Virmaan : After Marriage-2 : Thread~5 : Part- 249 on 118 - Page 24

Created

Last reply

Replies

686

Views

123.3k

Users

45

Likes

1.3k

Frequent Posters

Niaksharma thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

<font color="#CC33FF">Awesome updates!! Piyu is damn cute.. Virat ki class lagegi ab toh😆.. Wishing phone.. Nice one ;p.. Manvi and Piyu are planning something for Virat right? Waiting for the next.. Take care :))
</font>



:
thanks
u will know soon
Niaksharma thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rasp_berry

Wat fab updt...piyu is damn cute...n wats the secret they hiding frm virat? Hmmm intresting...cont soon



thank u
u will know soon
Niaksharma thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shirhid

amazing update khushi

seriously ur bac with a bang
payal is sooo cute
thier phone convo was superb
all the parts are fabulous
i to just loved it
cont soon
till then take care



thank u so mucg...
I will try
Niaksharma thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Awesome yaar..

Loved it tooo much..

Payal is soo cute...

Payal and Virat Phone scene was sooo sweet..

And Payal is making Manvi seriously crazy...

Poor Virat is now in trouble..

Pleasseee update soon...



thank u so much
i will try to soon
Lumos-Maxima thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
Khushi waiting for the update!! 😊
Niaksharma thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Khushi waiting for the update!!😊



in some time
Lumos-Maxima thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
Niaksharma thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
PART-226
:
MAANvi smile at her baby angle..nd go on her knees..pull her close...
M-lovingly-mumma aap pe pura trust karti hai..lekin mumma se secrate rakhna buri baat hai naa bachcha..?
P-cute nd innocently-sholly mumma...ab ni kalungi...pakkavala..gullu ki sawer...
M-hmm...okay..ab batao kyu market jana tha?
She said with picking her up in her arms nd walking out from room..
P-alle...woh na..meko kuch lena hai..
She said with wrapping hr small nd tiny arms around her neck..
M-bachcha...market sab kuch na kuch lene hi jate hai..lekin aap ko kya lene jana hai?
She reach near stairs..
P-woh hum naa jo plannin kal le hai ushke liaa...
M-uske liye?
P-hmmm...
M-but hum ne to kal hi sab le liya tha naa..shopping me..aur kya lena hai?
P-woh papa ke liye suppise hai..
M-surprise...
P-same same mumma...
M-yeah..lekin surprise to papa ke liye plan kiya hai na to mujhe to bata sakte hai naa..
She saying with walking towards dinning table...
P-pleeez naa mumma...le chalo..main vahi jake batauuugi...pleeez...
She make cute face..pouted...
M-ok...ok..meri drama girl...abhi lunch fir hum chalege...
P-shouted..scream with happiness nd ecxitment nd hug her-yeyyy...thaku mumma...lub u...
Nd kiss on her cheeks...
M-smile nd hug her too..
Make her sit on chair nd place kis on her cheeks..
M-call tarun-tarun...oh woh to market gaya hai...shyaam..
Sy-ji bhabhi..
M-shyaam..sab ko lunch ke liye bula lo..aur khaana le aao..
S-ok..
Nd after that all come for dinner..nd maanvi nd jeevika serve to everyone...nd after that maanvi nd jeevika feeded to all three kids..maanvi feed to all three kids with same love nd jeevika too...
After that maanvi nd kids spent some time in play room while jeevika help in kitchen..
After that maanvi take permission from dadaji nd take payal with her nd left for mall..
Before leaving for mall she talk with jeevika nd kids to prepare all things nd stuff for surprise...
All agreed..
-o--------
After hour in mall...
P-ome near maanvi with item..ecxitly nd too cutely-mummm...
M-turn towards her with wide smile...
P-come near her nd saw her surprise-see...mumma...mela suppise...
M-awww...my bachcha..
Go on her knees nd kiss on her cheeks...
P-u like tit?
M-hahaha...haan..bahot...lekin aap ko ye kaise idea ayi?
P-cute proudly-mumma aul papa pe..two pe gai hoon..puli ki puli...to 2 smat hoon main mumma...
M-hahaha...right...
P-chalo ab meko bahut sala wolk hai...
M-ok ok meri bussy angle..
Nd
maanvi paid for it nd come out from shope with it..
----o----
maanvi nd paya..sitting on back seat nd talking abt surprise nd all..driver driving towards vadhera house...
P-explaing her last dream to maanvi with same innocence-aull papa ne meko us swing pe bithaaayaaa...
As she strache nd scream last word driver stop car nd maanvi gve surprisse nd shocking look to her...
P-bithaaayaa...continue-mumaa...mumma...woh...
She almost jumped on her seat...
M-kya..kya hua piyu..?
Try to follow her gaze..
P-mumma loot...woh..woh gullu...gullu...
M-find that place nd shook her head..
P-look at maanvi-pleeez...chale...?
M-smile-ok ok tumhare gullu..chalo...
Nd
she come out from car with payal..
M-come near stole with holding payal's hand..she make payal sit on near chair-to shopekeeper-bhaiya ji ek plate gol-gappe-pani-puri dijiyega..
P-shout behind her-thola tikha..tholasa...
M-shook her head-ji..thoda sa thika...mithe se kum..
Man-ji..
P-clapped happiny nd wave her legs in ecxitment-ummm...ammm..yummm,..,yummm...gullu...
That man gve one plate to maanvi nd maanvi make eat to payal nd help her in eat...
P-chewing-mu..mumm...mumma..ab...me..khud se...khaaungi..gullu...
M-okay..aram se lekin ok...
Nd she place plate near her..
Just then her phone rang..
She saw her phone nd smile widly..
M-cleaned her hand in hurry nd pick up call-hello..
-i love u...
M-hmm
-sirf hmm..
M-kuch kaam ho to batao varna phone rakhti hu me virat...
V-no no no..plz..plz..meri bachchi ki maa...asa mat karo plz..
M-try to hold her fake anger..while payal bussy with her gullu-phone kyu kiya?
V-yaar maanvi plz...ase baat mat karo...i m sorry naa...plz...
M-tum bigad doge bachchoko...
V-bachche bigde ho to achcha hota hai...varna apni mumma ke jaise boring rahe jayenge..
M-imigeatly-kya kaha tumne?
V-bit his toungh-k..k..kuch nahi..
M-main borring?
V-no..no..no maanvi..woh..tum to janti ho..main mazak karta raheta hu..
M-achacha..thik hai..to karte raho vaha apne office me sab se mazak..mujhe baat nahi karni..
V-stop...
M-kyu?
V-ok..agar tumne phone raha..to..
M-to?
V-to main sach me office me sab se mazak karungi..
M-frown..
V-btw..tumhe pata hai na..mere office me..kafi ladkian bhi hai...jaan deti hai meri ek line ke liye..
Smired..
M-virattt..
P-imigeatly look at her mumma-mumma..ka hua?
M-nothing bachcha..aap khaao..
P-papa ka phone hai?
M-haan..
P-meko baat kalni hai..
M-ok..
She place phone near her ear as her hand are mess up..
P-papa..main..lub u
v-my bachcha...i also love u...kya kar rahi hai meri parincess..
P-gullu khaa li hoon..
:
:
contin
Niaksharma thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
part-227
:
P-with wiping her mouth with back of her palm-gullu khaali hoon main papa...
V-hahahahha...awww...meri chhoti bhooki sherni...
P-hehehehe...
Maanvi know the answer of virat after she tell him that she eating golgappe...she just smiled..
V-but mela bachcha mumma to naraz hai naa to ye kaise?
P-whispering in low voice...trying to hide her talk from maanvi..bent her head little down-papa...main to aapki beti naa...mana liya...gullu ka sawal tha naa...
V-hahaha...
M-just adoring her...
V-ok ok...aap pane gullu enjoy karo aur phone mumma ko do..
P-okay...bye papa..miss u haa...
V-yes missing u already...love u..muhhha..
P-lub u same papa...muha...
P-to m-mumma lo papa ne kaha gullu pule kalo pahele...
M-took phone from her with smiling-haa bolo..
V-kya bolo?
M-matlab?
V-piyu ko maaf bhi kar diya nd bahar bhi le aayi..lekin main?..main maafi mange jaa raha hu uska kuch nahi?...he said in drametic way...
M-oh plzzz...virat...tum singer ho actor nahi..aur woh bhi over dramebaaz to bilkul bhi nahi...drama mat karo...
He is talking with her when his eyes fall on news paper..he become little serious..
M-hello..virat...
V-haa
m-haa kya?..firse drama?
V-kya?..he come in reality..
M-dekho ab drama mat karo..
V-he said little seriously but still in teasing way-haa haa woh rights to sirf tumhare pass hai na...
M-virat bahot hua...
She sound little serious..as she didnt like his tone this time..she found little diffrent...
V-maanvi bachchi hai waha...
M-look at payal nd then think little-m sorry..
V-its okay...
M-tum ghar kab aa rahe ho?
V-smirk nd naughtily-kyuuu?
M-blush little..smile-ase hi..biwi hu..puch nahi sakti kya?
V-nahi nahi puch kya tum to mere saath kuch bhi kar sakti ho...he said boldly...
M-her eyes become little widen-virattt..blushing..
V-hahaha...okay...main dinner se pahele aa jaunga..
M-itna late kyu?
V-ek directar aa raha hai yaar..
M-hahaha..okay okay..tum apna kam karo...main wait karungi..khyal rakhna bye..
V-ya ya..i know..tum bhi sambhal ke jana...i love u...muhhha..
M-blush..okay..me 2..
Nd she cute the call...
After gullu party maanvi take piyu home..
0-0-0-0-0-0
ITS 7:30 in evening...
Payalmarching in front of main door of house with placing her palms on her hips..nd aliey nd aditya sitting near sofa...maanvi nd jeevika bussy in kitchen while vanshika nd kadambari chachi sitting in hall..observing this trio kids..
P-marking left nd right..pouting qutly-uffo...ye bale papa aa gaye..letin papa ko to time ka kuch tiyal hi ni...
Adi-khyaal piyu..khyaal..
P-vahi naa bhai..aap samaj gai naa bashhh..
Aliey-hehehe...
Vanshika nd kadambari also giggling at their antics...
Aliey-arey koi kaam hoga naa...chhotimumma ne bataya to...late ho jayega...
P-alley...di..pal kitna let...see...agal time pe ni aye to dinal ni milega naa...bale daddu ke tul..
Adi-tul nahi rule..rule piyu..
P-haa haa rule..thik hai ab?
Adi-yes..
P-uffo..pula bali mumma hai...
All laughed..
Aliey-yes right..pura mumma jaisa hi hai..right wrong hi karta raheta hai..
Aditya abt to say something but stop as they hear virats voice from door..
V-kon right aur wrong hai...
Nd he entered in house..
As kids hear his voice they turned nd run towards him...
Aliey nd adi-chachuuu...
P-papa...
Virat go on his knees nd taook them all in his hug..
V-aww my kid party...missing me haa?
All kids-yes...
All come out from hug...
P-papa..main kab se waiting naa...
V-aww my bachcha...papa traffic me fas gaye the...
He said with placing kiss on her cheeks...
P-ohhh...
V-kiss on adi nd alliey's cheeks-nd aap logo ka school kaisa tha aaj?
Adi-bahot achcha...
Aliey-meri frinds ke saath bahot khela..
V-great..
Vm-come near them..
P-papa...chalo..
She abt to drag him with her but vanshika come there..
Vm-piyu beta papa thak gaye honge..unhe fresh ho jane do pahele..
P-become little sad..
V-its ok mom...halo bachcho mere saath mere room me..sab ke liye chhochlates hai..
Kids-yeey..ie...
Vm-okay..lekin jaldi aa jana... Dinner time ho raha hai...
V-ji mom..
V-to kids-chalo...
Nd he took kids upstairs with him..
V-to vm from stairs-mom..
Vm-haa?
V-plz maanvi ko room me bhej do...
Vm-okay..
V-turned towards srtairs again but cannt walk as all kids stood infront of him with crossing hands nd smiling..
V-kya?
P-papaaa...
Adi-chaachuuu
aliey-ditooo...
V-hey hey..kya hua?
P-mumma ko...h...mmm...?
V-oh just shut up...chalo...
Nd he unwantedly blush nd took them with him..
Here vanshika told maanvi abt virat...maanvi finish her work quickly nd walk towards their room..
In room virat gve chochlates to kids nd told them to play he just come in few minutes after change..
Maanvi also entered in room when he was in wasroom..
She ask kids abt him..they told that he is changing..maanvi make them go down stairs nd play in hall..
Kids first refuse but then get agree as maanvi use her trickes...
She is waiting for him in room when she hear sound of door opening...
She truned towards door..nd found his standing shirtless..only in his trousers...
Edited by Niaksharma - 11 years ago
Niaksharma thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
PART-228
:
she is just adjusting nd cleaning bed which is mess up bcxz of kids..she just doing her work when she hear sound of door unlocking..she turned nd found her too handsome nd noughty husband stood at wasroom door with holding noughty smirk on his face...he only wearing his track pent..his upper boddy is naked but..one towel hanning around his neck..he wiping his face..
Maanvi smile at him nd shook her head...she place last pillow on there place nd than walk towards wardrobe with complaining innocently..
M-virat...tumhe kitni baat bola hai..
Nd she open wardrobe..while he smirk more nd walk behind her...
M-continue..looking for t-shirt..innocently-fir bhi bachcho ki tarah sab yaad dilana padta hai...upni t-shirt saath leke jaya karo..
With this she took his blue t-shirt nd just turned to move but stopped...actully hit with him as he is stood too close to her..
..
M-as she sudden bumped with him she loudly-uhff...virattt...dara diya...
V-as she bupped with him her protectivly move his arms around her waist nd hold near him-i love u..he said with just adoring her nd with full of love nd passion...
M-smile nd forget everything-virat kya hua?
V-pata nahi but tumse pyar karte rahena chahta hu..all time tumhare karib rahena chahta hu..apni baho me rakhna chahta hu..pemper karna chahta hu..special feel karva chahti whole time..just mere samne raho..
He said in full romentic way nd pull her close...
M-as always lost in his words..she become sudden shy..she press her lips togather as virat starts coming close to her face..both almost hiding in cupbord's door..
Virat love to see her shyness..he very well know that his wife is still that pure nd innocent...
M-pull herself back as his face learning close to her...gluped..holding t-shirt in one hand nd hands on his chest..whisper with blushing..-virat plz..bandh karo ye gharna..nd t-shirt pahenlo..
V-smirk-sure..lekin pahenaogi tum..
M-kyu?
V-kyuki mere haath free nhi...meri jaan hai...use nhi chhod sakta...
M-just shook her head nd with one hand she remove his towel..with this he pul her more close nd go near her face...
M-virat ab t
she abt to say but stop as his lips capture her lips..
She close her eyes nd taken back with his sdden kiss..she try to speak nd pussh him back..
M-vi..ummm..amm.muhuu...vi..vi..virat...
V-testing..as she try to pull back nd pussing he move his one hanf nd hold her head from back nd prevent her action..
Dont know whsat get charge on him...he want her loving all time...
With her carzt action she also cannt hold her sense for long time...she starts getting lose in this passion..his 2-shirt fall from her hand nd she hold his sholder for suppport as his act making her num nd dizzy..
He smirk during kissing her as he felt her relaxing nd supporting equally...he pinned her more behind..both r hidden under cupboards open door..
After few minutes..
Mummma.aa...
Papa...,,.
They heard angelic sweet innocent voice comming sorry runing near them..
Both aparted imigeatly..
Maanvi adjust her saari nd hear while virat pull back with wiping his lips nd winked at maanvi woh blushing..
Just than thheir princess entered in room...
P-innocently...entered in room with strome nd stop in front of them...looking at maanvi nd virat she place her hands on her hips cutly..froen cuted-alley.??..ye kya papa...aaj fil aapne kappe ni pene...??...baby main hoon ki aap..?...humm?
Maanvi smile nd pick up that t-shirt from floor nd look at virat woh walk near payal...
V-walk near payal nd picked her in his arms nd make her stood on bed-awww...woh kya hai naa my piyu...aapki mumma mujhe pahenne hi nahi deti...
He complained...
M-her mouth open with this...
P-look at maanvi with cute ecpression-kyu mumma?
M-walk near them..now both standing in front of payal-bachcha...mumma kabhi mana nahi karti...ye aap ke papa ko manners nahi hai...
She said while brsing her hairs lovingly..
P-to v-papa..ye gande melans hai...pata hai..tu tu girls hai yaha..
V-reall?...try to not lagh..
P-yes...now goody goody boy bano aul pen lo...ok...
She said proudly like she is more mature nd responcible person...
V-ok ok...jo hukum my bachcha...
P-hehehe...
M-smile nd shook her head...just than she remember-oh no..
V nd p both-kya hua?
M-kya hua k bachcho...ye gap sap me dinner time nikal jayega..chalo jaldi se niche aao main ja rahi hu...
P-hehehe...mumma...main to aap do ki bachchi hu naa...
V-aww...my smart bachcha...nd kiss her cheeks...i love u smirty...
P-hug nd kiss him also on his cheek-main bi lub u papa...
M-uffo...piyu..
P-haa mumma...main aapko bi love u...come...hug us...come...
M-hug her nd kiss her cheek-i love u too my bachcha...
V-i love my family more...
Nd all laughed...
M-pull back-piyu..bachcha...papa ko manner shikhao nd ye t-shirt wear karvake dinnner k liye le aao jaldi se okay..main khaana lagati hu..
P-proudly-yes mumma main kal dungi...
M-good
nd hurriedly left..
P-cutly-papa...


Edited by Niaksharma - 11 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: MidnightLibrary

11 months ago

Rishtey the Bond of marriage (new chapter) Rishtey the Bond of marriage (new chapter)

Chapter : Melodious Encounter https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/52348

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Koeli

5 years ago

Comment Migration Request Thread #1

Hey guys, This is the place where you can request for comment migration. Please know that FFEs are going to migrate your comments. Rules - You...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish

6 years ago

Kassir ...Sujal&Kashish...Part 28 - Pg 33

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".