TR OS ~ MORE THAN THIS~

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Posted: 11 years ago
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TR OS more than this
Taarey are besties since childhood and now in college second year same college tani is the CS and rey is the GS and they are neighbours aree yahan kya kar rah ho jaake padho aage batane ka jaroorat nahi hai you will get to know when you read

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Tani was on her way to college like any other day feeling alone and lonely because since his bestie has become GS he doesn't goes with her being her the CS he prefers to talk with her AGS bloody chipku tanisha she is always all over him but he doesn't realise it and once she made it her point to let him know about her intentions but what she got to hear was dat she is insecure since then tani maintained distance with him whenever he tried to talk to her
She reached college and wat does she see rey is with tanisha again
TANI'S POV
Arghh rey is again with dat bitch ohh jesus he saw me watching both of them chal katle yahan se and as I turn I felt his hand on my shoulders I was rooted to the place don't know why until his husky voice broke my trance I hear him saying " hi maddo tum kab ayi mujhe pata bhi nahi chala " my mind was already blown seeing both of them and he didn't noticed me GREAT!!!
I said while shrugging his hands from my shoulders " Oh thats ok I know you were hell busy with your so called AGS " and made my way to class and I could hear him yelling " tani tum kahan jaa rahi ho at least..." before he could complete I reached my class and the whole day went ignoring him
When I was leaving from college I heard some music of guitar and I knew who he was it was rey as I was the person who he would first listen his songs
I automatically started to follow from where the voice has come and reached the AV room and then don't know from where wind was blowing and caressing our faces you know how damn cute he was looking TANI concentrate he is your BESTIE tu uske baare mein aisa nahi soch sakti suddenly he started singing again

I'm broken
Do you hear me
I'm blinded
Cause you are everything I see
I'm dancing, alone I'm praying
That your heart will just turn around

Don't know why automatically all the anger which I was having for him melted and a smile adored my face

And as I walk up to your door
My head turns to face the floor
Cause I can't look you in the eyes and say

I was enjoying the song every time I heard the song I feel special and as I look at him his music is so powerful it conveyed so many emotions so much pain so much LOVE..

When he opens his arms
And holds you close tonight
It just won't feel right
Cause I can love you more than this, yeah
When he lays you down, I'm might just die inside
It just don't feel right Cause I can love you more than this
Can love you more than this

Hearing this I remembered when rey jumped from his balcony and entered my room when he saw my bhai carrying me in his arms to make me sleep and he thought that he was my BF he was so angry and started arguing with me that why I didn't told him about my BF and when I said he is my bhai he was really embarrassed and remembering it my lips automatically curved to form a smile

If I'm louder
Would you see me?
Would you lay down in my arms and rescue me?
Cause we are, the same
You saved me, when you leave it scarred again
And then I see you on the streetIn his arms, I get weak
My body feels I'm on my knees
Praying

I remembered when rey said dat the song is for a special person and it's inspired from real events related to that person I remembered every moment spend with him and came to conclusion that the song was written for me

When he opens his arms
And holds you close tonight
It just won't feel right
Cause I can love you more than this, yeah
When he lays you down, I'm might just die inside
It just don't feel right
Cause I can't love you more than this

When he com
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Posted: 11 years ago
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reserved

unreserved

I loved it to core ...!!

Taarey are childhood bestfriends...wow

Haaye taani jealous

😉😉
n rey making her more n more jealous ...wow wow
n then the confession superb
although i loved it
Edited by ..vanshika.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Reserved.

Edited.

More than this made me think of One Direction 😳
n this OS was more than awesome Nimziii 😃🤗
beautifully written and described TR's feeling so perfectly <3

I'm broken, do you hear me?
I'm blinded cause you're everything I see <3

I love these lines so so so much <3

If I'm louder. would you see me?

Niall's part and Taani's imagination <3
Perfect..!!

Cause I can love you More Than This❤️

haaayyee..!!
Perfect ending <3

and then their confession <3 ☺️
Kiss <3

~*~

You dedicated it to me <3
Thank You Nimziii *tight wala hug*
PS. I Love the way it sounds Jana <3

~*~

Keep Writing and please update A Lot Can Happen Over a Lizard..!! I dont want it to end :)

-Jana
Edited by Jhanvi_TaaRey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cute os.
I loved the song , never heard it, now I will.
Rey with a guitar
And singing a song
Well written.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb os

Jealous taani..LOL!!!

Luved the song seq..

It was so heart touching

N their confession was cute n romantic too

Thanx for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nyc os ..
n beautifully written..
i lyk taani's pov parts :))
hehhehe... she answered him without evn him sayin dat he luvs her.. dat was so sweet :))
thnx4 pm n keep writing :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the OS Nimmi
Song wala part was the cutest
Confession toh class tha😉
Keep writing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was an amazing os
n ya i loved d introvert rey n taani taking d first step
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You have written this beautifully..
Never stop yourself from creativity!!
I loved this and many thanks for dedicating me🤗
Just a small suggestion, try to maintain a proper sentence otherwise diff to understand..use full stop to end one sentence ..i was lil confused😳
and yea, this is your first ever writing i hav read and you have done so well!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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taani jelous,😉😉nice one dear,nd i loved d song,

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