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Posted: 11 years ago
Res 1 😲
Hmm...

Seduction

Res 1
Hmm...

Banner is lovely ...looks like with the progress and revelations in the story the banner is becoming clearer...! Well done Heaven!,⭐️

Juhi, I loved it, thanks for that clarification it clears up a lot, but it is slightly unfair for Khushi but at least makes for good fiction!
A devious, murderer even while dying chooses to unjustly curses an innocent person and now that innocent person has to live a life far beyond her life ! Trapped !

Shyam was seduced by his sister in law without any help and encouragement from her instead she was happy for payal and never asked for this...

I thought she might have been a ghost but then thought a ghost seen by all left me in doubt! So she lives in that painting and has no control over it ? At a slight hint of happiness and emotions she is pulled back into her prison . Not knowing when she will once again be released.

So once she is out of the painting till she goes back into it again she can lead a life as a normal person ? Eat, drink, touch and is visible!
Any happiness and joy she feels she goes back into the painting basically imprisoning her in totality, away from every chance of happiness.
At least the loss of the daughter gave her a mother in Garima in Garima's last few years and Garima was privy to her secret.

What I find unfortunate is that a person who is been good and and kind her whole life is cursed by an evil and selfish woman! I can't wait to see your treatment and solution for this issue and how you will take it forward. What I know is that it will be nothing short of brilliant.

So how did she come to find her abode in this painting ? What happens if this painting was to be destroyed? I like the way you have connected on the dots with all the references in the past and the to past. I feel I can sympathise with them that when they find happiness and love the are saddled with such a situation!
Your wonderful descriptive writing makes me realise and feel their pain and frustration and helplessness of the situation!

It is no wonder then she understands his pain, suffering and guilt for something he has not done but yet has to face the consequences she is in the same boat.
Believing the truth now that he has been a witness engulfs him and takes away chances of any normalcy and a future not believing her is no longer an option. So what now?
Maybe all the good she has done finally pays off and another dying person blesses her with happiness to finally free her ?

What is that object he finds ? Mannat ka Chabbi? Or her ghungroos?
Or maybe even veil she made with love for her sister ? Ironically ?

I love how Shyam and Sheetal play vital roles here. I love the connection to history with respect to the ownership of Sheesh Mahal.

I cannot wait for the next part...
Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Seduction has indeed left me stunned.

How do I begin with what I felt as I was reading this chapter? Words come gushing out of me for which I hold no control, for there's so much to be said and so much felt after reading this one.

A genre that goes by the name of supernatural is as mystic as it is fascinating; the secrets and the facts that are shrouded gives it an aura that sure leaves all readers spellbound alike.

But not all stories of this genre restrict themselves to being on the right of goodness and this was showed how much poignant a tale that combines the supernatural with your style of writing could be.

Sibling rivalry and the hatred that arises out of it is not new to us; time and again tales have shown how hatred which is the development of the rivalry ultimately plays a role in causing harm to the righteous person. But then we have also been known to expect that goodness prevails at the end. This tale however begs to differ from that.

I could understand Payal's animosity towards Khushi and the extreme steps which she took as a result of that. So far, acceptable. What baffles me however is the power she exhibited. After all we have always been fed upon the fact that it is only the person who himself is above all and devoid of any sin or wrong doing can place a curse. Then how can a woman who is spurned by her fianc posses the power to curse an innocent woman? And by what right? I'm sure there must be something to it which is to be explained, but I must say that it baffles me.

Khushi...through fan fictions we have seen various attributes to her but this one just races ahead. A woman who has seen misery through the death of her parents and then the adopted ones and has only been subjected to hatred and then indifference could only get worse after having been at the receiving end of a curse for something she didn't even do. Could she have been any more wronged? The answer is a plain and an immediate no.

Knowing about her past makes me feel as though Arnav and Khushi are kindred spirits, but it only continues till the happening that life has meted out on them. Or if I were to delve into it, I could say that since their lives have crossed each other, what lies in store for them irrespective or Arnav's decision is bound to lead them to the same path...that of despondency and heartbreak.

The fact that Khushi is bound by her painting is so surreal; it just takes the supernatural element to another level. She is indeed helpless by the singular curse that changes her life forever; the immortality is something she has accepted after so long but the entrapment brought about by the projection of her own form couldn't have been any more potent in its effect.

What remains to be seen is how things proceed from here on. Arnav's acceptance of the bitter truth seems so puny after having known about it entirely. We still don't know how innocence can dare and break away the curse or if the words will ever be deduced in the way they were meant.

One doubt though...what happens if the painting is destroyed? And I would like to know about this in both scenarios; that when Khushi enters into it and when she is out if it. I would so want for the destruction of the painting to be the simple solution...but I know you well.

And because I know you well, I know that things are a long way from being any simple than from how they are at present.

A wonderful chapter and one that has truly left me speechless. Kudos to you, Juhi for this extremely enthralling tale. Congrats to TG as well; she has done the unthinkable!

Edited by Eccentrica - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dearest Juju,

I am so so in awe of this chapter, of your beautiful writing, of your genius mind, of the HP phanki you are...I wish you could feel how I feel right now because words as always wont do justice. I feel way too overwhelmed to come up with anything remotely coherent, even after days and re-reads.

How do you do it?
Every single time, you write an "interlude"?
How do you keep me on the edge of my seat?

Crying...for a girl who did NOTHING WRONG. A girl who had already suffered enough, to be cursed in such a terrible way. A girl who just wanted to love, is dished out such intense nafrat? And now I cant help root for Arnav to find a cure to the curse. To love her, like she is meant to a century ago. To be the prince charming, forever ever and ever. She deserves no less.

And I thought I didn't do fairy tales or fantasy?! I thought I was too practical for all this...

But as always if someone can change my mind, about anything in life, its you. You have already done it once (you know when...), this is the second time.

"Baat sach ya jooth ki nahi hai, baat yakeen ki hai"

And that is EXACTLY what you did.

You took my breath away, the moment you described Kay the mistress. Is this how Arnav must feel every SINGLE time he looks at Kay?!

ps. EFFING ASLI DUNIYA. I will have to edit later. I want to cry right now.

pps. I am in love with you. Meera will have to fight me. Bas.



Edited by LooneyLuna - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finalllyyy! Wooohooo
Edited!

⭐️
Firstly, congrats to the guessing team...I think it was mem1's guess right?
In fact, this is the first time I am reading something of this genre. I've read about this only in fairy tales & of course historical tales but never knew that I would ever get to read something of this sort, here on the forum You indeed are a brilliant writer👏

Jealousy was the main point of hatred towards khushi for payal. She was jealous that she not being a gupta got everything more than her. Be it her looks, her skills & talents & even her fiance! She died but cursed khushi for her lifetime. But I am sure there must be something...or I wonder if there is some missing piece to it. I mean there must be a way to come out of the curse! I am believing in you for giving a happy ArHi ending!

You are A-H-M-A-Z-I-N-G, bas!😃
Edited by dj_arshifan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
JESUS CHRIST. HOW DO I EVEN? THIS IS SO CRAZY AND SO COOL AND JUST GAVE ME SO MANY DHAK-DHAKS, I CAN'T EVEN.

I HAD THIS CRAZY FEELING OF FOREBODING AS I WAS READING THROUGH THE PAST AND OHMYGOD, I AM FREAKING OUT.

THIS IS SUCH AN INSANE SITUATION. HYPERVENTILATING HEER.

I'LL BE BACK WITH MORE.
Edited by Semanti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Juhi, maar dalne ka iraada hai kya? You always leave us with these cliffhangers. OK, so please tell us this secret. which is so much stranger than fiction that Arnav is not believing her.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Me n u baby!
On the SAME page!
Now I dont care about missing 1st,2nd or 3rd res. bas.



OH This post is to say how AMAZING this story Seduction is. Love it!

Edited by LooneyLuna - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LooneyLuna


Me n u baby!
On the SAME page!
Now I dont care about missing 1st,2nd or 3rd res. bas.



OH This post is to say how AMAZING this story Seduction is. Love it!


HIGH FIVE!

It's been a while, Lunes.

P.S. I am so seduced by Seduction, the boys in my mohalla have no chance.
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...what a tale...khushi imprisoned by a curse ..can arnav's love bring her back in to present
Edited by ranogill - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
unres!

whoa!!! i cannot comprehend to form a coherent sentence after completing the update! Stunned, i am !

the theme that u have applied to it is worth taking a bow!!!
what interests me now more is to think about the future track. what are u gonna give us? another shocker or a respite?
loved the update, the history of Sheesh Mahal is again tainted, and KKG was the real owner!
and Payal--- her hatred is the curse that poor khushi is carrying in her life through centuries.

and she had already known Arnav in his teens! of course!

but what now??? r we going to have Khushi come back in the next update? i guess yes!
and i guess Arnav will help Khush to break her curse. but what will Khushi be after a century? will she be the same or will she be in a danger?

also what is the 4th line of the curse? is it a solution to the curse that payal cannot utter while dying or it that too a curse which she wanted to add in the already list but died before that? will it be her freedom from the curse?

and what has Arnav picked up in the end that had let to his breakdown?
just too many question Juhi. ❓
and the update was superb one.👏
u r a brilliant writer and a story-teller!!!⭐️

waiting for ur next update eagerly!!!
Edited by celinawalter - 11 years ago

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