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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#481

WELCOME BACK

I feel wonderful reading this another ASR musing.

Mint23, one of my favorite writers.

Her story khamoshiyan is the one of the best redemption stories written of IF. The way Arnav reacted reading it and khushi fading away the guilt he felt again for destroying khushi was really cute. 😳

Her seashell and seashore is a beautiful, simple tale begin in one of the heavenly place. Seychelles is worth visiting place once in a life time.

Nk and his super hilarious hindi lolz 🤣 and the sinful smile to give a hint a hint of Mint story seven sins, brilliant. lolz Arnav and khushi were competing who is more sinful and ASR wins, he always Wins.

Her OS are lovely and romantic especially the one she wrote for Vandana Di birthday, another lovely OS like peek-a-boo.

Didi Ki Sauth, LOLZ 😆

I didn't know she could sketch, her sketch is awesome. Drooling on it.

looking forward to read next musing.

update soon

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#482

Tooo good..loved it..I love mints stories..she is mind blowing writer..

Happy new year to u

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#483

Finally ASR is musing after a long time!! Is it because Mr. Raizada actually went to Seychelles with Mrs. Raizada after reading Mints TS. 😉
Welcome back Geeta!! I missed your writing so much.
When I read about Mints cookies I thought of Mints only. 😛
Khushi wants Arnav to ban IF.. Nahhhiinnn... Phir hamara kya hoga!!!
Arnav wanted to read the Seven Sins first.. 😆 No doubt about it..
Loved how they teased each other, how Khushi tried to prove that she has no sins and how they both reminded each other of the incidents which clearly states that they have these sins.
The sin of greed was was the most loved one here. 😃

I haven't read all of your work Mints but I plan to catch up soon. Your "The Seven Sin Series" was the first one I read. It was so beautiful and captivating. Other than that read your "Seychelles and Seashores" & "Love is..."
Your writing is lovely dear and so are you after getting to know about you on our crazy thread.😛
PS: I guess I'll first start with the original title of IPK - Didi Ki Saut. 😉
PS1 : Geeta tell Khushi to sue 4L for the above PS 😆

Edited by aquagal - 11 years ago

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#484

For The Muser and Musee...

Ms Marple I congratulate thee

For inspiring Gita successfully

A musing we got thankfully

That too on Mints my baby

A writer par excellence is she

Diverse are all her many stories

Every emotion captured perfectly

Romance, serious, happy or witty

She writes them all pretty amazingly

Didi ki Saut we laughed hysterically

Khamoshiyan made us cry out loudly

'Monsoon' felt like 'Magic' definitely

Leaving us feeling romantically

To the Seashore to go we are in a hurry

And collect there Seashells leisurely

Some scuba diving to do maybe

Or find out what 'Love is' actually

Gita, as ASR you excel really

Observant, every detail you see

Pick up each nuance superbly

Converting them so witty

The chocolate chip cookie..

A recipe for disaster agreeably

Even that you made so funny

A flavour I will now avoid surely

The Seven Sins you described aptly

Pride, lust, greed, gluttony sloth, wrath & envy

Bringing from the show some memories

Connecting each with our ASR & Khushi

Peek a Boo with us you did wholeheartedly

But now we hope to see Musings regularly

Or W*F we will all have to say unanimously

To ensure your writing we get to all see

With your readers you connect easily

This is true for both Gita and Mints23

A birthday dedication so special to me

'Love unspoken' but still so clearly...

We thank you for this opportunity

You are both so special we all agree...

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ZAIDI

@Miss.Zaidi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#485

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
For The Muser and Musee...

Ms Marple I congratulate thee
For inspiring Gita successfully
A musing we got thankfully
That too on Mints my baby

A writer par excellence is she
Diverse are all her many stories
Every emotion captured perfectly
Romance, serious, happy or witty
She writes them all pretty amazingly

Didi ki Saut we laughed hysterically
Khamoshiyan made us cry out loudly
'Monsoon' felt like 'Magic' definitely
Leaving us feeling romantically

To the Seashore to go we are in a hurry
And collect there Seashells leisurely
Some scuba diving to do maybe
Or find out what 'Love is' actually

Gita, as ASR you excel really
Observant, every detail you see
Pick up each nuance superbly
Converting them so witty

The chocolate chip cookie..
A recipe for disaster agreeably
Even that you made so funny
A flavour I will now avoid surely

The Seven Sins you described aptly
Pride, lust, greed, gluttony sloth, wrath & envy
Bringing from the show some memories
Connecting each with our ASR & Khushi

Peek a Boo with us you did wholeheartedly
But now we hope to see Musings regularly
Or W*F we will all have to say unanimously
To ensure your writing we get to all see

With your readers you connect easily
This is true for both Gita and Mints23
A birthday dedication so special to me
'Love unspoken' but still so clearly...

We thank you for this opportunity
You are both so special we all agree...

👏

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Skiran

@Skiran

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

For The Muser and Musee...

Ms Marple I congratulate thee
For inspiring Gita successfully
A musing we got thankfully
That too on Mints my baby

A writer par excellence is she
Diverse are all her many stories
Every emotion captured perfectly
Romance, serious, happy or witty
She writes them all pretty amazingly

Didi ki Saut we laughed hysterically
Khamoshiyan made us cry out loudly
'Monsoon' felt like 'Magic' definitely
Leaving us feeling romantically

To the Seashore to go we are in a hurry
And collect there Seashells leisurely
Some scuba diving to do maybe
Or find out what 'Love is' actually

Gita, as ASR you excel really
Observant, every detail you see
Pick up each nuance superbly
Converting them so witty

The chocolate chip cookie..
A recipe for disaster agreeably
Even that you made so funny
A flavour I will now avoid surely

The Seven Sins you described aptly
Pride, lust, greed, gluttony sloth, wrath & envy
Bringing from the show some memories
Connecting each with our ASR & Khushi

Peek a Boo with us you did wholeheartedly
But now we hope to see Musings regularly
Or W*F we will all have to say unanimously
To ensure your writing we get to all see

With your readers you connect easily
This is true for both Gita and Mints23
A birthday dedication so special to me
'Love unspoken' but still so clearly...
We thank you for this opportunity
You are both so special we all agree...

Its awesome Vandana ⭐️ 👏

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#487

So long tym
Missed u
As always loved it
Will have to read her other stories
I have only read seven sins
Thanks for the pm

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#488

G, excuse me from not commenting properly on the musing at this time (I will come back later of course, mostly tomorrow :) )

I have read only the closing note of this time's musings and there was this one sentence that caught my eye - Her writing is flawless and her stories are like a window into the soul of her characters.

I will comment on rest of the post soon, but I have to speak about this first.

Yes, MM's writing is indeed flawless. When I read SSS, I thought MM is lying by calling it her first work - she is a pro! (In writing and not in lying 😆) Apart from that, I am admitting this for the first time, I am slightly jealous at her command over the English language - she doesn't have typos in her updates nor does she make any apparent grammatical errors. In fact, whatever work I have read of hers has been so awesomely good - like a 10/10 in the grammar department 👏

Now about the latter part - that she brings soul to her characters. Give her 50000 words, 5000 words, 3000 words, 500 words or may be 10 words and her magic would be the same. Of what I have read of hers, all her stories are wholesome, never rushed with the right the kind of emotions...

Bas itna abhi ke liye kehna tha. Baaki ka kal uthne ke baad 😃

@G: Welcome back 😃

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#489

Vandana awesome poem
U write brilliantly:)

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msmarple

@msmarple

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#490

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
For The Muser and Musee...

Ms Marple I congratulate thee
For inspiring Gita successfully
A musing we got thankfully
That too on Mints my baby

A writer par excellence is she
Diverse are all her many stories
Every emotion captured perfectly
Romance, serious, happy or witty
She writes them all pretty amazingly

Didi ki Saut we laughed hysterically
Khamoshiyan made us cry out loudly
'Monsoon' felt like 'Magic' definitely
Leaving us feeling romantically

To the Seashore to go we are in a hurry
And collect there Seashells leisurely
Some scuba diving to do maybe
Or find out what 'Love is' actually

Gita, as ASR you excel really
Observant, every detail you see
Pick up each nuance superbly
Converting them so witty

The chocolate chip cookie..
A recipe for disaster agreeably
Even that you made so funny
A flavour I will now avoid surely

The Seven Sins you described aptly
Pride, lust, greed, gluttony sloth, wrath & envy
Bringing from the show some memories
Connecting each with our ASR & Khushi

Peek a Boo with us you did wholeheartedly
But now we hope to see Musings regularly
Or W*F we will all have to say unanimously
To ensure your writing we get to all see

With your readers you connect easily
This is true for both Gita and Mints23
A birthday dedication so special to me
'Love unspoken' but still so clearly...

We thank you for this opportunity
You are both so special we all agree...

Vandana,

I am humbled. Thank You!

You are giving me the credit for inspiring Gita to return to het ASR avatar or rather for having a relapse of her rarest of rare mental condition 😃

What I wonder is ...is it a good thing to inspire someone to have a relapse??????😆

I tried very hard today to respond back in rhyme but unfortunately my brain cells are not cooperating 😕

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