ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 9 - COMPLETED

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sincereme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Suberb...

It start from their passionate scene... Where arnav was all ready to devour her... You have so beautifully written that scene... Total sensual... and then the scar... It was so painful... both of them remembering the past and the pain that is still their in their heart...

Love how khushi tried to distract him.. She knew that no reasoning will make arnav understand that it was not his fault...

During haldi both were thinking about their wedding... Arnav was all alone in his wedding... but he put his pain behind and thought about khushi first... He knew that she would be sad so he arrange their own personal haldi... Loved it...

Love the understanding they share...

Continue soon...

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

awsum blossum updt..beautifully written..
loved it:)

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S.B.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Awesome... loved it <3 ❤️

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Simran

@Simran.22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

phew! finally finished reading this ff and from now on i'll be regular in commenting!

it was total fun reading this ff!

full of emotions, laughter and romance!

i just loved the way you portray their emotions and the way you write is different from other writers.

overall i loved reading this ff especially the romantic scenes between arshi☺️

continue writing amazing stuff that you do.

thanks for the pm!

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819504

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Beautiful update ji...😊

Romantic...naughty...emotional...😳 😉 😭...

Amazng..lovd it..❤️

Their childhood memories scene nd wit the haldi wala scene got overwhelmd feelng the depth of their...emotns..

U always do splendid jobji...👏

nd in ur every update...
rotey rotey hasna sikha nd hastey hastey rona...!!

Wil be waitng fr thursday...

thnx fr the pm..😊

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: deepthiya

Nishu..hows married life going on?

Hi Di...its going good...I'm missing u guys...

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sweetieangel

@sweetie_angel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

the daily updates got over?😭

u totally spoilt us by updating daily

n now u leave us like this

not fair 😡

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

Hi Di...its going good...I'm missing u guys...

hum bhee ap ko bauhat miss ker rahay hain ,damn it :)

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: lalarukh

hum bhee ap ko bauhat miss ker rahay hain ,damn it :)

nishu i m nt missing u😛😛

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#170

nice chapter yaar...sorry for the late reply...

toda khatta todha metta 😉😉😉😉😉everything included...

i just wanted to say one thing for the last few updates,after their confession the way u taking us on each update...its speechless...u know onion ,if we started to peel u we will get many layers,thats how u are taking the story, arnav and kushi understanding each other ,their past ,feelings,struggles...

thank u for the update...i guess we will get update tomorrow...

cheers...