Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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montyk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

WOW!! Totally new concept..

Serial killer, murder mystery

Khushi is a dancer ..

I really like the concept .. A different track from usual hate marriage and redemption

Looking forward to this new story..:)

Thank you for the notification dear :)

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Suchi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

Very interesting part.. loved it

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

wonderful part

plz update soon

thanks for the pm

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andy.a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

A different concept. Loved it.

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mklam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

My heart was in my mouth all along! Who's Jack the Ripper here?waiting with bated breath...

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sincereme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#256

Awesome update...

This FF has a thrilling affect... Making my heart beat fast while reading it... There seems to be something mysterious about both...

Love Arnav and Khushi encounter...

Who was following her??

Continue soon...

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JCJS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#257

Gosh just loved it man. Like watching a thriller sequel. Hmm so a killer Khushi and arnav nice moving. So Khushi needed in something. Excited for the next update. Thks for the pm dear.

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IDatIF

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Posted: 12 years ago

#258

It was an amazing update

I liked it because it is quite different from
All of the other ff

You have built the story very well countinue soon

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shona-li

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Posted: 12 years ago

#259

Curiouser, and curiouser! Khushi seems sufficiently dettached from the Major's steely gray eyes and yet she nurses secret fantasies of romancing with the same. The Major doesn't seem overly attached too, choosing to come as and when he pleases to the club. I can't sniff out a pattern. Everything seems very mysterious. Plus there is the homicidal qualities in the two of them that I just can't miss. Is Major the serial killer? Will Khushi be his sidekick? Strange bedfellows but oh well, birds of a feather do flock together!

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Arshi diwanee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#260

superb updt jenny..loved it..
so khushi was thinking abt arnav..intresting..love der moonlight romance;)
thank god it was arnav..is he da one who following her??
luking forward for nxt..
continue soon:)