*COMPLETED*#3!! FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 21 to 27 - Page 67

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wiwy the wicked!!! Khush kiya kudiye!!!!! Just finished reading last three updates so this is a combo comment for all three. Introducing Maa's dupatta, in fact that entire temple scene with her and Anjali in their Radha Krishna temple at Sheesh Mahal, was divine. A touch of gold. Original, and so perfectly used in the Diwali update!
Usske liye special 👏 👏.

I'm so glad you extended the story. The latest update doesn't feel stretched in the least... like it was always meant to be like this! I've always really liked the urgency with which you explore their intimacy. Works wonderfully...cos it's so real!
Bed ko kya fit kiya marble mansion mein tumney! 😆

Absolutely adored the moment he drapes Maa's dupatta around her shoulders. Great touch. ⭐️

And the most brill line: Angrejo ka rakhshak 😆 Hanuman ji ka chela 😆 😆...apt apt description for humara angrej raijada!!

Don't end it yaar!!! Aur agar you just have to have to, then please write another one jaldi se!! This is way too much fun!!




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Posted: 11 years ago
chapter 25
awesome
mindblowing
i was loving every inch of it
thanks a lot for wonderful update😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow seriously loved the update and this story so much! keep up the great work! thanks for pm!
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Posted: 11 years ago
good one...so, atlast arnav ready to accept...
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh wow
thanks a lot
will miss this ff 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant update..
Loved d update vry much..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks a lot!😃
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Thanks a tonne for liking and commenting😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anu1017

Awesome update😊 loved it!!!!


Thankyou so much!!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RSanaya71

Love this update .He loves her and he confesses it.Awww...

Nice Di.😊


Thankyou😃 for enjoying

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