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Posted: 11 years ago
This is awesome...
The story is getting intresting with each update...N REGULAR WEEKLY update makes it much more worth reading...:)
hope u'll continue with schedule of weekly update...
Coming towards chapter:
sarah's bonding with everyone is just adorable n simply cuttte...She is sweetheart...
N Her fuss on wearing a mcthing drees n shoes reminded me of my little cousin Momina...She is simply like Sarah excluding Mr.Ellie...:)...Always fussing over wearing clothes of her choice...
Khushi's warning to Sarah before going into offic made me grin...N encounter with Raizada was awesome...
So Apparently they both have some issue with each other,,,Arnav has more n Khushi has some less issue...:)
Arnav's bitter words..uufff...This Arrogant man doesnt think before speaking...He accused Khushi of her failed marriage,,main cause of failure According to him is Financial crisis...uuufff...I m wondering what he would do when He will come to know of the real truth...I m sure, only then he will find his misery very little as compared to hell Khushi had to suffer...
So Khushi n Kinjal share a loving n comfortable bond with each other...I love their chat over a certain Raizada...:)
thankkkuu soo much for pm...
Waiting for next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just can't decided which bit i liked the most
I'm loving the back story of these characters very much

So Arnav was about to get married and the girl left him, so he's been through major betrayal and So has Khushi...

Ouch at their first meeting, something must've happened hence Arnav became rude towards Khushi

and aww Sarah and Mr Elie are just too cute

Hopefully she'll accept the job 😆


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Posted: 11 years ago
Chap 2 -Amazing update...Loved cute Sarah & her Mr.Ellie
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really nice update. I like the way you describe the human behaviour and thoughts. HOw cruel of Arnav to judge and treat Khushi thus. Why was he so mean? Sarah is a sweetheart :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
with or without you chapter 3<3

Finally today I have been catching up with all the updates by u and others<3

I LOVED THIS UPDATE! It won't be wrong if I say MY FAVORITE update so far<3

Yes because all I was dying for finally happened<3 ArHi meeting<3 ArAh(ArnavSarah) meeting <3 what a beautiful update<3 now when I'm typing this comment, I have already read this update 3 times<3

If last week we got the zebra plant this update we got the mix-match of the shoe and Sarah's dress , the comment khushi threw about sometimes mix match is better here she was talking about herself, for her neel was perfect (well what she thougth) for her they were 'meant for each other' but instead it went upside down! N thn with Arnav's entry one thing was proved both had a crush/ attraction on each other ! But seems like Arnav's arrogance turned her off n that's how opposite attract for her was turned down. N now her mix match comment some how may make her think how sometimes opposite attract is better thn 'perfect2' as sometimes perfection can lie where oppositions honesty is atleast better.

Now coming to arhi meeting as expected volcano meets tornado.
If khushi's crush could have been a small one but seems like Arnav's attraction for khushi may have been strong n something may have happened that turned him so harsh towards her that is still visible. His words were harsh but truth has to be said to her because deep inside she still believes she should have stayed with neel a bit more maybe she could have changed him n tha is because no one has guts to tell her the truth that her stupidity is what caused her all this n Arnav is the one who will make her face the truth and realize it n break the wall she built n stand by her as a new pillar of faith and new beginning.

Arnav's word already started to hit her that she was close to break down but her ray of hope stepped forward reminding her that now she has her light and will not let it blow<3
N thn entered Arnav n first thing he noticed was his future ray of hope<3
She did something that has been impossible <3 a soft side of Arnav<3 n they already clicked which for Sarah too is also not new<3

Loved kinjal n khushi's convo <3 loved how khushi started knowing who Arnav actually is and how he too is just another her... Failed in love , well love is what they think which doubt of ever was there for samara n neel. I know samara had reasons but I still doubt if it was love from Arnav's side...


I'm confused with aman n Arnav's convo... Samara moved on ? N has a child?


Anyways I am excited for more<3 can't wait to see how she accepts the offer n ofc more thn arhi I'm excited for more of Sarah<3

Love you shiz for always making me so lost of words n forcing me to actually write such long comments<3

I know I'm late but you know I'm not active ...
Love you
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved Sarah...so cute...Arnav and khushi convo was interesting...nice update...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just found this story!

A very heavy topic for sure so kudos for trying to build a story around this. This story can mirror the lives of thousands of girls in the world. This story does hit home for me quite a bit..I won't get into details but seeing Khushi struggles reminds me of someone in my life.

Arnav singh Raizada... I am so looking forward to how this character pans out. A very interesting situation...the man khushi married wanted her and the woman Arnav loved didn't want him

I would love to follow this story! I have sent a request!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Both have difficult pasts which often raises its head. Sarah's questions made Khushi again go back to her past and Samara having a child made Arnav do so. Good that he burnt everything so that he can move on.
Liked the understanding between Aman and Kinjal. After 1st meeting with Khushi, Anjali is on to her plans.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update👏
The first thought that came to my mind after reading this chapter is 'Life is not a bed of Roses'.

Everyone does face problems in their lives so what is important is how we face them and fight to have a peaceful life and it needs family support as well. .

Loved Aman and Kinjal's convo..

Looking forward for the story to unfold and eagerly waiting for Arnav-Sarah's 2nd meeting😳

Thanks for PM 😊
Edited by Stimmy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey nice story...
update sooner... loved it

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