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Posted: 18 years ago
Entangled in these Relations -Part 1

Vedika and Angad had decided on a wedding date 3 days from today. Urvashi was flying in today, one day in the middle to preparations, and then…the big day. Excitement was creeping into every inch of Angad and Vedika. Could you blame them? They were getting married! Life hadn't ever felt of fulfilled for them two. So in love, so together, so BUSY! "Vedika, did you pick your dress yet!", screamed out Angad from the bathroom while shaving. Vedika who was making some of the last minute invite calls yelled back, "No…I'm waiting for Bus to come and help!" Angad rolled his eye's in the bathroom, "Cant you just pick one, we don't have time, you'll need to tailor the dress considering your so damn thin and but matching jewelry and I have to buy my hat thing the Punjabi's wear and…", Angad was making a verbal list of everything that was still to be done when Vedika ran in. " What's wrong with you woman! I could have been naked!", jumped Angad when Vedika ran in. "Oh shut up!", said Vedika. She went up to Angad very happy and asked, "You really think I'm thin?" Angad had a very peculiar look on his face when the replied, "Yeah…I mean you wear a small still". Angad was still confused, and Vedika kissed his cheeks very hard and exclaimed, "I love you Angad!", she said and ran back out. Angad laughed and said to himself, "I'm to damn good. I meant it as criticism and she took it as a compliment. I'm just too good."

News travels pretty fast. Urvashi had left for the sir post only about an hour ago and already news of Angad and Vedika's wedding was going around town. It was only hours until the news came to Kripa. That too from the most random person…Sahil. "So, I hear your ex is getting married?", he asked. Kripa suddenly shot her face to Sahil confused about what he was saying. "Who's getting married?", she asked again. "You ex…that guy. Angad Khanna. Yeah, he's getting married to some girl named Vedika, it's on his face book profile", Sahil explained. Kripa couldn't believe it at first. There was a slight look of hurt mixed and a smile on her face. After getting over the initial shock all Kripa said was, "I'll buy you all dinner if they last a month". Sahil save a laugh at first ad then turned serious again, "Kripa…come on. I heard their like really in love and stuff. Getting married is a good thing, even its their your ex boyfriend's", he said. Kripa rolled her eye's and dug a hole in the ground the were sitting on. "Okay you know what Sahil. He cheated on me with her, you how about to save their eternal love story speech for someone else", she yelled. Sahil drew and back and angrily said, "Kripa you're the last person who should be talking about cheating right now". Kripa sighed, "Sahil that was different. Him and I dated for a year before he did that okay". Sahil got up not wanting to continue the conversation anymore, "Whatever, you want to go get something to eat?", he asked. "Yeah sure", replied Kripa.

Shazad really didn't have time to worry about Angad and who he was marrying considering the piece of news he just received from, his parents. "What the hell you mean by you fix my marriage!", he screamed out. "Shazad! Don't raise your voice", commanded his father. Shazad couldn't believe it. Here it was…his fathers revenge for all the years of Shazad existence. They were matching making him! An arranged marriage! Were they crazy? " Beta, she's a very good girl from a very good family", explained his mother. Shazad's father got up and went to him, "They will come tomorrow Shazad. So be home…and remember to take a shower", he demanded. "No! You cant do this to me! You don't understand, I'm not ready to get married. I still a baby!", cried Shazad. Not literally, he cried in his heart. "Oh, honey", Shazad's mom went to him and hugged him. "Mom, I cant get married now! I'm still in college and I still have to explore the world! Why do you guys want to break my homes and dreams", he said hoping he let him off the hook. "You can explore the world after you get married too Shazad", strictly said his father. "No I cant, how will I explore the women of the world with my wife standing there watching", he blurted out, later biting his tongue. "Shazad! Don't say such things!", said his mother lightly smacking his face. "Shazad it's final…you cant do anything about it", said his father. "Don't you care about what I want? It's my damn life", yelled out Shazad angry. His father simply replied, "No".

"Why are you looking through my phone", Hussein asked laying with Meem's hair. While doing so, Meem was playing with Hussein's phone. Or spying on Hussein. " No reason…I'm just bored", replied Meem busy with the phone. Hussein laughed and said, "That's nice. My company bores you. Fine, lets go for a drive", offered Hussein. "Yeah, yeah…right after I finish reading all the text messages you got from this girl", said Meem. "Meem, stop spying on me", laughed Hussein. Meem put down the phone a looked at Hussein. "I am offended by your statement Mister Hussein, I am not spying on you", Meem said upset at Hussein. "Your just angry that I'm finding out all your secrets", she added quickly. "Meem, I have no secrets…fine, will you let me check your phone", he asked trying to take Meem's cell. "Hussein, you don't need to check my phone, I'm very loyal", she said taking it away. After much debate and discussion Meem and Hussein arrived at a conclusion. "Fine lets switch phone for the rest of the week, then we'll see who's the faithful one", said Meem very confidently. "Sure, I have nothing to hide my love", replied Hussein. "Okay then", concluded Meem handing Hussein the phone.

To Be Cont….

Coming up- Kripa reacts to the news of Angad and Vedika's wedding surprisingly. Urvashi arrives at Boston and Vedika is upset that her wedding isn't what she had once dream of it to be. Shazad tries to get out of meeting the girl his parents fixed up and switching phones prove to be a bad idea for Meem and Hussein.

Sorry Guy. I only posted this part since I promised I would, but this is only the part 1. There a lot more in Tangle Relations which I'll finish on Friday. My school work takes up half of my life, im sorry.

Comments please

Karishma****
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww, i am happy u posted a prt, even though it's small!!!!! 😛
it was AWESUM, i CANNOT wait till Friday!!!! 😉
AMAZINGLYROCKING prt!!!!!!! 👏
i know school's REALLY hard, wht grade r u in???? 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey!

i guess i forgot to comment on the last part... sorry... well that part was great! i kinda enjoy reading hte cute scenes with angad and ved... they are growing on me.. kripa is irritating me now.. she doesnt need to be soo depressed.. and sahil was right. cheating is cheating no matter how long u r in a relationship. i wonder who shazad is gonna get married to.. is it zuzu? wild guess lol.. i sense trouble for meem and husein.. i hope shazad doesnt mess them up.. kripa is def acting like a Bit** at this point of time.. ok those were all my thoughts..

dont worry and dont be sorry .. school comes first.. we can all wait! good luck with you stuff...

lots of luv
mansi 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg it would be hilarious if shazad was gettin arranged with meem!!! that would piss off hussein ever more loL!! ohhhh maybe in the check messages meem will get a message from her parents that she has to come home cuz a boy is coming to c her!! continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
ooooooo i have a feeling vedz is gunna bak out at the last minute......i get what shes feeling..when a girl gets married they have dreams of the perfect wedding n well this isnt exactly perfect.......hmmm wonder wat kripas gunna do...gatecrash the wedding maybe 😆 and omg wt the hell r shazads parents thinkingggg they're so unfairrrrr i have a feeling this girls gunna b zuzu? and oh no swapping fones with ur bf is definately truble meem!!! cnt wait 4 da next part, continue sooon!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

awww, i am happy u posted a prt, even though it's small!!!!! 😛
it was AWESUM, i CANNOT wait till Friday!!!! 😉
AMAZINGLYROCKING prt!!!!!!! 👏
i know school's REALLY hard, wht grade r u in???? 😊

hey...yea im a sophmore in high school. im sooo sry i didnt cont. its just i had alot of work n im rly tired n writin takes alot of time. sry i try to cont as soon as i can.

great part

thank you

Originally posted by: mansi1219

hey!

i guess i forgot to comment on the last part... sorry... well that part was great! i kinda enjoy reading hte cute scenes with angad and ved... they are growing on me.. kripa is irritating me now.. she doesnt need to be soo depressed.. and sahil was right. cheating is cheating no matter how long u r in a relationship. i wonder who shazad is gonna get married to.. is it zuzu? wild guess lol.. i sense trouble for meem and husein.. i hope shazad doesnt mess them up.. kripa is def acting like a Bit** at this point of time.. ok those were all my thoughts..

dont worry and dont be sorry .. school comes first.. we can all wait! good luck with you stuff...

lots of luv
mansi 😛

oh thank you soo much!!!!! i luv long comments😆anywayz i'll try n cont as soon as i can promise

Originally posted by: Numera*

omg it would be hilarious if shazad was gettin arranged with meem!!! that would piss off hussein ever more loL!! ohhhh maybe in the check messages meem will get a message from her parents that she has to come home cuz a boy is coming to c her!! continue soon!

thats a good idea, damn y didnt i think of that!! anyways thank youuu

thank you

ooooooo i have a feeling vedz is gunna bak out at the last minute......i get what shes feeling..when a girl gets married they have dreams of the perfect wedding n well this isnt exactly perfect.......hmmm wonder wat kripas gunna do...gatecrash the wedding maybe 😆 and omg wt the hell r shazads parents thinkingggg they're so unfairrrrr i have a feeling this girls gunna b zuzu? and oh no swapping fones with ur bf is definately truble meem!!! cnt wait 4 da next part, continue sooon!!! 👏

damn you just gave out my entire story. okay i guess i dun need to write it no more. jus kidding..i doubt kripa's gona gatecrash the wedding..she aint that desperate😆

Originally posted by: Mehandikhan

great plz cont soon. 👏

thank youuu n i'll try to cont asap

Originally posted by: srk1

love it like always.. 😊

thank you soo much hun.

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Guys im so sorry, I know I said last Friday but I just couldnt. This whole week, we're having this thing at achool and i was helping and its really tiring. i went to school so early today...and we all worked on the decorations. ugh...i decided to cut more things out and just conclud this season cuz i sick of the sotry right now. So expect season 3 to come sonner than expected.\

Luv1




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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Desi Pride

damn you just gave out my entire story. okay i guess i dun need to write it no more. jus kidding..i doubt kripa's gona gatecrash the wedding..she aint that desperate😆

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omg lol i thought i did 4 a second😆 yea i guess shes not tht desperate

omg r u serioussss u cnt jus conclude it like thtttttt😭 lol have 2 wait 4 season 3 nowww.....😡

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Posted: 18 years ago
yaar awesome part! sahil is rite.. cheating is cheating but this is wat happens once a girl is hurt.. she thinks everyone is the same.

wat happens with the phone switch.. plz make it a lil humerous.. and SHAHZAD MARRYY!!! that should be crazy funny!! 😆

cant waitt for season 3 either!! contineu sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
NOOO dont hurry it thru... i like this ff a lot!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey guys. Okay im soooo gonna cont today only because im so happy. I mean, im damn tired but im soo happy. see we've been having this thing at school were all grades compete. like freshman, sophs, juniors, in seniors. we have to dress up some days, prepare a play, write a song, and decoarte our hallways. i was in the decorating committee. and yoo we all put out heart and sould into this stuff, its wasnt even funny. we staye dlate everyday and went early to work on everything. we made a fricking candy cane house n it was not easy. then today was result day..we presented out songs n plays and costumes. (our costume was the custest) and then wen the results came freshman won third, juniors second. and we all thought we were going to lose and we were pissed cuz we deserved it liek hell, even the juniors said we deserved it. then we ended up winning. it was a tie with the seniors and we were sooo happy i wasnt even funny. lolz the seniors were pissed but hu cares we won!!
Anyways, im so hapopy that i will write a part today 😆

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