*COMPLETED*#3!! FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 21 to 27

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: sanjanasree
nice update

Thank you so much!😃

Originally posted by: badfaith4u
Shyam tricked Mami and Lav
And those believed him

I hope Arnav's plan works
And Shyam gets arrested

Yes, Shyam is a scoundrel, and must be arrested and Mami and lav too gullible! Thanks for commenting. 😃

Originally posted by: sarozz
Don't worry khushi, arnav to the rescue...

Thankyou for your positive vibes, says Khushi!😃

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: lalarukh
wow wt an update yaar...very very nice...beautifully written...things got cleared ...arnav and his harvard brain :)...so he was restless whole night and called anjali early morning to know abt khushi...loved the way from lav and mamiji...to shyam and his driver billu...he joined the clues together fast and did required action by interogating mami ji and lav...mamaji is cool here :)...loved the way khushi thought abt her happy times which obviously only and only includes our dear hero arnav :)...hope arnav reach her asap :)...lovely update...asusual things sorted out saath k saath :)

Ha ha! good use of the Harvard brain for a change, what say! 😃 Things sorted out saath saath like I said before I hatee misunderstandings and "Pushpa,I hate tears"(Amarprem)

Many thanks for enjoying the update!😃

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..Anita..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#283

All I can say is whoa
Arnav will surely teach Shyam a lesson

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shakrobaaj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#284

What an update..Wiwyji..
Yeh Anjali bhi na...jab inhejab in between the lines read karna hota hai tab hi nahi karti...
kya ASR ke aise din aa gaye ki woh Laxmiji ko yaad kar or miss bhi..😆

here goes another torture round for Aman..naam tih achchha hai but iss janab ki Kundli mai ASR naam ka jo grih hai woh kabhi shanti nahi lene dega...😆

ASR ping pong bol...agar Aman ne Laxmi wali baat suni hoti toh kya hota...😳 just imagine..

toh ab aayega Camlewa hills ke niche..
I mean..
billu banega bhigi billi,
Shyam tera kya hoga..tune ASR se panga liya phir se ..😡 now see and bare the pain...
cause you don't have mind that too returned from Howard ...ASR will maaring maaring and chatni banaawing tumhare Bones ki aur Puppies ko baating...aur phir tum singing...

AAJ KAL PAV ZAMEE PAR NAHI PADTE MERE,
TUMNE DEKHA HAI MUJE CHALTE HUE?..

so Mamaji, Mamiji and Ms.La teeno ko uss Shyam ne phasaaya tha ...
gold digger hai Kaun..

thank you for the pm..
and for the hilarious update..

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Jyothi Rockzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#285

Read last three parts at a time just now...

Loved them...

Happy to see Arnav's Harvard brain full at work... Is MAMAJi really good or just pretending...?

So Lavanya n Mamiji were involved with Syam in conspiring against ARSHI.. Hope Shyam keeps his words n leave khushi unhurt..

Hope Khushi stops doing the grave mistake she was abt to do by getting engaged to NK because she is angry on one ASR...

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arshi_1982

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Posted: 11 years ago

#286

Very nice plot...The story is getting very interesting.

Lavanya n Mamiji seem to have sold off their brains for cosmetics...How the hell can Shyam be gud when he betrayed Anjali...Idjits 😡

At last the Blessed Harvard brain of Arnav is doing its job.

Waiting for next ASR move.

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Putija

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Posted: 11 years ago

#287

Wiwy wonderful update read both parts at once kidnapping they needed something like that to get back to their love.😆 very interesting turn

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: raniluvsasr
Hey thnnxx fr d p,,loved d update. Fantastic. Omg shyam kidnapped khushi. Hope arnav is able to save her. Update sooon.

Yes I too hope Arnav is able to save her!😉 Thanks for enjoying the story!😃

Originally posted by: lovebarun...
so everything out in the open, arnav sure has feelings for khushi but is not sure about it.. great.. khushi dear, wait.. our arnav will definitely help you

Yes everything out in the open except their wistful longing for each other!😃 I am glad you are confident that Arnav will safe Khushi!😉

Originally posted by: deepa.e
Finally few things are out!!
Oh arnav is not even realizing that he is totally out!!
Awesome awesome awesome update!!
Pls cont soon!!
I want shyam behind the bar soon!!
Pls cont son!

Hey thanks!😳 You are awesome yourself! 😃

Originally posted by: Suchi.R
Fabulous part.. loved it

Thanks a tonne !😃

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: surlin_chhabra
nice one
hate mamu and LA for doing this to Khushi
hope arnav teaches shyaam a gud lesson
waiting for next update

Thanks for liking and commenting.😃