun's son.
Can't wait to read their meeting.
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
superb.. loved it.. thanks for pm..
Edited by unishaz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
It was beautiful dear
Loved sameer n arjun convo
n the way Arjun described ki ek bacchi aur bachoo ko kaise sambhalti hogi 😆
Thanks for the Pm
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
The Feeling U Depict Of Arjun Toward Riya And her Ehsasa Wonderful
Outstanding ,mind Blowing

Me Stun

Thanx 4 pm Me

Mine Wish Aaj He Tum Iska Next Update Dedo Verna Intzqr Mar Jaoge

Plsss

Riya Has Son
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
aww it was a luvly updt dear so heart touching luvd d way Arjun described his luv for Riya Bt y Riya left him if she still luvs him? N is rohan ariya's son? Plz cnt sn n thnx for d pm dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Super Duper Awesome update dr...!!!!!
Awww Sam looked quite concerned for him...!!! Loved how he made him share his feelings...!!!!
Wow Arjun poured his heart out in front of Sam...that was really heart touching...!!!!! He still madly loved her...!!!
Wow Riya has a son...!! Is it Riya or Arjun's son...?????
Awww Riya also missed him...!!!!
What is the reason of their separation...???
Thanks for pm dr...!! Continue soon...!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Mishti_k5

The Feeling U Depict Of Arjun Toward Riya And her Ehsasa Wonderful

Outstanding ,mind Blowing

Me Stun

Thanx 4 pm Me

Mine Wish Aaj He Tum Iska Next Update Dedo Verna Intzqr Mar Jaoge

Plsss

Riya Has Son



I m also agreed with Mish... Me too want another update today...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
It was so heart touching and emotional
loved it
continue soon

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