Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#401

what the!! contemptuous?? bt why??
egarly waiting for saturday..
continue soon:)

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Sharmila

@spsharmila

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Posted: 11 years ago

#402

Very intriguing teaser...can't wait to read the update 😃

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#403

Read both the parts in a go... amazing! You are such a versatile author!

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S.B.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#404

looking forward to the update

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JCJS

@JCJS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#405

A teasing teaser. Just excited for the update .

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Japonica

@Japonica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#406

Wow, wow, wow!!! Is all i can say, Jenny!

I love the raw, edgy, terseness of this story. It's mystery is laced with such deep sadness. You have created this dark world of desire and lust that lives off hopelessness and helplessness of those who work in this place full of shadows and unseen dangers.

It draws the reader in and holds them in not just with glimpes of Khushi and Arnav's past but also with the unexpected poetry of the single rose that symbolizes the beauty of the desire and attraction that Khushi and Arnav feel for each other.

For that is the only thing with hope in this world.

Who is Khushi? Who is Arnav? They are clearly 2 very broken spirits. But now I want to hear their stories.

Just read the Teaser- who/what is Arnav looking at with contempt?

So glad you've realised this will be an SS!!! 😃

Edited by Japonica - 11 years ago

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#407

wow interesting start

so Arnav supposedly killed his wife n her lover or did he???

love the passion & spark between them

even though she tries hard not to she always searches for him n is disappointed if he doesnt show...deep down she wants his attention she wants his stares

loved how Arnav tested her a few times n how his reactions when she reacted how he wanted

was the killer following her or was it Arnav?????

looking forward to more of him romancing her

also gotta say her flashback of her perfect guy n his actions was freaky like she was describing Arnav

looking forward to story progressing

thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon

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A_BA

@A_BA

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#408

Sorry for the late comment; I'm trying to catch up with so many different stories!!

I saw your note with the teaser and I'm relieved to know that this will not be a three shot; I mean there's just too much for this story to be completed in three chapters!!

Chapter two continued to cast an air of mystery; around the city, around Arnav and Khushi and both their pasts, and of course over the serial killer. There are so many different elements at play in this story and I am really looking forward to seeing how how you will continue.

The voice inside of Khushi leads me to believe that she's really messed up internally. I am hopeful that she will be come out of the gloomy situation in which she in surrounded, externally and internally!

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#409

Jenny...the story..is very intriguing...and you have been very clear about it being different!

The way you are penning it down...it doesn't seem disturbing...I'm glad it's not a 3 shot!

They both seem very caught up...and he seems like still very are bottled up...given...his history..I think they will be able to help one another...in more ways than one!

Jenny...you are a terrific writer...I love reading your work...The Impenetrable Heart...being one of my personal favorite!