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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

loved the start

awesome one

thanks for the pm

Twinkle

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navjot7

@navjot7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

awesome starting
i just love it
so arnav and khushi parents are friends
who attach them ?
u mention some murlie surname of garima why
was shashi and garima were not married?
i think its going to be very suspens story
this mean arnav khushi are so small that they are not going to remember each other
i am waiting for next updt
updt soon
thnx for pm

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sfghfj

@sfghfj

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Interesting start. Waiting to read further. Pls pm me when u update

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rashmi

@morning_dews

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

U write it so well...!!!

I fell in love with this already...!

it feels so realistic...!

U have a good writing skill, buddy...!!

Great start...!

Do PM me ur updates :))

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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

nice start
so khushi is shashi's daughter and someone is behind their properties but why garima is with different surname
oh arnav is younger one and he is orphan felt bad for akash and arnav
can't wait for the story to proceed
update soon
thanks for pm

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cherrybloom1

@cherrybloom1

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Do i have to repeat it again?

Well, not that I mind!

You were, are and will always be an amazing writer!

So, lets not get to that because you already know I can go on and on about your writing.

Lets come to Your new story.

Firstly, CONGRATULATIOOONSSS

Thank you so so so so much for getting us a new story, which means I can dream about something new now. You know I have been dreaming about your previous story, thinking what would have happened when Arnav left for US and when they met again for the first time after he returned, i was so bored imagining the same thing, bad creativity skills I have!!!! :P

Anyway, not the point, lets come back to this new story which is awaiting us!!!!

I absolutely loved the story, I could really feel the pain Shashi must have gone through, i could feel my eyes going moist.

Loosing the love of your life is not an easy thing, even though i cant relate to it personally, since i have never been on that stage but I can somehow feel it. I am an emotional fool and these little things absolutely make me senti.

Though i wonder what the newspaper article meant.

Are shashi and garima not married yet they have a kid?

because it clearly mentioned about "a woman" not "the wife of Shashi", so that has really put me to think what really is happening.

I cant wait for the story to unfold and see the life of arnav and khushi and get to know about the secrets behind this accident and everthing u have in store for us!!!

im so glad u wait for my comments!!!!!

and i cant wait to read more of this!!!!

continue soon pleaseee

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foesb

@foesb

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Hi, came a cross the prologue and it was fantastic!!Shahis's plight was depicted very well,but seems like there are some mysteries to revealed as Garima wasn't identified as the wife of Shashi in the news paper article. Khushi off to UK and Arnav growing up with out his parents. Will be interesting to see how these two will meet each other and how the story will progress amidst everything. Looking forward for the updates😊

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Love.life2

@Love.life2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Thnx for d pm

Beautifully written prologue.

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Wow great story plz update soon
Cong on the new story
Thanks for the pm

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

paakhee.. 'ye tune kya kiya'.. This one is a thriller!

Really! I still remember the first tym i read Love and us, and i couldn't stop mysefl from reading more!

Raizada's and Gupta's are family frnds, with rishi, anita, garima and shashi being college mates..

Raizada's and Gupta's sound to me pretty popular industrialiats.. With name, fame and wealth!

At present time, Khushi would be 20 and arnav would be 18, both of them, totally unaware of the fact that they are orphaned together, by fate!

Khushi will grow up as orphan.. So wud she like work for living? Or would Shahsi support her through Madhumati,discreetly as possible..?

Arnav and aakash, brothers this time and aakash being the elder one!

All this sounds really interesting!
So my friend.. We are with you, walkng towards the edge!