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Arilip

@Arilip

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Hey it was good... I thought she would have heard Arnav n his mum's convo...

As usual u have written it brilliantly 👏

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xyzsm

@xyzsm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

It's wonderful... Loved it to the core...

I don't mind reading long OS...but prefer to do so...

its in detail...it has the charm...wonderful OS among whatever I have read so far!!!

Edited by xyzsm - 11 years ago

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mem1

@mem1

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

That was lovely. I kind of guessed half way through that she was probably faking it, but I was still releived when it was revealed. Loved every bit of it

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akankha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

it was just wonderful!
i loved it...the way u writen down the whole things...arnav's pain,guiltyness...just fantastic! i was feeling sorry yet angry than again sorry for him!
than came the blow...when he understood abt that khushi can recognize him...wow!
thank u for writting and the pm!

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sushan

@sushan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Loved it as i love everything else written by you.

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katunkka

@katunkka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

This is amazingly written. Ahhh I love the fact that he loved her so much but in Work progress way. Lol very nice.

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Skiran

@Skiran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Nice OS.
Khushi acted as if she had amnesia, thought this is going
to be a sad one. Arnav who once thought of breaking his
engagement with her, now went to stop her from
breaking their alliance 👏

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Arnima

@Eternalallure

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

It was yet another brilliant piece by you...i loved it through and through.😊

I couldn't stop myself from smiling by the end of it neither could i help myself from reading it again.

That was one hell of a twist and though somewhere in between i was getting apprehensive about it having some sad or tragic end but somewhere i knew you wouldn't do that to us...you always manage to give us sweet and simple happy endings with all the twists and drama and angsty emotions and that is what i like the most about you...what can i say i am a sucker for happy endings and i can always rely on you to give me one..😉

Well done and please write more such OSes...they are always a delight to read.👏

p.s.-Thanks for the pm.

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Srija Singh

@srija.singh04

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Wow that was one "helluva" story😉

You actually brought the fire of the initial episodes back, you know like from before their first marriage😊 That was the golden period of IPK crazy stubborn arrogant Arnav meets crazy stubborn arrogant Khushi, what else could one ask for.

Okay, so the way you open your stories is always a treat to read, an enigma initiated and the web gets all the more tangled as the story proceeds and one is left biting their finger nails wondering OH MY FREAKING GOD!😲 What the hell is happening?😲 How the f**k are they going to get out of it?😡 Oh god (or Oh Anon) please don't separate Arshi😭 And just then BAM!😃 and the funny thing is I didn't even realise what hit me, I was like oh shit he is leaving the room, ab kya hoga? But I should trust Anonymous (sounds really funny even to say this😆) but yes one needs to trust the romantic in Anon to know that all will be right in the Arshi world once again😳

That was a beautiful story dear, keep writing more of such brilliant stories👏

And btw, I am just one more post away from being a goldie😃

Edited by srija.singh04 - 11 years ago