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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome story ...i just love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
yeah kriya kahan chali gayi????
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome superb..
loved d update..
loved d way kria changed her dress to a different shade of green n also made rey happy.. awesome...
but where did kria go??
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm glad you guys liked the places. It took me a lot of time researching on Rome. And many people out there have been requesting me to increase the length of the updates. Guys I'm sorry but I can't give lengthy updates due to my hectic schedule. That's the reason I've started it as drabble series. Plus my updates comprise of nearl 500 words and at times it crosses 600. Anyways, here's the next installment.


Part 14:


Rey left the show in between and hurried all the way trying to find her. For lord's sake what will he answer to his and her family in case if he doesn't find her. It wasn't that he wasn't worried for her. Yes he was concerned for her just as a friend and nothing else.


"Gosh, where could have this girl be gone?" he muttered under his breath cursing her to all possible extent.


"Excuse me? Have you seen a lady in bluish green frock somewhere around here?" He asked a pedestrian passing by.


"I'm sorry, but no." That person replied and left.


He was quite away from the Villa and strangely there was no one present there. It was pitch dark and the only source of light was the moon and a street lamp. It was so calm yet a bit scary. He hoped she'd be safe.


"Kriyaaa" He yelled. But all that he got in response was his own echo. Letting out a frustrated and exhausted sigh, he continued hunting for her. He covered up some distance and could faintly hear the sounds oh the heels.


"Kriya" He screamed again. As he proceeded further the sound was more clear. He was standing and the end of a lane and could see a feminine figure at a far of distance inside it. He wasn't sure if she was Kriya or not but decided to check.


He proceeded towards her and the more he paced up the faster that girl started waling. In order to stop her he again called out. "Kriya is that you?" On hearing his voice that girl turned around and he felt relieved. He could see a few arm prints on her upper arm. But the next instant what happened astonished and puzzled him. She literally ran into his arms tugging onto him tightly, burying her head in his chest. All he could do was just wrap his hands around her and try to comfort her.


On hearing Rey's voice Kriya felt extremely relieved. In a spur of moment she hugged him 'cause that's what her subconscious mind ordered her. And to be honest she felt secured. Tears wouldn't stop flowing down.


"Shh, calm down and tell me exactly what all happened?" He asked.


She pulled back and wiped her tears. "Uh, sorry for this hug.."


"Never mind. And now spill the beans."


Taking a deep breath she started. "Actually, while enjoying the show, I saw Rajeev or to be more precise a person with similar face and features. I was confused. I don't know what had gotten into me but I wanted to make sure that, that person wasn't Rajeev. So i excused myself and followed him. After walking out of that place he stopped at a nearby park where a gang of guys were waiting for him. Initially I was scared but to get confirmed I mustered up courage and questioned him. From his accent it was evident he wasn't Rajeev and he stated his name as Martin. He and his gang were staring at me oddly. Before I could make a move he grabbed me and misbehaved me with his freinds accompanying him. With all my strength I pushed him away and ran out from there. After a while I discovered that I was lost in this unknown place and was trying to find a way out and that's when you found me. I'm sorry for acting so naive knowing that Rajeev died in front of my eyes. I'm sorry for troubling you."


He gritted his teeth while listening to her narration. He wasn't a calm and patient person. Once she completed he slapped her out of his anger at her foolishness. She was rooted to the spot. Here she was expecting him to understand her but this action of his was no less than an electric shock.


Haha nice ending eh? 😈 Like and review please.

Edited by lovely7010 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Godd i expected something similar...
thankgod kriya is safe!!
uff pagli...she threw herself in danger...
thankgod Rey found her...and their hug😳😳 anjaane mein hi sahi
why did rey slap her?? uff itna gussa...waiting to see where this is heading😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting update...
bt rey slapped her..😲
waiting for next part...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
why did rey slap her??
uff itna gussa
thnks
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome update...
felt sad 4 kriya...
nd u ended update on such a point...
do update it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
rey uss pe chilllaega??
haina??? ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
hmm..i was thinking abt sumthing like this only..
haye kriya ko rey ne slap mara..poor kriya..
awsum update..
loved it..

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