Ek Vivah Aisa Bhi...*New* Pg 4,5 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
awesome concept
the prologue n CS was superb
excited to read the 1st part
thanks for pm
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
wow shaanu..awesum prologue..loved it !!! dis is gonna be interesting ...cont soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Different charater humm ups but dr truly main en charater ke baare main bilkul nahi jantiii lolll
Any way good character
waiting for ittt
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Posting Her Views Here-Srishti..
Didummmsss...Love You Love You Love You Love You!!!! Hayeee... Awsuummm CS nd Prolouge!!! The way u described The Concept Of Marriage Was Superrr Awsummm!!! Me nd Shlok!!!! U really r the best sister eva!! This one has really been the best Bday Gift of My Lyf...Thankkk Youuu Sooo Muccchhh!! Muaaahhh!!! Luv Ya Didumz Tonnz nd Tonnz! P.S-Thannkk U All Luvly Ppl for the lyks nd cmnts!!! 😊❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thankk u all guys fr the previous lyks nd cmnts..It really means a lott to me..U guys encouraging my work outside d genre of Arjun...Love To All..❤️❤️ Here We go wid First Update! Do share ur views nd no silent readingg!! Presenting...
Ek Vivah Aisa Bhi...
"Shlok?" A Voice spke, "Ji Baba?" The Very Handsome Shlok Agnihotri turned to face his father; Mr. Niranjan Agnihotri-Founder Of Agnihotri Group Of Industries. "Aaj Aastha Ke College Chale Jaana. Wo kya hai na ki tum dono ki shaadi hone wali hai 1 hafte me toh accha hoga ki tum dono ek doosre ko jaano-samjho shaadi se pehle.." "Theek Hai Baba!" Shlok Answered closing his laptop on which he had been working on past 2 hours. Nirajan Passed his son a small smile nd was abt to leave when he turned in the doorway,"Aur Haan! Apni Aai ko iss baare me kuch mat batana! Warna poora ghar sar pe utha legi!" "Ji Baba! Aap Fikar na kare main Mrs. Agnihotri ko kuch nhi bataunga!" Shlok assured his father. His father nods
Edited by ShanayaShaleen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nd leaves. Shlok sighed nd got up. Freshened Up,Took His Car Keys nd left for Aastha's College! During his ride..He kept thinking abt Aastha's nd his relationship..His Father had chosen her for him as she was the beti of his old childhood frnd.. Mr.Kirloskar. But He? He neva lykd dis relation! Hell! He didnt evn knew Aastha too well!! Just Met her in 2-3 parties which dey had organised in Agnihotri Mansion. He was stunned when he got to knw dat his father had chosen Aastha for him!! But cudnt speak anything cuz Father's Obeying Son as he was! So dis relation was more kinda lyk forced on him!! He didnt even felt lyk dat way towards Aastha. But evryone lovd her excludingg Mrs.Agnihotri. But then..when did she lykd any gurl??? Amidst all his thots he neva realised when he reached College.. Mumbai University,where Aastha was a graduation last year student. He parked his SUV nd walked thru the college campus avoiding the Admiring nd Lustful eyes of the gurls.. Cuz evryone knew dat he is Aastha's Fiance plus gurls
Edited by ShanayaShaleen - 11 years ago
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wer all gaga over him! Nd he desereved it!! Dressed in A Black Armaani Tuxedo he lukd drop dead handsome!! It was difficult for Shlok to locate or trace Aastha cuz the campus was filled wid Students nd der hustle-bustle! There was a swarm of students! Shlok tried to luk over der heads as he was powerfully Tall! This Was When He Saw "HER"..
Music...Sajnaa Ve...Music
She was laughing at sumthing or sumone..Her smile was a Warm Sunshine,Her Laugh was the echo of a Mountain Waterfall..Shlok found his world standing still,Found himself getting lost in her..Den one of her frnds pointed to sumthing in Shlok's Direction..Her Head Turned nd Man!!! She is Gorgeous! Shlok thought aloud in his head.. Her eyes wer the colour of Clear Deep Blue Seas..Her Porcelain Skin was Flawless nd Creamy..Her Glossy Chocolate Coloured Hair tumbled to her waist.. She was Goddamn Beautiful but the Question is...Who Is She??? Suddenly sumone tucked his arm,Shlok lukd towards the side nd saw Aastha smiling at Him..
Edited by ShanayaShaleen - 11 years ago
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"Shlok? Aap Yaahan?" Aastha asked. "Haan Wo Tumhe Picup karne aaya tha!" Shlok answered. "Oh!" That was only Aastha cud say softly as she blushed.."Aap Yaahan Kyun Khade Hai? Chaliye Na Main aapko apni frnds se milwaati hunn!" She held his hand nd pulled him "Nahi Aastha! Its ok. Main-----" he ties to protest but Aastha took him to her group..But What he saw der shocked him more to the core..The gurl whom he saw a few moments bfore was standing nd when she saw Aastha,she adressed her chirpily.."Aasthu! Kaahan chali gyi thhi? Hum kab se wait kar rhe the!" "Soorry! Wo kya hai na notes lene me derr ho gayi! Anyways..Guyss! Inse Milo Yeh Hai Shlok Agnihotri,as u all knw mere mangetar.." Aastha den turned towards Shlok.."Aur Shlok Yeh Hai Meri Best Frndz, Srishti Mukherjee!" she spke pointing at the blue eyed gurl.."Aur Priyanka Malik!" she pointed towards another gurl of der group.."So ur Mr.Shlok Agnihotri..The Shlok Agnihotri!" Srishti spke advancing a hand towards him..TBC...Precap-Shlok-Srishti Convo..
Edited by ShanayaShaleen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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*unres*

Wow...
An amazing and superb update...
First to comment and like without a pm.
Yay...
*dancing Gangnam style!*
loved the update to the core...
So,Aastha is Mr.Kirloskar's daughter,who is the childhood friend of Mr.Agnihotri...
Shlok met Asstha only in a few parties' but he doesnt like her that way.
Mr.Agnihotri wants Shlok to marry Aastha...
Shlok went to Aastha's college to pick her up. Wow...
Aastha introduces him as her mangetar...
Shlok is mesmerized by the beauty of Srishti...
Ooohhh...
Precap is interesting...
Shlok and Srishti's convo...
Continue sooonish... :)
Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
nice part.. Liked it.. Thanks for pm..

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