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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh GOD riya ne suisid ki koshish ki, thankfuly arjun saved her and make her understand how important she and her live is for him, team, frendz and her parents..
Precap look nice.. Thankx 4 PM 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
dat was amazing

thanx fr d pm dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part...

riya suicide karne wale thi... uss raj ki toh 😔

riya joining back ETF...

update soon and thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey sorry for the late comment...!
just read all the parts...!!
superb...!!
etf celebrating diwali cool..
but riya burned😭 feeling bad for her.. everyone were so tensed//.. loved arjun's presence of mind..
he is always there for her.,...
and that raj grr... i so want to kill him.. he valued money more than riya...a dn wanted to end the marriage coz of the burn marks.. how dare he... arjun ne acha sabak sikahya usse...
so arjun wants to marry her...!!! and he loves her for what she is.. her inner beauty...!!
ohh no ye raj phir se aagya.. iski toh😔 abhi bhi aise bol rha hai.. lgta hai isko samjun ki achi wali class chaiye...!!!
poor girl was so heart broken...!! love how arjun handled her and calmed her down.. and helped her in regaining her confidence...!!!
glad to see a new bond developing between them...!!!
precap is interesting...!!1
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
love the way arjun always there for riya.
precap looks interesting and scary..
continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read two updates togather. Superb update. Feeling very sad for riya. Hate that raj. Love arjun concern for riya. Thanks a lot for pms. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago


Part 6

It was evening and as per their routine.. arjun dropped riya home..

Riya: arjun sir mujhe kuch shopping karni hai aap mujhe market drop kar denge.

Arjun: riya mein bhi chalta hoon tumahre saath shopping karke tumhe ghar drop kar dunga..

Riya: aap bore hojayenge sir..

Arjun: nahi honge let me see tum kaise shopping karti hoon..

They reached a mall. Riya was still very uncomfortable going out due her marks.

Arjun: riya chale?

Riya: jee..sir wooh shop..

Arjun: ek baat poocho tum toh hamesha western kapde pehenti thi ab yeh indian wear wooh bhi hameha full sleves..

Riya: arjun sir mujhe achcha nahi lagta mere marks iss tarah,.

Arjun: riya tumhare marks tumhpe iss tarah asar nahi kar sakte.. tum aaj bhi utni hi beautiful ho jitni kal the..par joh bhi pasand ho wooh le lo..

Riya choose few indian dresses for routine wear..

Riya: arjun sir hogaya..

Arjun: riya kya mein aaj tumhare liye pay kar sakta hoon..?

Riya: nahi sir yeh . mein kar dungi.

Arjun: riya I insist..please..

Riya: thik hai sir...

Arjun: tum ruko mein pay karke ata hoon.

One of riya's relative saw her..

Aunty: riya kaise ho tum?

Riya: namastey aunty mein thik ho aap kaise hai?

Aunty: thik hi hoon.. beta bohot bura laga tumhare barein mein sunke.. tumhare saath joh hadsa hua bhagvan kisiko wooh dard de aur wooh kya kam tha ke tumhara aur raj ka ristha bhi tut gaya..

All the pains buried in riya's heart took form of tears in her eyes..arjun came to her and heard wat was going on..

Arjun: ria lets go..

Aunty: tum kaun ho? Kahin tum wooh toh nahi joh..

Arjun: mein riya ka senior hooon acp arjun rawte..aap kaun hai?

Aunty: mein riya ke rishtedar hoon.

Arjun: lagti toh nahi hia..

Aunty: matlab?

Arjun: matlab yeh ki rishtedar dhuk mein saath dene ke liye hote hai tane marne ke liye nahi..

Aunty: dekho tum apni tamez mein raho

Arjun: apki tameez kahan thi jab riya ke uske bure din yaad kara rahe the..

Riya: arjun sir please..

Arjun: chalo riya ese logo se baat karke koi faiyda inhe bas dusro ke dhukh mein maze lena ata hia..

Aunty: aree tum bade riya ke taraf lagte hoon sirf senior ho ya kuch aur bhi ? kahin raj ko bhulke inse toh rishta nahi jod liya.

Riya: aunty please arjun sir ke barein mein kuch mat boliye?

Aunty: aree waah riya rishte tute kuch mahine hi hue hai aur tumhe naya rishta jod liya..

Arjun: agar aapne ek baar riya ko kuch bhi kaha toh achacha nahi hoga..

Aunty: kaun lagte ho tum iske ke joh itni fikar hai iske..? bolo? Tum kya bologe.. saath ke naam pe bas tumhe

Riya: bas kijiye aunty aur kabardar apne inhe kuch bhi kaha..mere honewale pati hai yeh suna apne..aur kya janana chahti hai aap ?poochiye chup kyon ab?

Arjun was hell shocked whn riya said this... anger was clearly evident of her face..aunty was no more in a condition to speak seeing the anger on riya's face..

Riya: ghar chale sir hume dair ho rahe hia..

Arjun too held her hand in his.. and walked past the lady..

They reached the car and settled down..

Riya bursted out in tears.. she was not able to take the pain anymore..

Arjun : riya riya calm down .. ese logo ke baton pe dhyan mat do,..unhe bas bakvas karni ate hia aur kuch nahi..

Riya: kyon sir? Mein hi kyon? Kya galati thi meri joh mere saath yeh hadsa hua ? kya galati the meri ke raj ek dhokebaaz nikla..? kyon..

Arjun could hold n pulled riya in his arms.. he was caresing her back calming her down... her pain was giving him pain too.. he couldnot bear her tears..

Arjun: bas riya shannt hojao..just relax..

Riya calmed down after few minutes and arjun made her drink water..

Ariya finally reached riya's house..arjun got down to meet her parents..riya wnt to her room directly..

Arjun saw her parents quite distrubed.. so he decided to talk to them alone..

Arjun: uncle aunty sab thik hia na?

Riya's dad: wooh arjun baat yeh hai ke?pata nahi kaise kahun?

Arjun: uncle joh bhi hai boliye..

Riya's dad: arjun sab tumhe aur riya ko leke question kar rahe hai batein bana rahe hai..aur uss raj ne bhi riya ke khilaf bohot batein failaye hai..

Riya's mom: tumhare riya ka yun khayal rakhna har pal uske saath rehna yeh sab ..

Arjun: aap log sach jante hai .. bas mere liye yahi important hia..logo ke baton ke wajahse apko riya ko kuch kehne ke zarorat nahi hia..

Arjun and her parents thought they were alone bt riya had heard the convo ..

Riya wnt to her room.. and started remembering every moment of past few months..

These few moments gave her a clear picture abt her life her relationships.. she was sure that if anyone to keep her happy than it was arjun.. she had always respected him for wat he was bt now she was falling for him for wat he did to her..


precap:


riya pov and ayesha-riya convo

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Posted: 11 years ago
it was awesome and amazing update dear.
just loved it.
so ariya goes for a shopping.
riya buy some indean dress because of her marks..
so arjun pay the bill for her dress.
omg that aunty?😔
i just want to kill her😔
how could she say this?
sahi main logo ko baatein banana aata hain.
so riya says arjun his fiance in front of that aunty.
loved ariya hug.
love the way arjun consoled her.
so riya parents also very tensed.
and riya listen all the convo and she was crying.
loved riya pov.
precap was awesome.
continue soon.
and thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally update mil gaya


And finally riya ne sab ke samne keh diya that arjun us her future husband


More...finally riya ne realise kar liya that arjun is perfect for her and she fall for him...yepiii


Lovely yaar...finally feeling so happy...

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