TaaRey SS:Do Ajnaabi(2): Page10:CH2:Updated

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello bhai aur behen log😆😆..okay..okay..I mean..hello all beautiful ladies and gentlemen..ooppsss girls and boys, how are you? All Fine Toh!! I am back with a new story, actually not a new one - this is a fresh story of Season One.

yaand hai kaise Do Ajnaabi raah chalte mile the aur fir dost ban gaye. In our daily life also we meet many people - maximum of them are faded into oblivion, but very few never fail to make a sign in our heart.

This is a story of two strangers who are completely different in nature - an angry young girl who loves to fight for justice /right act and a cool, fun loving guys who takes the life what it comes to him!!! This season will start where the last season was ended. In the last story we found how Taani wanted to flee from her house because she wanted to become a model against her parent's wish and meet with Rey who went to participate in DID. They met in a running bus, but at the last Rey helped Taani's parent to get her back.

Taani misunderstood Rey, we also didn't know why this helpful, caring boy suddenly changed - for money or for another reason? Do you believe that they fall for each other? Do you believe in Love at First Sight at all? What happened with them - had Rey won DID which was his only wish in life or had Taani become Model for which she run away from her house? Will they meet again and start their khatta meetha lowe estory?

So, I am back to answer you all these question with a light hearted comic romantic story fully masala estyle with khatta meetha aachaar daal ke😉..Just Enjoy!!

DO AJNAABI - SEASON TWO
(loosly based on Gori Tere Payar Mein coz the story of the film is not yet known)

For Those who did not read the first season, here is the link :
Do Ajnaabi

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello Debu...!!!
Finally u came up with it...!!!!
I was waiting that when u'll start this season 2...!!!
Season 1 was amazing and it was a cliffhanger...!!!
Now u came back with it...!!!
I hope to read really a comic romantic story further(which I know it would be as u r writing...!!)
Now waiting for the update dear...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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behena...🤗...

wow...a new season...i loved season and i m sure ye season bhi blast hogi...

waiting for update...

-Dipu
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so finaly u starting it
am waiting 4 it 4m long time😊
i thought u forget 😆
but now u gave a brilliant news
jaldie-2 update karna ok
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter One : Tumhe Chaaye Pein Bulaya Hai

"Rey tum aa gaya? I am glad that you have come to my house " Swayam smiles and hugs his friend cum assistant of dancing academy, Reyaansh Singhania, "Please come with me. I want to introduce you with my parents, they are at dinning table"

" Kaise nahi aate? My friend has invited me nah!!" Rey also hugs him back with a colgate smile, "Waise, I know that you were waiting for me also. But try to understand, though I have left on time, but there are less transport in the road, so I have not availed any one of them. And you know, I always prefer walking to keep myself fit. So, I have started walking and this takes so long to reach. But now I am here with you..." Rey starts describing his problem and how he has overcome this with his presence intelligence. Swayam already has crossed him, but he pays a little heed to it.

"Can we please move to our breakfast table if you have completed your speech?" Swayam tells him by keeping his two hands on waist

"Speech!!!" Rey spreads his mouth wideas he can't believe that Swayam is thinking his problem like a speech, "what makes you think this as a speech? I am sharing my problem with you, kitna parsaani huya idhar aane mein and you are laughing. And moreover I am not a good speaker at all"

Swayam ignores him and comes to the drawing room, "Dad, this is my friend and presently the teacher in charge of my dancing academy..Mr Reyaansh Singhania" Swayam introduces Rey with his father who is sitting in the breakfast table with the morning news paper

"Hello Young Man!! It's nice to meet you." he extends his hand with a pleasant smile on face, but his eyebrows become curved soon as he finds Rey's face very familiar

"Oh My God!! The world is so small, we have again meet with each other. How do you do, Sir? Do you still recall me? We met two years back in Mumbai bus stand? Remember? I am the one who informed you about your daughter, Taani when she run away.." he suddenly controls his words because he does not want to make him remembered about that past event now.

"Of course, I do...you have not changed, please sit down!!! Please have a tea with us."

"Wao Dad, both of you know each other so well. Rey, you never told me before about this. I knew that someone informed us, but I was not aware about the name or who the person was. But now, I am glad to know this.." Swayam says

"I also didn't know it few moments back!! By the way, how is Taani? Where is she? It would be nice if I meet her here again.." Rey replies them, but hears a low sound of exhaling the deep breath in response which comes from the another corner of the table. He doesn't feel when an aged yet beautiful lady has come to join with them. He thinks that she must be Taani's mother.

"What can I say now beta!! Abb tumse kya chhupana..She has again leave our house without telling us" informs Mr Prakash Sikhawat, Taani's father in a very depressive voice

"What? Not Again!!"

"Yes, she has..nearly one week back.." Taani's mom says

"But with whom? Where? wo model ban gayee kya?" Rey showers his questions with a great surprise.

"No, she is not interested in modelling now. She wants to do some good work before dying, so she has gone to Madhu Pur. We have our own ancestral house there where my parents are living. But she is not willing to stay there.." Prakash continues to talk

"What..before dying?" Rey's eyes become moist with this, he can't think anything further, "what happen with her uncle? Is she alright?"

"No no beta, she is fit and fine with GOD's grace. But she doesn't want to waste any further years by earning any material thing. I am just saying what she has told me before leaving the house. She will not come back here again." he poses for a moment, "Now only you can bring her back, like before. Please beta...I am requesting you, please do something." Prakash is about to cry while speaking about his one and only daughter

"Yes Rey, I am also requesting you. I know, Taani will only listen your words, not us. Please do something, it's one week now and this house is empty without her. Please bring her back with us" Swayam touches Rey's hand.

And Rey who always keeps ready with his bucket of words, feel lacking of proper words at this moments. He remains quiet and nods his head in agreement, he can't avoid their request not because he is a friend and employee of Sawayam. But Swayam is more than just a Friend. He has done much for him!!


Pre cap :

"You, why you have come here? Iss baar koi dusra irada ho nah toh fir..." she said angrily and took the apple in her hand for throwing

"Wait..wait..Noh noh.." Rey started fumbling, "I have come here because...umm..because I love to see villages. mujhe gano pasand hai, guhmne ke liye aaya hoo"


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A/N - How was it? If I get enough LIKE and COMMENT, I will continue it, so please tell me guys if I can continue or not. And this is a very light hearted romantice story, so just chillax and read!! And yea, I will end THLH by this week end for sure.
Edited by crazy2012 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res/unres

me first...yeee...

it was fantastic behena...so swayam taani ka bhai..and rey ko pata chala to taani se milne ki kitni jaldi thi usse...

again taani gayab ho gai...but iss baar kuch achha karna chahti hai...

so both will meet in the village...i must say village is beautiful place for love birds😳...bade bade trees and all ...

waiting to read further chapters...

Love
-Dipu
Edited by Dipu_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES/UNRES

*EDITED*

Wow di...atlast u started the new season

Luv u for dis...

Concept is superb..

First chapter was too gud

Reyam convo was hilarious

Taani fir se bhag gyi..OMG

Pr for a good thing

Rey is gonna take her back again wow..

Precap is so interesting

Updt soon n PLZzz PM di

U r not PMing me... 😭

Plz its a request..
Edited by -Sweet_Soumya- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res/Unres
P.S - I am busy... short comment :(

Wowie !! I loved season n I am. Sooo happy that u started a new season Debu di !
Anyway amazing start ... update soon !!
Edited by ..Akshita.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow again my second comment on ur this SS today only...!!!
Unbelievable for me...!!!
Anyways coming to the chap...!!!
As usual amazing yr...!!!
I love Rey here...!!!
Actually he is cute and kind of funny here...!!!
In this SS only I came to know that boys also talk more, not only girls...!!!
I mean it...!!!
Ok again back to the chap...!!!
Damn again Taani left...!!!
Hmmm but she dint want to be model...!!!
Wow this girl is also strange like Rey in this SS...!!!
But wow Rey's eyes were brimming with tears when Taani's dad said that before she die...!!!
That part was cute yr...!!!!
And wow here Swayam is also present...!!!
Loving it Debu...!!!!
Now plzzz update next part soon...!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PRASSI

Wow again my second comment on ur this SS today only...!!!

Unbelievable for me...!!!
Anyways coming to the chap...!!!
As usual amazing yr...!!!
I love Rey here...!!!
Actually he is cute and kind of funny here...!!!
In this SS only I came to know that boys also talk more, not only girls...!!!
I mean it...!!!
Ok again back to the chap...!!!
Damn again Taani left...!!!
Hmmm but she dint want to be model...!!!
Wow this girl is also strange like Rey in this SS...!!!
But wow Rey's eyes were brimming with tears when Taani's dad said that before she die...!!!
That part was cute yr...!!!!
And wow here Swayam is also present...!!!
Loving it Debu...!!!!
Now plzzz update next part soon...!!!😊



Thanks yaar..love u so much for your comment and you too😳
Now. yea I wanna portray a different love story..I dont know if it ever happens in actual😛
Basically Rey is very kind hearted banda, so he felt sad😆
I am reading your OS now...so bbyeee😛

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