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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Too good. Whistle could do wonders ..😆
Written in a different backdrop was really interesting .. And the conversation between to use finger and blow hard was amazing 😆
Very well written ..

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Suchi

@ChitraF

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Its too good.. please continue this..

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Absolutely adorable!

From being annoyed to being mesmerized!

I loved this college ArHi, they were so cute. I could just imagine it playing out in my head. A teasing Arnav, that look in his eyes as he watched Khushi, who would be blushed and gasping for breathe, either unable to look away or not meet his eyes at all.

You took a punny silly concept and turned into something intense and life changing for these two!

I just wonder what would happen if you were to take this further! :D

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Brilliant OS! Write more like this. Loved reading it!

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#135

fantastic... and oh so naughty, farha. suck... blow... don't move your tongue away from my... ohhhoho in a very very mad mood my writer friend. loved it. really who knew a whistle had such possibilities?

He heard nothing as his whole being was busy supporting his optical needs. deadly line.

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asthagarwal

@asthagarwal

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

My gutter brains were activated thru out... 😳

Gud 1... 👏

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

awww..that was really chweet 😃

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Stronger, sharper, sexier res 😉

Edited:

So, Arnav Khushi study in the same business school and apart from studying liquidation and bankruptcy they were engaging in some distance education about each other 😉

Bohot notice kiya hain dono ne ek doosre ko 😳

The way you wrote this OS, with so much of sexual tension, I wouldnt have been surprised if they had kissed at the end ☺️

Actually iska ek part 2 toh banta hain yaar where she whistles, he understands the concepts and they kiss 🥳. What say???

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago