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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#241

wow...
superb update. ..
loved it..
thanks fr pm

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#242

awesome update

loved it

thanks for the pm

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Harsha, thanx for the pm.
Forget Khushi, I had butterflies in my tummy reading abt the kiss!!

And how could you wrap that last para in flashback in just 2-3 sentences?? That wa smost interesting dammit!! 😆

One feedback, for me this to and from into flasback and present is a bit confusing I think I need I need to re-read the stuff.

Now what has Arnav planned so that Khushi wont be the scapegoat??

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#244

wonderful update

thanks for the pm

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shr3291

@shr3291

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Fantabulous update :)

On one side arnav is as charming as ever making khushi fall for for him hook,line & sinker,on the other way round he make's her claw at him ..phew!!!

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Arnav, the manipulator, at his best...

This is getting better and better only...

Cant wait to read further!

I loved the flashback by the way...

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Camlin

@Camlin

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

God, he is such a pain in the ass. So, annoying. One side he is smoky hot and on the other side he is such a manipulative jerk. What has he planned now? Even I want to slap him, yet drool!!

Harsha, you are amazing. Bus!!

And, you ended the last flashback so soon!!😭 That was the best part.

And, this IS toxic Dammit!!!😳

Edited by camlin - 12 years ago

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Livania Govender

@sarunarshi72

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#248

brilliant update. Im loving this story. Is it strange to say that i find arnav's arrogance so appealing.

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#249

Read the whole story in one go, loved it. Please pm me when you update!!!!!

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Farha Naz

@farha_ipkknd

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#250

what an update ..!!! simply superb
loved the raizada's .. all are so friendly & warm towards khushi that she felt like home ..but I also think they are trying to matchmaking...
ok ..arnav's arrogant, intimidating, dominating behavior can be justified but how could he plan something which would frame khushi ..?? I know there's more to his plan but still ...
i wanna know what has done now..?? so update soon :)