Hi dear,I am Shona. I would like to wish a very happy diwali.
I have been reading your FF since chapter 13. I caught up with the pace and then whenever I got time, I visited you thread to read more. I am pretty stuck up with study and thesis work at the moment for which I hardly get time to sit, relax and enjoy my time on IF like earlier. I read mostly on my way to and from university on my phone in my car and typing comments from my phone is sort of very difficult. That's about how I manage to stay connected to FF's and Arnav Khushi.
I found some spare time today, and couldn't help myself from commenting on the your second thread... CONGRATS on reaching the second thread, I feel so happy that this story has reached its second thread. Wish you all the best for many many more threads of ENTWINED to come...~!!!!👏
I can say only one thing. According to me, this is the most intense story of Arshi that I have read, ( and I tell you I have read quite a bit to say that now 😉). On the surface its a very beautiful story with Khushi Arnav, and their growing relationships, insecurities, problems, and everything. But it sort of has this huge graviational pull withing its depth that appeals the most to the readers I guess. I myself am unable to figure it out, what it is that makes me keep coming back. Whatever it is, it's very strong I tell you. The way you have woven the story from the beginning, with all the incidents occuring one after the other, all the flashbacks, every single emotion, feeling described just touched my heart to leave a mark on it.
I adore this pair of Arnav and Khushi who seem to be quite different from what they usually are. And since the last few updates, in London, I absolutely love the building comraderie, the rising comfort level, the contentment which they find in each others embrace or mere touch. This is what I had been waiting for, for a long time now, for Khushi to place her complete trust in Arnav, where she does not anymore shy away in fear of her past demons. And the kiss in the last part was just heaven. Totally blissful. I truly hope they don't feel awkward in each others presence after they share the kiss. I would love them to come even closer to each other emotionally after this.
The way you had described each of Khushi's insecurities, fear, tension, anxiety, hope, dreams is just marvellous. And so was Arnav's confusion,determination, gulit, anxiety for Khushi.
The new twists and turns seems to be very exciting. I never imagined Akash in such a character but you surprised me, and I seem to quite like it. very much. I am anxious, nervous, excited and thrilled at the development of the recent chapters and at the upcoming ones.
Bravo for giving us such a beautiful piece of work. 👏 I absolutely admire your style of writing, and feel your writing has a kind of hypnotiosing element to it. I feel the daze even after finish reading the update. So congrats on being one of the best writers on Arshi stories in my eyes...!!! You are truly very talented and blessed with the art of writing. Never stop, specially on Arshi... 😆 😉
Lots of love to you. Will send you a friend request just to have you as a buddy of mine😃. You need not bother to pm me, since I have been happily stalking all this time. This comment was due frommany days, since I really like commenting and that too detailed ones, which I feel is the least we can do to show our appreciation to a writer who takes the effort to conceive a plot, pen it down, check it, psot it, then pm...I feel it a duty of a loyal reader. Though I won't be regular on IF till December, I'll try to give my feedback to you. Otherwise, will come back after Dec, to be regularly with you.
Lots of love, best wishes to you.
Cheers 👏
Shona
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