AsHlok SS - Hostile Takeover Chptr 06 pg 28 updtd

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NidhaA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani
awsm strt ⭐️ do pm me

Thank you😊

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NidhaA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly
Business woman ashta! Thats interesting!!

Yeah😆 What to say Myra, am a bit feminist. I do agree that women can't compete with man or level up with a man in everything. But that doesn't make her inferior. In mental faculties and many fields she is as capable as a man and there are thousand facets of home life that a woman does with perfection. Woman may not be as physically strong as men but that doesn't mean man gets to trample on her. Le mein kaha se kaha chali gayi😆. Thank you for reading 😊

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NidhaA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Heavens_Kiss
Nidha it is Amazing<3. Wow! Continue pls! Pm me too😳

Thank you dear😊

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NidhaA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: eshitamisra
awesome start 😊
story looks interesting
pm me if u can whenever u update

Thank Eshita😊. I hope I can keep you further interested.

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NidhaA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

@sireesha76 - Thank you for commenting do continue reading😊

@alee - Thank you😊

@Satya.T - Astha has sure changed. Thank you😊

@ArhiIPKKND - Thank you😊

@rbb1 - Astha's personality has undergone a change but her essence remains the same. You will see this in coming updates In Sha Allah. Thank you😊

@khushbhuahmed12 - Thank you😊

@neena282 - Thank you😊

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NidhaA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: -Priya01
awesome beginning Nidha ...and so professional👏..happy to see Astha in western outfits here😳

eager to know what ll happen next

do update soon

stay blessed rab rakha

Thank you Priya. Astha is different here but in her the old Astha still lives on.

Do continue reading to know more.😊 Thank you.

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NidhaA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx
Awesome start! Definitely a concept that interests me, as I've always wanted to see Astha transform into someone more confident than she is. So now I'm already hooked and excited for your next chapter! Do update soon and add me to ur pm list if you have one! 😃

Thank you. Yeah we all want Astha to grow stronger. Naive and innocent is good but in this world you need to be strong as well. Thank you for reading.😊

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NidhaA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Allyson
A lovely beginning!

So itis now 4 years later, huh? I wonder what happened in the past. But whatever it is, I'm sure, will be revealed in due time.

I really like yhow descriptive your writing is. You really set the mood

Ally😃. Glad to have a comment from you , it means a lot. You are one of the few who have an excellent execution style from beginning and it's an honor to have my work read by such people. Yeah , the story is set 4 years later. I may not give a detailed description of the past , it might just be one or two glimpses. But those years have brought about transformation in both Shlok and Astha. That is my intended focus.😳

Hope you enjoy further😊

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NidhaA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: sweet16cash
Hey lovely concept aastha and shlok have some history and he is going to meet her after 4 loong years..😊.
Like the stronger and more professional aastha dressed in perfect professional clothes..❤️ 😃
Waiting to read further do pm me when you update further would love to read this ss..😊.

Thank you😊 4 years and many changes later Astha and Shlok are once again face to face. Do continue reading.