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Posted: 11 years ago
i came across ur story
read it in a go
nice story pm me if u can

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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally caught up n loving it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just came across your story! its one hilarious story My stomachs paining i was laughing so hard! My mom thought i hav gone.crazy Arnav and khushi aare so adorable!I think Smething's fishy about that nk wala thing! Anjali and shyam are too damn hilarious!! Update soon eagerly waitnig!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome chapter and amazing story!!! Please update soon:).
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Posted: 11 years ago

It took me some time to pen down my comments..being as lengthy as it is..(a few weeks to be exact 😛)

total bliss...euphoria and what not.Throughout the whole tale I had a permament grin plastered on my face.At times I felt weird looks thrown in my directn while I was happily laughing my head off ...In dearth of better words,I simply say Aashi u rock..bigtime👏🤗👍🏼

Anywz here goes

Chapter 1

God what a start..what a dramatic entry of khushi aka basanti...I was speechless

I dunno what was more hilarious..a pertified lavanya being called upon as dhanno/mare or aman as buddhi masi

our Nannav was lost into the beautiful hazel eyes and how quickly his reactn turned to jealousy when he was painfully snapped out of his reverie and saw the object of his attention hugging his brother... Arnav n Akash whispering...WHISPERING???? Really gives a whole new meaning to the phrase bromance

Chapter 2

Akash's perfect description of Basanti made Arnav see green immediately.And the little black book that Akash keeps to keep tab on Bhai's list of unsuitable Bhabhis on Anjali's command...rofl

Bechara Arnav,if there was a reality show ever made on his family it would surely win in the genre "best comedy show ever" 😉

And then a bored khushi casually taking her own sweet time striping off her lehenga...my my . Zor ka jhatka haye zoron se laga ...close your mouth Arnavji :D

Chapter 3

La and Aman arguing about their respective roles in Sholay 2013...haha ha.hilarious.My heart goes out for La,poor soul..all those hours in parlour and spa and there she was..reduced to Dhanno...she was a horse for Gods sake !!!

But Nannav not recognising his Basanti even after she called him Nannav 😕

Ramlal and Shyamlal finally agreed wo kisi dulhan ki bhoot hain..ha ha ha.They actually started chanting Hanuman Chalisa...and Arnav became their new superhero saving them from HER ...Felt sorry for Arnav a moment there,apart from his crazy family now his office staff also was becoming crazy.

Chapter 4

Mama mamis banter was a fun read.I like Mami's new avatar here.And the 21st century Sholay ..oh so cute.Gabbar the protector of little Basanti

Then comes the most funny part as the 3 siblings gave their own account how they met khushi..

Reception desk pe,Bhai ki baahon mein,Chotte ke cabin mein

Chapt 5

Arnav calls NK as a puppy...how apt 😃

Nannav blackmailing Khushi..."too bad I just did" I can just imagine the smug look on his face

Chapter 6

RM ppl praying to Devi Maiya..so funny...even DM must be having a fit in the heaven

The mighty ASR running from jalebi !!! omg..too good.that guy must have had his fair share of nightmares about that sweet after the whole fiasco to instill such a gr8 fear within him

Chapter 7

Google is no longer a verb,thanx to aman,the go to guy J the customised menu..what a stroke of genius .The meeting of the 3 musketeers..lol

SMJ aka Tommy must be the best Joru ka Ghulam there ever was...Reminds of the Vodafone puppy actually :D

In The Flashback khushis idea of making Arnav literally run for his life chased by Rocky ,who doesn't eat non-neg on Tuesdays(bechara must be trying to please the gods to give him his ladylove I think :p) to practise for the competition ..and that lil stunt lyk john abraham I couldnt stop laughing.. oh arnav u to rock...bachpan sehi

Akash has the worst timing among all the RM crazies...he interrupted a full blown Rabba ve!!

The "cockroach ve" was too funny.Matchmaker Anjali finally did sumthing rt...

Chapter 8

Arnav's "humanitarian " realization that he cant let Khushi marry any Tom/Dick/Harry..ah who are u kidding Arnvji :P

Anjali ko kuch kuch hota hain? Sachme? I had started doubting that.in the show I found extreme similarity in anjali and buajis character...one chanted nandkishore every few secs.and another had a diff puja every week of the day...boils down to the same really

Live trailors of nana nani romance !!!! I nearly choked.and the poor laxmiji..shw was better off with lavanya who left her "mutton" to do xactly as she pleased and roam about anywhere she pleased :P

Khushi had seen dabang 60 times!! My respect...I cud manage only once :D

The anklet scene brought wid it a sense of a so well known dj -vu to the arshi fans..but I like the additions..arnav kissing her,caressing her...how can she not feel special after that..is she blind !!

Chapt 9

Our Arnav babua day dreaming about his Khushi...ohh left me in jitters...bechara must hv felt gobsmacked when Anjali interrupted soo rudely to his good morning fantasy :p Come to think of it,what Anjali must hv felt seeing Chotte kissing the closet..how the mighty hv fallen :D

Aman's has his own personalised phn menu!!!! a customised answer for lavvu?boy does that steal the cake!! Whr whr do u get such ideas my god !! dhanno and buri masi's romance is soo sweet..Aman comes up wid d correct justificatn "since her diet is all gas-phoos" hence the name is so apt :D

Akash discovers Arnav's Mirror secret haha ha..rofl

The declaration of the will's content by Mr.Roy and the subsequent thoughts in the minds of RM crazies incl A n K.. was too good for words..


"Even Mr. Roy put his phone on silent mode, ignoring his pestering wife 'This is far more fun than any 'Besharam' can ever be' he thought amusedly." We agree wholeheartedly :D

Shyam aka tommyji aka ranisahibas ghulam stole the show ,being the only nearly normal person in the rm crazies must have taken its toll on him.

Mrs penguin raizada..and Nani's satsang date omg I cud die laughing

Chapt 10

Arnav finally confronts Khushi abt NK only to be made aware of his own past flings..ouch

In The flashback caught a glimpse of a fiery Khushi,a proud jungle billi defending Arnav..the other boy didn't knw what hit him as he fell flat on the grnd.thanx to khushi...loved it

Nani's room has become the HQ of all conspiracies in RM whr all the ladies are so busy sceming the next step in operation bring A-K together minus NK .Jai ho !!

Chapt 11

Who wud have thought the ladies to come up wid the idea of a contract marriage!! I nearly had a heart attack imagining Nani to go ahead wid it..Women on a mission...my god!

Akash and his rotten timing..issshhh.Seems he has taken the role of Aman, interuupting Arshi time evr n evr...whn will the guy evr catch a rt signal I wondr.His sms msg..oh boy plz dnt try to act so smart...although u luk adorable bt d purpse is nt servd 😆

Chapt 12

This must be the longest convesatn Aman ever had wid his boss and not being shouted upon..whr his opinion actually mattered (although the context was markedly diff) and his boss agreed wid him in the 1st go...he must hv checkd whether d sun had by any chance risen in the west first thing aft the "discussion"

Frogive..sorry forgv me,bt cant help demanding "Please update soon" 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
so i read the update after a long time sooorrry for that :)

These thoughts had put the 'Protective' enzymes of his brain to action.

so his protective enzymes are in action




'Aman.. Come and sit in my lap'


'Where the hell would you sit dammit.. On my head, of course on the bloody chair! Aman do remind me why I hired you pea head!'




'Yeah Aman, you're smarter that I give you credit for, contract will ensure Khushi stays here and I'll chalk the future as I want...nice!'





toothpaste me namak 🤣🤣


and the glare she received from both Arnav and Khushi, did shut her up, only for a minute though!

😆😆


and the flash back awww


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Posted: 11 years ago
Where r u??? It's been 1 month no update...

Pl update it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
~ Teaser~


"Di i agree that marriage has to happen ASAP but after 10 days? Has that Pandit freaking lost it? Lemme call Aman, he'll do something!"


"Bhai Aman knows how to read Kundali's as well? What a Multi tasker that man is, isn't it? I wonder what other hidden talents he has in his pocket" Aakash said excitedly, but one look at his brother's angry face and all his excitement went down in drain.


"yes chotte? Answer him. Is Aman an astrologer also? We got this auspicious date with so much difficultly and you dare not intervene in it, besides the dates for rest other rituals have also been set, so nothing can be changed."


"What The- Other rituals? Di we are having no other rituals and thats Final!"


"Arnav Bitwa! Bhat are you sayingz heinn? No other rituals? Humne to Mehndi, Haldi, shagun sab ke liye Dress bhi soch li hai. Hello hie bye bye, Rasam hoiye ke padi vrna humri saari pilannings bill go wastewa."


"Rehne dijiye Mamiji, Chotte ab bohat bade ho gaye hain, ab vo humari baat thode na sunanege. Wo ab apka accha bura samajhte hain." Anjali said in a heavy voice as two tears made their way out of her eyes.



Note:

Hello everyone! You are allowed to throw all types of Chappals and tomatoes. I've been so late in updating and even now its a teaser. The update is half done and rest of it i'll try and complete by tomorrow. All i can say is Sorry, my asli duniya is in a upheavel and I'm drained both physically and emotionally. I'll try and make up for the delay as much as i can.


P.S: In case you're wondering if my aatma is writing this, lemme tell you- I'm very much alive. Main zinda hoon, abhi mari nahi, just very busy! ;)
Tc.

Lots of sorry's and Hugs!
Forgive me yaaron! :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
welcome back! lovely teaser, waiting for the update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
pagal ho kya
aisa koi kheta hai kya
but what a teaser
poor arnie he wont know what hit him right
i so feel for him
but then it was bound to happen
will wait for ya
if can wait this much
another day will do too
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago

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