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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Hi Shiza!! I was actually waiting for a new story by you! I'm glad that you've posted it now instead of later! 😃

The prologue is very intriguing. At first when you said that it was going to be on marital abuse, I was afraid that Arnav was going to be portrayed as the abusive husband. But t'm relieved that it's some Neel and Arnav is actually the savior!

Thank you so much for portraying it that way!

They both have a past. I'm really really curious to know of it. I'm speculating alot on who the S could be. Arnav had been married, I presume. Or maybe loved immensely and lost? Not sure, so I'll wait for you to reveal it later on..:D

Love the way you described the dark, eerie night, with Khushi mingling with the trees' shadows so as to stay hidden from whom she was running away from. Her pain and helplessness were so poignant. I feel for her. It's really a sad state of affairs.

Poor Arnav has also had his share of unhappiness, which severs his emotions, hence the indifference. But beneath the hard exterior, he has such a pure heart, clearly shown when he asked about the baby.

Loved it when it was him who dropped Khushi off at the airport. No questions asked, but did what he deemed fit, knowing that she had contacted her family for help.

All in all, I'm really excited to read this wonderful story. I can't wait to see how things unfold, and how fate will conspire to make Arnav & Khushi meet.

Loved it! Looking forward to chapter 1! :)

Thanks for the PM!

-Divya

Edited by .sobtian. - 11 years ago

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khusiarnav

@khusiarnav

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Hey there, I think I res one post but i could not find the spot so here it goes...

I know i have a long overdue of comments from other FF too... but will do that in another post (somewhere else) where it rightfully belongs!! 😃

And now... tight hug!! 🤗 A new FF??!?!? Wow.. Just wow

The prologue was very very interesting and needless to say I have already fell "hook, line, and sinker" for the new story!! will be waiting desperately for story to begin dear... update soon!! will you be continuing it on a blog??

One thing I wanted to say when I read your note dear. "You dont have to explain yourself or give us any reasons, hint for the story dear!!"

we are here for another FF means that we trust you and your writing!! 😃

keep up the amazing work!! 👍🏼

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

A very intense prologue... I usually tend to stay away from stories on such sensitive topics because they push me into a very unhappy place... I know for a fact that this is going to a brilliant piece of work because I have read your earlier work, I just hope I am strong enough to stick with it till the end...!

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meem17

@meem17

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Wow...what an interesting start
Cant wait for the story to move forword

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

It is funny how men who indulge in physical abuse put the blame on their woman.

Neel hit at Khushi because she shouted at him.

It was her fault.

Of course how can it be the man's fault.

He was a poor unassuming guy, who was forced by Khushi to hit her.

And the poor girl wallowed in guilt.

I do hope Aman got him sent to prison.

As if the poor girl hasn't suffered enough, now her business too hasn't worked out.

Now she will of course work for Arnav.

But they both didn't see each other that night.

So, how will they recognise each other?

Hope they will, one day.

Waiting now for the next chapter.

This is one great story.

You deserve all the praise for writing it.

Edited by 1chilly - 11 years ago

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

I am really, really looking forward to this - I see this as a journey of Khushi healing and Arnav healing...maybe helping each other at some point on the way.

Neel was...I have no words. No matter how bad it might be for Khushi right now, she did well to be rid of him!

Does Arnav know who Khushi is? I mean that he rescued her and helped her that night...?

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

well written update..👍🏼

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

So Arnav has loved and lost. Since this chapter didn't get a proper closure, i think this will come up again later when Arnav and Khushi are together.

I really liked the friendship between Aman and Arnav.

So Arnav doesn't know that the girl who he helped is Aman's sister.

Sarah is adorable.

Is Arnav buying Khushi's cafe?

Her past has shaped up who she is now. I admire her for how she wants to take her life forward. Her reaction is positive. Many people give up after being in such a bad relationship. Glad that she's being strong and independent.

It's great that Khushi is seeking help. She is addressing the issues instead of living in ignorance.

What i really liked about Choices and this story is that in both, you make the character address their issues. You talk about them openly. It drags the story but i prefer it this way. Helps me understand the characters better and it gives the story a realistic touch.

Well written.

Edited by IronButterfly - 11 years ago