ArHi FF: Keep Loving Me, Will You? [Complete] #1 - Page 2

very good concept...i always trust writer to write the story how they want and never put pressure on them to change their stories...but only thing i do not like is sheetal...in any form...lol...

Awesome prologue., this aman nd asr convo sounds like comedy saas bahu show..where saas keep blabbering about stuffs nd bahu keep watching tv lol...i thought khushi will be asr's pa but from where sheetal lands!!!! Wooo where is our jalebi bai khushi? Hope her entry will be dhamakedhar...waiting for next update

BTW kiran banner is awesome!!

WHAT THE?????? i was expecting the name kushi but u gave me a shock which led my eyes go round n bigger as usual in shock and forming a big O the way kush does when you said sheetal lol...

your story did not even start and u gave us a twist already hehe,o i so can't wait for the next update and now u made me wonder how he meets kushi ..scratching head and thinking face on lol..

maybe sheetal is kushis elder sister????okay il just stop giving my absurd ideas and leave it to you the professional to entertain us hehe...

ooo i love Aman here lol his weird sense of humor is too much lol i literally laughed out loud when he congratulated akash before waiting to hear Wat the news is about lol..

i like the fact here akash character is not the silent or shy type...as in his not boring but yes he still the calm and pleasant akash i like hehe..he seems like he will b a bit more outgoing in the story,unless i interpreted it wrong and i am just taking nonsense lol..

as for AS aka Arnav Singh Riaziada ...well his just hot arrogant ..tempremental and awesome asr who we all always will love hehe..

can't wait for kushi's entrance hehe...keep up the awesome work...i always loved a story with humor in it,hope that doesn't leave the story...

well and beautifully written and enjoyed the prologue from begining to end...

Interesting concept
Very excited to read further
update soon and pm me when u update

Wow
Awesome...
Loved aman and arnav's bonding...
Fabulous start..,
I would love to read it..,
Update soon..:

Originally posted by: varshamaharaj

WHAT THE?????? i was expecting the name kushi but u gave me a shock which led my eyes go round n bigger as usual in shock and forming a big O the way kush does when you said sheetal lol...

your story did not even start and u gave us a twist already hehe,o i so can't wait for the next update and now u made me wonder how he meets kushi ..scratching head and thinking face on lol..

maybe sheetal is kushis elder sister????okay il just stop giving my absurd ideas and leave it to you the professional to entertain us hehe...

ooo i love Aman here lol his weird sense of humor is too much lol i literally laughed out loud when he congratulated akash before waiting to hear Wat the news is about lol..

i like the fact here akash character is not the silent or shy type...as in his not boring but yes he still the calm and pleasant akash i like hehe..he seems like he will b a bit more outgoing in the story,unless i interpreted it wrong and i am just taking nonsense lol..

as for AS aka Arnav Singh Riaziada ...well his just hot arrogant ..tempremental and awesome asr who we all always will love hehe..

can't wait for kushi's entrance hehe...keep up the awesome work...i always loved a story with humor in it,hope that doesn't leave the story...

well and beautifully written and enjoyed the prologue from begining to end...

Originally posted by: Hina69

BTW kiran banner is awesome!!

But akash is there too in it so is yhis gonna be love triangle?

OH GOD! this thought just cross my mind that maybe khushi have changed her name to sheetal...i know m thinking too much😆

Nice concept
Eager to knw abt khushi nw
And
I'll surely Keep Loving this ff dear

Originally posted by: ayesha998

Nice concept
Eager to knw abt khushi nw
And
I'll surely Keep Loving this ff dear