Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19 - Page 35

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Thanks guys for liking the update and teaser... I will repeat...this is not at all a dream. ...thanks guys. ..keep commenting. ...will update on Monday



when will Monday come
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Posted: 11 years ago

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when will Monday come

Tomorrow dear...😉 ok I promise you will get update tomorrow by 10 am ist...
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Don't have any other option dear but will update tomorrow at 10 am...
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Posted: 11 years ago
when will u update next part dear????????????
can't wait...
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Originally posted by: saranyagulam

when will u update next part dear????????????

can't wait...

Thanks a lot dear but will update on Monday. ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Plz update next part soon i lov ashlok
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Tomorrow dear...😉 ok I promise you will get update tomorrow by 10 am ist...



thanks😃
will be waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
its monday still u r not updating the part 9?????
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saranyagulam

its monday still u r not updating the part 9?????


dear, i said by 10/...and just wait for a while...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part-9

Early in the morning, they all were dozing on the chairs, when Doctor came and said operation was successful... he will be fine now...

A smile appeared on their faces...

Only one person can see him at this time... Doctor declared when Kalindi went to see Avdhoot...

After some time, Kalindi came back...

How is baba, ayii... Astha asked...

Yet unconscious, but will be fine soon. Kalindi gave a faint smile...

Humm... Ok auntie, I should leave now. Shlok spoke...

No beta, not at all... Its Diwali today and just due to you, we will have happy Diwali... you can't...Kalindi spoke... Astha, beta. Shlok ko ghar le jayo kuch rest kar lega...

Ji ayii... saying she looked towards Shlok. Let's go...

Ok... Shlok spoke with a smile going with Astha...

When he got call form Varun and told him everything...It was night when, Avdhoot had got consciousness and kalindi also had been at home for Diwali Puja...

After Puja, Shlok touched her feet... auntie, I am celebrating Diwali after a couple of years... I had really forgot what a home can be...

Ye bhi tumhara hi ghar hai beta... Kalindi smiled blessing her...while Astha was still lost in her dreams getting more and more attracted towards Shlok...

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Time never stops for anyone and neither had it stopped for them...almost six months had passed...

They had entered into second semester, their friendship was same, their laugher, their enjoyment was same...even Shlok was same... but something changed was... Astha...she was now more caring for Shlok, his happiness. And more deeply in love with him... and he still unknown to what was happening around...

Sometimes Shlok was quite normal but sometimes quite possessive for Astha... Those moments, she loved as she felt how much he cares for her, how much he ...loves? This was a question yet...for her...

Both Gauri and Varun tried to make Astha understand... Astha, you are in love with wrong person, he can never love someone else... He has made a shield around himself which no one can break and enter and make him fall in love again...as they both had idea about his past by now that Shlok was completely heartbroken...

But Astha said... you know, I always say...I can love only once and I have loved from my side...remaining my luck...she smiled...

Ok, then why don't you go and tell him how much you love him? Gauri asked...

No, not at all. Astha replied immediately...

Because you fear, you will lose his friendship too na? Varun asked...

Astha lowered her eyes... Varun, let it go as it is... someday, some time, I will definitely get chance to tell him... I want for that day to come... Astha replied... Or maybe one day he himself will understand.

Ok leave yaar, its farewell party for second year. What are plans? Astha asked to change the topic...

Ya, I need to buy new dress. Gauri said...

Ya, I too...Astha too spoke. Let's go to market then...

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It was farewell party night, when Shlok and Varun came to pick the girls.. Both the girls were wearing beautiful dresses... When Shlok commented on Astha.. Can't you get proper clothes ever?

Yaar please don't start again...Astha spoke, I am in quite happy mod today...let me enjoy the day...

So may I know reason of your happiness? Shlok folded his arms on chest...

Yes, Baba is perfectly fine na , he got his job back... Astha jumped with joy...

So you may leave your evening job now? Shlok replied...

Shlok... why are you after my job always? I will not... Astha made a twisted face...

Ok baba... I was just trying... Maybe you agree now. He folded his hands. Let's go now... And are you sure, you will go in this dress only? I mean, its top is a bit deep necked and skirt is a bit short... He whispered...

Shlok... Shut up and lets go... Astha punched him while leaving...

They all had reached at Party and had a lot fun...when a problem occurred...

Liquor was not allowed at Party but some senior students had mixed it in cold drink...

Shlok had five glasses and Varun had four... Being non-drunkard, both were almost falling...

When Gauri asked Astha... Astha, you know driving na?

Yes of course, Gauri...

Ok, then I will leave Varun to hostel, you will drop Shlok at his home... he is not in condition to drive...

Ya, definitely I will take Shlok to his flat, but should I come back to pick you? Astha asked...

No, I will staying at his hostel only... these boys have made a mess of us as well enjoyment... Gauri grinned his teeth...

Ya, will see them tomorrow... Saying Astha wrapped her arm around Shlok and held him to the car...while he was singing infact shouting the song...

Niilaa Aasamaan So Gayaa

Niilaa Aasamaan So Gayaa

Shlok. Shut up.. Astha spoke irritatingly...

Shlok started singing in her ear... More loudly...

Os Barase Raat Bhiige Honth Tharraaye

DhaDakane Kuchh Kahanaa Chaahe Kah Nahiin Paaye

Astha made him sit in the car on passenger seat and fixed the belt... he was still shouting the same song again and again...and Astha drove towards his flat... She placed her hand on his mouth when they reached in the building. Shlok, chup kro, log jag jayenge...but he started speaking more loudly...

Ye Tanahaa_Ii, Ye Main Aur Tum

Zamiin Bhii Ho Gayii Gumasum

Niilaa Aasamaan So Gayaa

Niilaa Aasamaan So Gayaa

Somehow Astha brought her to his flat... she opened the gate and switched on the light. But there was no light..

oh demn... Light ko bhi abhi jana tha... Saying she closed the gate and went towards kitchen to take candle... She took the candle and lightened it coming back to Shlok... Shlok was half laying ideally on sofa singing same...

Merii Baahon Men Sharamaake Lajaake Aise Tum Aaye

Ki Jaise Baadalon Men Chaand Dhiire Dhiire Aa Jaaye

Havaa Kaa Giit Madhyam Hai

Samay Kii Chaal Bhii Kam Hai

Niilaa Aasamaan So Gayaa

Niilaa Aasamaan So Gayaa

When suddenly due to darkness, Astha's foot got stuck in the table and she fell on the sofa...but instead of touching the sofa, she was falling on Shlok... Candle had fallen on the floor still glowing, light had been quite dim in the room... Astha tried to get up but again fell on Shlok suddenly she felt Shlok's hand on her bare waist. She was surprised. Infact her top had raised a bit due to fall and Shlok had held her from waist, a sensation flew through Astha's body due to Shlok's first touch... She looked towards Shlok and was surprised... he was already lost into her... he had stopped singing and was continuously looking at her face...She could see raw desires in his eyes...she tried to get up but Shlok tightened grip on her waist pulling her more closer almost into himself...his hand was lost deep on her back under her top and he was rotating it in circles... Astha was losing her senses on his touch... when with one hand, Shlok tucked her hair falling on her face behind her ears caressing her face with the thumb and bring her face closer to him...

He slowly caressed her soft red rosy lips with his thumb ... She closed her eyes in pleasure...

Shlok... She whispered slowly making him crazy...Shlok placed a small kiss on corner of her lips...she opened her eyes and found her breath on her lips...

Soon Shlok was sucking her lips, first slowly, then a bit fast... and finally deeply...On getting breathless, Shlok broke the kiss... Astha opened her eyes and immediately got up from sofa...and stood a bit away breathless...

Shlok slowly stood up from sofa, trying to hold himself went near Astha and slowly placed his hand on her shoulder... His simple touch affected Astha a lot this time, she immediately turned and hugged Shlok tightly...

He slowly picked her face, looking into her eyes and started placing wet kisses on her face...Slowly while kissing...he started moving towards the bed nearby taking her with him. Astha was feeling so pleased unknown to what was going on...

Then Shlok slowly removed her earrings as he sucked on her earlobe, making Astha moan and slowly made her lie down on the bed as he came on top of her.

He started brushing his lips onto her red lips and taking them into a soft passionate torturing kiss. He sucked on her lower lip before meeting her tongue with his own. She let out a soft moan beneath the kiss making him wild.
He unbuttoned his shirt and couldn't control claiming her completely as he started kissing her moistly on her neck, he lowered one side of her top, exposing her cleavage as he licked there for long making her body shiver. He came down kissing her assets above her top, and down further to her milky bare stomach by slowly picking up her top, he rubbed his belly with his hard hands slowly in circles and nibbled on her belly button, giving moist open mouth kisses all over her stomach , leaving his love marks . with pleasure, she turned back shyly... Shlok started kissing on her waist on her back...slowly again he came up , he saw her eyes closed as her lips were curved into a smile which made him insane coz he was sure she was enjoying it , kissing all over her exposed area , he made her moans get louder n louder , digging her nails on to his back , Slowly Astha realized his hands were moving under her skirt. A sense of nervousness took over in her mind...

No.. Before this, I need to tell him...how much I love him... she thought in her mind... Slowly her hands reached his face from back picking above...

Shlok, I want to tell you something...

Humm. He spoke still placing wet open mouth kisses on her shoulders...

I Love you... She spoke softly... I love you from long but realized quite later...I can't live without you...

A smile appeared on his face. He slowly placed a kiss on her lips and spoke into her lips... I Love you too...Swati...

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