Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19 - Page 19

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

114.8k

Users

47

Likes

1.6k

Frequent Posters

AnjuRish thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 11 years ago
now her parents will come to know kyaa???
karwa chauth for shlok ???

jeez now shlok has caught himself and asthu in his web of lies
jeenia123 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

now her parents will come to know kyaa???

karwa chauth for shlok ???

jeez now shlok has caught himself and asthu in his web of lies


just wait till tomorrow dear.to get a number of answers...
MereMahiyaa. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
OMG awesomeee updateee yaaar <3
jeenia123 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

thanks a lot dear...
jeenia123 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

thanks a lot dear...
jeenia123 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .Siham.

OMG awesomeee updateee yaaar <3


thanks a lot dear...
jeenia123 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Part-6

Tomorrow is Karwa Chuath... Astha's first fast...please let her complete that here... Anjali folded her hands in front of Astha with tears...While they all were shocked...Astha was just speechless, internally se was feeling embarrassed as a motherly figure was folding hands in front of her but there was no change in shlok's expressions...she looked towards Shlok with a questioning look...he nodded no with his eyes...

No, not at all. Shlok spoke... I can't stay in this house, you know very well... he looked towards Anjali...

Infact auntie, we have exams just after Diwali and there are ten days only...so... We can't... Astha spoke...

No beta, no problem... you may leave day after tomorrow. I will not stop you... Anjali spoke...then she looked towards Shlok...Shlok, I know, whatever happened in past, we did wrong, and we are still sorry for that... But this time, we can modify... Shlok twisted his face away...while Astha was getting all emotional on Anjali's tears...Shlok , please, it's a matter of one day only...

But he didn't reply or looked towards Anjali, while Niranjan was standing at a distance looking at all this...

Then she held Astha's hands... Astha please, I beg you just one day... It will be years after our son will be at our home...she pleaded...

Astha sighed a long breath and spoke... ok auntie, but just one day...

All were shocked on her decision and most of all Shlok...he looked towards Astha and he knew she was an emotional fool...and was taken away by emotions of Mrs. Agnihotri...

He was left with no other option except to follow Astha at the moment but was feeling frustrated, was feeling like he himself was caught in his own trap...

Demn... He stamped his feet...finally spoke... But Astha, you don't have any essentials here...

No problem. You are at Agnihotri mention now, you will get everything here... Anjali caressed Astha's face with love and smile...

Finally Shlok had to send Varun and Gauri back but he was giving killer looks to Astha who had become so good bonding with Anjali within half an hour or it may be said. Anjali was very happy at Astha that she made her son stay at home after three years...

When A servant brought a number of bags and gave to Anjali... Mam, these bags are sent by your boutique...

Anjali smiled and handed bags to Astha. I am sorry Astha, I could arrange only these clothes at this hour of night... Tomorrow, we will go to market and you may purchase of your own choice...

No auntie, all these are not needed... I need just a night suit, tomorrow, I will ask Gauri to send my own clothes...

No beta, you are my daughter-in -law. More my daughter , who gave me such happiness, my son is at home after three long years... she smiled... Now it's late, I think you must take some rest...

Astha was shocked where to go...when, stamping his feet in anger Shlok came and signaled her to follow...

Astha followed him to the room... as they reached, both were ready to kill each other...

Astha, what was this? Why did you agree to stay at my house? Shlok shouted closing the door...

Your house? Astha made a twisted face... I think, its my in-laws house, and where will I go except my in- laws after my wedding. She commented on Shlok...

Enough Astha, why did you agree for all such bull S**t? We could leave if you don't say yes...

This was all because of you Shlok. Now you have to solve... and moreover I could not see tears in your ayii's eyes...

Don't call her my ayii... got it? Shlok shouted angrily...

I don't know anything .this all mess is created by you to solve your problem, then why am I suffering? Get me out of all this soon... Astha too shouted... and most importantly... where is my room?

This one... Shlok replied...

And yours? She asked...

This one... Shlok replied again...

What? Astha punched him badly.

Kyon? Abhi to bada shaunk tha apne in-laws ke ghar rehne ka? Then what's problem in sharing room with your dear hubby? Shlok commented...

Shut up Shlok and arrange place for me to sleep, I am really fed up , she spoke taking night suit form the bag given by Anjali...and it was another shock...It was a short satin strapless nighty...

Shlok made a face of Aweee on seeing. Wow, what a sweet mother-in -law you got? Cares for her newly wed son so much? He winked at her... Astha picked cushion from bed and threw at him while he was laughing...

Get out...Astha shouted opening the balcony of room...

Excuse me. it's my room. He too shouted...I will sleep on my bed, you may go outside if you want...

Finally Astha sat on the bed kneeling on its back...closed her eyes and relaxed for a moment...

Shlok please yaar. She made a puppy face... I am too much irritated already, don't irritate me more... She folded her hands. Now go...

Ok baba...finally Shlok too agreed... He took cushion from bed and moved towards balcony.

Ya, If this night dress is not comfortable...you will get my some old kurta from cupboard...he smiled...and good night...

Good night...Astha too spoke...

Astha took a long breath and checked the nighty again...no I can't wear it. that too here...She thought and opened shlok's cupboard to find some decent kurta...finally she got one, changed and went to sleep...

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------

It was morning...when Anjali knocked the door. She was about to open but immediately remembered the last night scene and remembered Shlok was outside in Balcony.

She replied from inside only...when Anjali asked her to get ready, as it was fast today...

She immediately got ready and ran towards balcony, called Shlok inside.

It was Nine AM when a servant came to call for Shlok...Shlok baba, Sir has called you for breakfast..

Before Shlok could reply, Astha spoke immediately... Infact, he is not feeling well today, he will not have breakfast.

Yes Madam. Saying servant left...

What was this? Shlok stood up from bed...

Why should I starve for you Mr.?, it's not only me, who will starve, you will also have to...She declared...now get ready, I am getting bore, I want to go downstairs but can't handle all the questions alone...

Shlok held his head leaving for washroom...

After some time , he called Astha... Astha will you give me towel from cup board?

Astha opened the cupboard and wet to give towel to Shlok...

She came back and was about to close cupboard when she saw a snap on the floor...

What is this? May be it fell from shelf when I opened it. She spoke to herself while picking it up... and was a bit shocked to see it.it was Shlok hugging a girl tightly with a big smile.it looked like it was three to four years old picture...

When Shlok came from washroom...he came near Astha seeing a picture in her hands...

Hey what's this? He held from her hand and was taken back... e looked in anger towards Astha and went outside in balcony...

Astha was surprised on his reaction... finally she decided to talk to him...she too followed him after some moments...

Shlok...she put her hand on his shoulder, when he didn't turn back, she moved step ahead towards him looking at his face... he was all in tears having that picture into pieces in hand...

Shlok, I am sorry. I didn't mean to hurt you, it had fallen on floor, and I just picked it up. Didn't know, what it was...Astha clarified ...

Shlok nodded and turned back to go... When Astha held his hand...Shlok knew what she wanted now...

He stood there holding her hand and finally spoke...

She is Swati...Love of my life...

Which came as a shock for Astha.. The man who always says he hates girls, was in love...

He continued... We were together since childhood. She was my classmate and my very god friend...

We were in ninth class, when I proposed her and she accepted my proposal... I was on cloud nine at that time...a smile appeared on his face remembering old moments...

This pic is from our twelveth class trip... My last happy moments...Before the trip, my parents came to know about Swati. They asked me to leave her as it will suffer my career and future... As she belonged to a very simple family...but I was not ready for that... we came from the trip and I was in home for holidays...he paused...

When I went back to school, I found, Swati had gone...she had left the school, I was shocked, near exams, and how can she leave the school. I ran towards her home and found lock there. Her neighbors told they had left the city. But why so sudden?

I was broken, my heart was broken. I came back to home from school...But as I reached home. I lost everything...I saw... he paused and sighed a long breath...

Astha caressed his shoulder...when he looked into her eyes...

I saw Swati and his father were at home with my parents, they were thanking my parents for the amount they had given to Swati for moving out of my life...

When I was in hall, Swati didn't even looked at me... I questioned her about our relation, about intimacy, we shared. About moments, we shared... But she had just cunning smile on her face...

That day I lost all my relations Astha... My parents, who purchased my love... My love, that was salable...and the belief from all relations... Shlok broke down...

I am sorry Shlok...I should not have asked you...i am sorry. Astha spoke slowly cupping his face wiped his tears and took into hug caressing him...They stood hugging each other for long since Shlok was feeling fine...

Its ok Astha. I am feeling very light now... You know, that why I hate girls, marriages and my family... Since that day I left my house and shifted in that flat... Its after years I lived a night here that too because of your decision...he spoke braking the hug holding her hands...

If I would have known this truth, I would have never asked you to stay here...I just wanted to teach you a lesson for telling lie about marriage and all that.. That's why when you said no to stay... I decided to say yes... And I will not tell a lie... I was taken by your ayii's tears... Astha completed...

All those are crocodile tears Astha... I am their only son whom they want back in their life now. That's why they agree to my every decision. Even when I announced I am married, they accepted...but I can never forgive them... Shlok completed the topic...

Anyways leave it...just tell me if you need anything to eat, I will arrange it. Shlok asked bringing his smile back on his face...

Umm... No, I think, I will manage and Mr. you too are not going to eat anything for the whole day. Its your punishment for creating the mess...Astha ordered him...

Awee... Anything for you my sweetie pie wife. Acha, thoda sa, i mean itta sa to kha loon? Shlok made puppy face...

No. I mean no... Astha shouted and both started laughing...

Ok, I am sorry for last night's scene at party. Shlok held his ears...

Ok, I am sorry too for last night's slap...

Ya you should be, badi jorr se lga tha... Shlok made puppy face caressing his cheek...

You deserved that... Astha laughed...infact you deserved more.

Thanks God. I got Astha's natural smile back... Saying he pulled into a hug... She too hugged him with a smile...


-LECHU- thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
awee cutie cutie update😛
loved it
really beautiful
what a sweet bond..you portrayed it very well
go ahead as per your plans👍🏼
what a blessed writer you are
your works have some attractive power that make us so hooked..its true😉
Edited by LECHU123 - 11 years ago
jeenia123 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago

Wow... after lot days...on first spot... thanks...
TomNJerry... thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
SOOO CUTE...DAY BY DAY I AM LOVING THIS FF MORE AND MORE...🤗

simply mind blowing ff and aashlok
👍🏼

hats off to u dear for giving us such a wonderful work
👏

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Mystic_Muse · 4 months ago

Chapter 1: AChance Encounter The sun dipped low, casting a goldenhue over the sprawling Verma mansion. Inside, the hum of everyday life...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Sshesha · 2 months ago

INTRODUCTION After the death of his foster mother, Rajveer makes a life-altering decision to find the parents who left him behind. He want to...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul · 2 months ago

Churake dil mera...Stealing my heart... I dedicate this OS to parthz who requested me to write on AviSha. Hima went to a park and looked around....

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington · 1 years ago

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish · 6 years ago

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".