Originally posted by: sonisam22
Hey š
Am an all time silent reader of all your TaaRey works. . .I have enjoyed reading all your TaaRey fictions. . .
Eagerly waiting for further updates of "Do Ajnaabi Season 2"
My favorite one (all are superb good, still) I would like to quote "SS : Do Ajnaabi"Coming to this fiction :
Frankly, I have enjoyed reading all the parts of this fiction, be it
- Reyaansh - Taani meet
- TaaRey nok - jhoks
- MMS Fiasco
- TaaRey Marriage - [the part in which Reyaansh talks about the "contract" to Taani (that is one of my most favorite scenes)
- Reyaansh and Taani becoming friends š³
- Taani Simmi bond
- Vickys twist (It was really so hard to visualize Prateek as Vicky in this fiction. So I pictured Vicky as Lavin and Prateek as Shivam š)
- Swayam part. Though less, I loved his role.
Especially Swayam - Taani talk when Taani went to her home for first time after marriage
(Again, that was one of my most favorite scenes)
Next evening, Swayam comes back from two days business trip and meets with Taani. After having some casual talk, Taani asks him about the current financial condition of the family. She knew that Swayam is trying to do some business in his own.
"Bhai, the expenses are really increasing these days. I am worried about our future days. Are you planning something for us?"
"Taani, please don't include yourself in your family now. You belong to one of the richest family of this city now. Give me some time, I am trying to setting up my own business. After that our condition will be better for sure."he replies her back. Swayam is tensed for his business condition and his mood is not good at this moment. Though he tries to do well, but he fails miserably in every aspect.
"Bhai, you are wrong. I will be daughter of this family till my death. Shaadi ho jaane se betiya paraya nahi ho jata" she tells him firmly
"Aur sirf dialogue de ne se koi beti nahi baan jaati. Leave it Taani, you are the guest and I don't want to insult you" Swayam about to leave the room. But Taani holds his way block.
"What? I have done nothing for this family except to advice you. You have to tell me Bhai. I have heard that you have sold all nani's jewellery for your stupid business. Kabhi baaki sab ke baare mein soacha hai? About Piyu? about mami ji?"
"Taani, see at yourself before pointing out at me. I am not like you who just got married for her own happiness and money, only. I am still fighting for my family. My luck is ditching me, that's all. Otherwise.."
"Stop your nonsense, Bhai. Jab bhi aap kaam karne mein nakam hote ho, you start blaming your luck."
"Taani!!!" Swayam goes to slap Taani, but Rey comes to hold his hand before it can place that big slap on Taani's soft check.Taani closes her eyes in fear.- Rinni Taani bond
- Reyaansh past (Diary part)
- Taani 's realization (Reyaansh - Taani - Simmi scene: shopping mall cum ice - cream)
- Reyaansh s confession
- Last part. Reyaansh - Taani cute moment
If I keep on quoting, it's never going to end.
In short, I really loved reading all the parts.
Glad that you gave a happy ending to it.
Really going to miss this fiction.
I understand as a writer you love to read the feedback of readers. I am sorry that I haven't commented on this fiction till now. . . Trust me; I was in lack of words. . . I think of writing many things; but at end when I sit down to pen it down, I literally use to find myself in lack of words. . .
Hope by the little feedback given, you are able to make out how much I loved your fiction. . .
You are a fabulous writer. . .Keep writing š
Stay blessed
With Loveā¤ļø
Sonia
Thank You so much Sonia for this sweet little comment. Trust me I never feel tired reading this.
And it always brings a huge smile on my face.
I am glad that you loved this entire season.
i always tried to portray something different from the show, like Vikkie, Swayam etcš³
And of course Mr Reyansh Singhania.
O wao..Do Ajnaabi season2 has already started. I have taken a break for some days,
after that i m gonna start it of with another SS - "Jootha Hi Sahi"
Thanks dear for loving and appreciating me.
I love you and huggsss..mmuuuaazzz
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