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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

hey nice story... just read it... you are an excellent writer...

please update soon and pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pm me...
pls!<puppy face>
update soon


Awhh, thank you! 😳 I will update today! 😃 Please buddy me for PM's
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MagsDhingra

Read ol parts in one go...
Amazing story i lv it plz pm me whnever uh update i have sent uh buddy rqst...plz continue soon


Glad you enjoyed it! 😃 Thank you! 😳 Accepted your buddy request, continuing today! So excited! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: delena_

plz plz update soon i just loved it!


Thank you! 😳 Updating today!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

hey when are you updating? update soon please


Updating today! So sorry for the late update!! 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
~ NOTE ~


Hi guys! Its Rads here! 😳 Anyways this note is for, clarifying a few things to y'all! 😃


P M ' s

Alright! So I send all PM's to those on my buddy list! Please buddy me for PM's, unfortunately I don't send single PM's. Luckily, I accept all buddy requests! ❤️ One more thing! 😳 I send PM's very late! I may forget sometimes, so please bear with me. I will send you PM's very often, but usually a few days or a day after I posted. If you didn't get a PM it's not because I forgot you, I forgot everyone! I try my best with PM's and will try most often to send you guys one right after a post.


U p d a t e s

I try my best to give you guys recent and long updates, but its not quite working anymore! 😭 Sorry about this guys! I don't want to flunk my exams, so I get too caught up with work and the updates come mostly on weekends... Also my updates are pretty short because my mind never works when it needs too! I get my ideas when I'm not writing, and I write at the top of my head. 😃 But look at the bright side! We're getting a extra long update today! Its a treat from me to you! 😳 One more thing, I update mostly on weekends. Weekday updates is just not my thing too much work yaar! I update on weekdays when I'm free. 😉


C o m m e n t s

I reply to most comments! Well I try! If I didn't reply to your comment, please don't mind. I can't reply to each and every one of your comments. I am trying my best to! So please don't mind for any late replies or no reply at all. From now on I am replying to most of the comments I get, way more than I did before. 😆 So yaaah! So sorry again if I didn't reply!


Thanks with putting up with my constant blabbering! Enjoy your day!! ❤️



Edited by --Radhika-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice! ok thnaks pls update now!
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Posted: 11 years ago
thats cool concentrate on ur exams! best of luck
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Posted: 11 years ago


From Friendship to Love.

~Chapter 8~


PLEASE CHECK THE NOTE ABOVE!


Ok, don't know where I'm quite going with the story, so about the girl reveal. I've decided of taking that part out of the story. So basically what that means is no billi! I'm going straight to Dilshaad and Najma's plan. I'll be ending this story soon! Let me know what you think. Enjoy!! ❤️




The night was very silent. Everyone was putting food on their respective plates and started eating. Dilshaad and Najma were eyeing each other. When to put their plan in action?

Najma: Uh Bhaijaan, I got my exam reports!

Najma tried to start a conversation to end this awkward silence. But her bhaijaan was too busy eyeing with Zoya.

Najma: Bhaijaan?

Asad: Uh yes?

Najma: I got my exam reports.

Asad: And?

Dilshaad: She did very bad! Asad what can we do with her! She use to be one of the top students? Now what do I tell Akira Khala!

Asad: Najma, didn't I tell you to study hard for your tests? You have to get into architecture just like me. Anyways leave it, next exam I want to see good responses!

Najma: Ji Bhaijaan! Zoya bhabi is good at architecture too! She got her masters on it! Hai na bhabi?

Zoya just silently nodded, she was in no mood of starting a conversation. Asad and Dilshaad were stunned at her actions.

Dilshaad: Did you guys have a fight?

Zoya and Asad: No!

Dilshaad: To phir?...

Zoya: Kuch nahi phupi! Just some people don't remember important dates of their life, thats all.

Important date? What day could it be today? It's definitely not her birthday, or their anniversary then what?

Zoya: Phupi I'm sleepy! May I go?

Dilshaad: Haan Beta, tum jao.

With that Zoya ran upstairs. Asad wanted to go as well, but his ammi would go suspicious so he decided to quickly finish his food and go meet Zoya.

Dilshaad: Everyone done? Chalo? Time to sleep, I'm very tired.

Asad and Najma: Ji. Chaliye.

Everyone went to their respective rooms and retired for the night. Except Asad. He came into his room and saw Zoya on the bed with the bed sheet covering her face again. Asad decided to sleep on the couch for the night, after all he didn't want to experience the same thing that happened last night.

Asad was extremely tired so he slept. Zoya slowly removed the bed sheets from her face and checked if Asad was asleep. He was. She was burning with anger! How could he forget this day? She wanted to throw her pillows at him!

Zoya relaxed after a few minutes and heard a noise. She listened more closely and heard the lyrics of the same song her Ammi use to sing her.

Baba ki rani hoon aankhon ka pani hoon
Baba ki rani hoon aankhon ka pani hoon
Beh jaana hai jise do pal kahani hoon
Amma ki bitiya hoon aangan ki mitiya hoon
Amma ki bitiya hoon aangan ki mitiya hoon

Zoya quickly got up from her bed and slowly opened the door so Asad wouldn't wake up.

Took took nihare jo pardesi chithiya hoon
Mamta ke aanchal mein
Jo geet gaaye hai
Babul ne chut put jo
Sapney sajaye hai


It was more clear to her now, those sweet memories of before. Zoya went out of her room and walkedtowards the room the music was playing. It traced her to Dilshaad's room. Zoya peeked through the door and saw Dilshaad singing beautifully.

Baba ki rani hoon aankhon ka pani hoon
Baba ki rani hoon aankhon ka pani hoon
Beh jaana hai jise do pal kahani hoon
Amma ki bitiya hoon aangan ki mitiya hoon
Amma ki bitiya hoon aangan ki mitiya hoon
Took took nihare jo pardesi chithiya hoon
Pardesi chithiya hoon
Pardesi chithiya hoon


By now Zoya had tears streaming from her eyes. Dilshaad turned around and saw Zoya standing at herdoor crying.

Dilshaad: Arre! Zoya? When did you come?

Dilshaad: Come here beta.

Zoya sat down beside Dilshaad and hugged her tight.

Zoya: My Ammi used to sing this song to me, you sing far more better than her!

Dilshaad: Thank you beta. Don't cry now.

She wiped Zoya's tears away and by that time Najma had came. She was so happy to see Dilshaadand Zoya connect so much.

Najma: Mere paas ek idea hai!

Zoya: What is it tamartar?

Najma: Lets play a game!

Dilshaad: Konsa game beta?

Najma: Okay so the rules are that somebody has to sing a line of a song, and the next personhas to continue that song. Okay?

Zoya: Okay! Chalo I'll start.

Asad: WAIT!

Everyone turned towards the door and were stunned to see Asad standing there at the door smiling at them. He had never been interested in these singing song games or such.

Dilshaad and Najma were very happy that their plan was going on the right track!But this was just the beginning, there was way more to unveal.

Asad: I'm going first!

Zoya: And who exactly said you can play?

Asad: I did and so I'm going first!

Zoya: Oh really?

Asad was smiling at Zoya. He was happy that all three girls get along together so well! Zoya fits perfectly with the family. She brought the color into his colorless family. Thank you Zoya. He thought.

Najma: Hello bhaijaan? Earth to bhaijaan!

Asad: Oh sorry, I was thinking about something.

Najma: Bhabi? Must be nah!!

Zoya: Leave him Najma, its not me. When he can't even remember a special day like this, why would he be thinking about me.

Dilshaad: Why not? What day is it today?

Zoya: Phupi app bhi? I thought at least someone would remember!

Najma: I remember!

Zoya: Oh really what day is it today?

Najma: Well today is the day I got my exam reports! That's why you must be mad na? Bhaijaan forgot!

Zoya was frustrated! How could everyone forget this special day? It was the first day she and Asad became friends!

Zoya: Mr. Khan you are such an idiot!

Asad: Indeed, now may I begin my preformance?

Dilshaad: Yes Yes!

Asad grabbed his guitar and started singing.

Chaahe kuch na kehna
Bhale chup tu rehna
Mujhe hai pata, tere pyar ka
Khamosh chehra, ankhon pe pehra
Khud hai gawaah, tere pyar ka

Teri jhuki nazar, teri har ada
Mujhe keh rahi hai ye dastaan
Koi shaqs hai jo ki in dinon
Tere zehan-o-dil pe hai chha gaya
Teri jhuki nazar, teri har ada
Mujhe keh rahi hai ye dastaan

Teri zulf jab bhi bikhar jaati hai
Aye haseen tu haseen aur ho jaati hai
Jo kitaabo me padhte rahe aaj tak
Woh pari humko tujh mein nazar aati hai


Teri hi baahon mein, panaahon mein
Rehna mujhe hardum sada
Teri hi yaadon mein, nigaahon mein
Rehna mujhe har dum sada
Teri hi baahon me, panaahon me
Rehna mujhe hardum sada
Hardum sada



Zoya sat there mum and rolling her eyes at his whole preformance. But she had to admit, he was a good singer. Asad was just about to finish when Dilshaad came up with another idea to get them closer!

Dilshaad: Zoya beta! Why don't you join Asad!

Zoya: Me? No, no I can't sing Ammi.

Dilshaad: Arre! You just sang with me! Come on beta! For my sake.

Great. Now I have to sing with him/her. Thought Asad and Zoya.



Precap:

No precap today! Its a surprise! 😃



How did you like it? I tried making it as long as possible! It was five pages on word! Please give your feedback (good or bad) Thanks for reading! I'll try updating again sometime!! 😳


Next Chapter ~ Chapter 9

Edited by --Radhika-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yay! First to comment
wow loved it asya are coming out of the freindzone
asome! zoya mad at asad 😆
awww first day they became freinds!
very long updat thnx!1!!
Edited by arshiasya_101 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

thats cool concentrate on ur exams! best of luck


Thank you so much for your support! 😳 Hope you enjoy todays update! 😃

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