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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kritikasoni

superb updateawww reyam worried for taani now waiting for their reaction after seeing her faceplz update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Natasha.

This sultan is getting on my nerves, I can't wait for Tanya to finish him off
Aww Reyam is only worrying for their Taani, that was so sweet of them
Tanya killing all those jerks was awesome
Finally the gang saw Tanya face, I can't wait to know their reaction
Lovely update

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: premlata

Wow awesome update

Taani fight with sultan man... Nice
Now gang reconaging Taani
Update soon excited for next update

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Bista-anzana

First of oll Thnkeww NAVK (Sorry i dunno urs real name ) for PMing me dis story.. Its toltally different.. Lubd Taani's new avtar.. But still m in delima... U noe m amazed hw u got dis idea its superb.. Lubd taarey.. Swayam possesive mode haha dis really suits him.. Sharey bond superbb taanyam cute sibbling.. But hw cme swayam dun noe abt taani being officer nd too abt his father whom taani hd shot.. Taani a fighter lubd it. really so eager for further chapz.. Updte soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jallwa_taarey


OKAY OKAY OKAY
Why are you scaring me


u update so late...isliye darana padega 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting...for ur update dear
N nw if u dont update soon na yeh jo 😃 hai 😡 is mai badal jayega
Understand??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 5

The gang saw her and they got the biggest shock of their life, specially reyam.

Everything stopped for them.

Reyam who was praying for her sis/gf life, that sis/gf is here fighting for their life.(guys I just want to right what is happening not)

When everyone saw her they say in shock "TAANI", they gang tried to go to her but were stopped by the other men. Tanya looks at them in a worried way, shaking her head as "NO PLEASE". The gang understood and stayed quite but sultan smirked because sultan first time sow a scared Tanya and he really loved it. Tanya was trying to free herself from the two men hands but the next min she felt a slap on her cheek and her lips started bleeding, it was sultan who slapped her. Sultan started laughing looking at her helplessness

By seeing him, her blood started boiling in anger and sultan gave a smirk to her which made her angrier.

Sultan- ehhh agaye tuu ...mene sochata kitu darke mare bagayee...lekin tumto

Tanya (in very angry voice)- me tum jese insaan se na darti hu or na bagti hu... tujese insaan ko me kuto wali motdeti hu... (She gets another slap, she gave a smirk which made sultan angry) kya huwa darr gaya ki tum sach me kutoki mot dungee...haa me yahi karongg ..vesehi jese mene tumare bhai ke sath keyatha (sultan grabs her hair and throws her on the ground. She touches her bleeding lips and see blood) ehh tuje yaad hai kistara mene use marata...(sultan took his gun out and pointed it to her head) yee (the gun) mebi nikal sakta hu or tumpe chala sakta hu lekin...tune kahata naa ki agar mene maa ka dood pyahe tere samne ow...me to agaya...abb tu bata ki tune maa ka dood piya hai ...ya kya tu ek mard bi hai

Sultan throws his gun away and moved back- acha auto (she got up) kell ab khatam hoga

Tanya(smirks)- haa khatam to hoga (she comes in her fighting passion) agar tum 5 bar girgaye to tum in sabko chordoge ...lekin agar me girgayee to mari mott tere hath me hai

Sultan(smirks)- itna yakeen hai apne appar

Tanya- muje mere bagwan pe yakeen hai, muje unlogo pe yakeen hai jo mujpe yakeen rakte hai (looking at the gang) muje apne kasmo pe yakeen hai jo mene leye hai...

Sultan got angry on her reply. They both looked at each other angrily.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MCoH4FVgi7M

(just see some moves and see those parts where the man is saving himself from falling)

(falling number)

Tanya-1

Sultan- 1

Tanya -1

Sultan -1

Tanya -1

sultan-1

Tanya-1

Sultan- 1

Sultan was bleeding from head and his hand was hurting, Tanya was bleeding from her mouth, nose and from her forehead.

Sultan- ajj to tum mere hathose gaye Tanya

Tanya- i promise you sultan jin masumoke jaanne liye hai tumne vahe jaga tuje tume gooma wungee kutto ki tara

Sultan got angry and moved fast to her (see in the video from 1.58 to 2.45)(it is happening in the collage don't forget) some of the men were coming in but Tanya knocked them down

Finally sultan was out (he didn't die, he fainted). Tanya was breathing to relax herself but then she remembered the students and also she checked the time, the 30 min were almost over and she knew the officers must be coming in soon. Tanya ran to the students and shouted at them.

Tanya- GET OUT QUICK ...GO MY OFFICERS WILL BE THERE GO ...QUICK GO (the students were running to save their life's but the gang specially reyam were looking at her state)

Tanya was pushing them out but then she felt a pair of hand on her hand, she looked up and saw it was rey who was holding her hand, and from his face it clearly shows pain and wordiness and also questions which she would have to answer very soon. Before rey could do anything else they here a door opening and saw her officer were coming in and helping the students to get out. Tanya leaves him and he went out leaving Tanya inside. Some officers took the students out and some went inside to arrest the people.

The ambulance came and some other police cars and vans. The officers took the men and putted some in the vans but sultan in a separate one. Tanya was inside to check if everything else was alright or not, one of the officers told the doctor that Tanya has been injured so go inside and also the officers told the student to go inside and get your belongings. The gang and the other students as well as the teachers moved inside.

The gang ran inside because taani was there and the wanted some answers from her.

They went inside and saw taani who had a big plaster on her head and she was applying cream on the side of her lips, where it was bleeding. She was going to bandage her hand but when she saw the gang she stopped and stood up from her place. Swayam had teary eyes; he walked up to her and took the bandage and made her sit and sat himself next to her he took her hand and stared bandaging her hand while the other came close to them two.

Taani and swayam were teary.

Swayam (soft tone)- yee sab kya hai taani...(taani was silent)..bolo taani

Taani- bhai this my job...

Rey (with teary eyes)- yee kesa job hai ..jo tumne hume nahi bataya

Swayam- kya ye batana zaruri nahi that you are working ..something...some..some job which makes your condition like this..huu... why didn't you tell me this

Taani- bhai wo me_ _ _ (she got cut off by some reporters who were with their cameras...she was shocked, some reporters took her pictures with the gang, and that made her more worried , she got up and started to push the reports while her officers helped him. The made the gang and other people around them confused) GET OUT... STOP TAKING PICTURES...I SAID STOP...GET OUT

The officers and taani took the reporters, just then another officer came and said "ma'am captain ka call" gives the phone to her her.

Taani (on the phone)- hello sir

Captain- haa Tanya came back i have a surprise for you

Taani (smiles)- captain app muje is time me surprise dena chate ho

Saptain- well not only you but someone else too

Taani- as in who else

Captain- surprise hai so leave it as a surprise...don't use your smart brain for that okay or you'll ruin it

Taani (smile)- okay captain as you say bye see you soon

The cut the call and she turns around she sees the gang.

Taani (normal way)- guys ghar jow we will talk tomorrow

Swayam (a bit angry)- itna sabb hogaya hai or tum normal ho...(holds her from shoulders) batow taani yee ..tumara fight ...sultan..revenge...tanya..FBI...what is all this huu batow taani muje answers chahiye...(shakes her) batow muje taani

Taani- bhai please yaha nahi ...hum ghar jake baat karenge...i will tell you everything but not here but not today i need to go somewhere will come home tomorrow... muje kuch kaam hai okay ...bye (she goes)

Leaving the gang with some questions which were not answered today, they went home to give their brains a little rest and solve everything out but one thing they were clear about was that taani isn't a normal person.

Swayam went and changed his clothes but didn't button up his t- shirt and sat on his bed all frustrated, he was thinking about his little sister, the sister that saved him, the sister who he was praying for her life. His thoughts were broken when he heard the door bell. He quickly rushed to open the door, he thought that maybe it was taani, but when he opened the door he saw Sharon standing with a sympathy look. He didn't say anything but let a way for her to get in; she went in the living room and was followed by swayam. When Sharon saw him in this state, she just ran and hug him which made him take some steps back because of the sudden hug. She hugged him tightly so did swayam; he started to get tear in his eyes not because it was taani or Sharon but because today both of his dear love ones were in danger, they both could have been killed but he couldn't do anything to save them. He felt like he have failed as a brother but even failed as a lover (BF).

Swayam (still hugging and crying) - Sharon am sorry...I didn't do anything to save you... am a useless person...you deserve better than me

Sharon (brakes the hug and cups his face)- no swayam you can't say like that... you were helpless because if you even did anything then something could of happen... you saved me because you didn't let your emotions over take you... because in emotion you could have died and i would have- - - (cut off)

She couldn't complete her sentence because her lips were shaped up with swayam's. He didn't want her to say all those words. He just wanted to take all those thought out of her mind and maybe this was the way by taking all the oxygen from her body. They both started having difficulties to breath so they broke the kiss to take oxygen. They looked at each other Sharon was blushing and looked down, she just hugged him tightly so did swayam.

Scene shift to Tanya

In the conference room, captain was waiting for Tanya. Soon he saw Tanya coming in.

Captain (smiles at her)- well done Tanya ...

Tanya- thank you captain...well what was the surprise

Captain- well it's in your cabin...go have a look

Tanya- okay (she goes)

Here in her cabin, she sees a man standing, he was tall, macula, and from the back he looked good...the guy turned and had a big smile on his face seeing Tanya. Here Tanya ran to him and gave him a tight hug, he also did.

Tanya and guy (still hugging)- this is the best surprise

They broke the hug and Tanya says "am sooo happy Jai that you have came back (looks around) but where are the others"

Jai smiles and says "they will come soon"

They chit chatted, had fun and were talking about their gang and lots.

Here with rey

Rey was in the washroom, he wasn't wearing a shirt but he was keep on washing his face because he didn't want to remembered what happened in collage. He keeps on getting flash backs of taani as Tanya.

Rey- i have always been with her..so..so how come i never knew about her...(remembering sultans words "FBI Tanya" (splashes water on his face) "powerful agent" (splashes again).. "strong fighter" (again splash)... "bekasur or masumo ko bachan keliye kuch bi karsakti hai") ) wo kuch galat nah karahi hai...kuch bi nahi to humse chupaya kyu (bangs his hand on the wall) dam it !!!

The gang were thinking the same.

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precap

pictures of taarey and gang together on the news
Swayam(shout)- Behen hai WO mery ...taani shikawat is my sister'...
Edited by jallwa_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeppiii...me fist in this ff also...
Amazing update...
Sultan slapped tanya...😡
Tanya n sultan's fight...
Sultan in jail...wow!!
He deserve tht place...😆
Reyam so worried for taani...
Waiting to see taani's answers...
Whn gang will ask her questions...
Tanya having her own team...
Thts nyc...
Precap is very interesting...
Plzzz update nxt part soon... :-)

Edited by _PanCake_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update

fight sequence was superb
reyam were sso concern for taani
reporters took gang n tanya pics
tanya having a team interesting

precap was interesting update it soon
Edited by princess_tara - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
fight is super
reyam are soo worried for her
rey have so many qus
precap is intresting
update soon

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