Arshi OS: Forget Me Not ~ TY Note Page 48

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

honestly i read this before i got a pm but was busy to comment now that i am free here i am...

wow...seriously wow...

its your thing to get an idea for a story staying true to it and following it through is something you are blessed with i guess!😊

lovely story ,i for a second thought khushi was acting in the beginning itself but later trashed it for it to come back at the end.

superb!bless you and your writing!

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Afsha Ismail

@Chamkili06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

sooo sooo maaagicaaal :D ...
haaaye ur writin is jst excelllenttt :D

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ajoop

@ajoop

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

That was awesome...

All your works are awesome...

Khushi hid the truth of her memory returned from him so that he can live his life😭😭 that touched my heart😳😳😳 then he fell in love with her😳😳

they kissed☺️

awesome😊😊

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GoldenEyes

@GoldenEyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Ooh fabulous os!
Very well written 👏

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kharunya

@kharunya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Nice story

Khushi thought to make good use of this amnesia and she acted well.

It was a slip of tongue for khushi, but arnav caught it and expressed his love

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Anuradha

@lovebarun...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

God!!! you are so damn good... it was awesome throughout... i just love this arnav... and khushi... very emotional though...👏

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rkrocks

@rkrocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Nice
Initially when I started reading the story I got the hint that khushi is lieing about her memory loss related to Arnav . I loved to read the emotional Arnav in whole story his regret , his love everything
Beautifully written

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

You r definitely going in the right direction
That was a superb OS, very well written and it wasn't that long
I was so engrossed in reading that when it ended I was like what it's finished already
Enjoyed reading it
Thanx

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

when arnav was saying all that stupid thing about her to his mom...i thot khushi heard it all n when going back home all broken she got into an accident but when i heard that she fall from stairs i was like may be she dint know...but she did know and he did fall in love with her naturally...loved the OS specially the last part...where he ask her to forget everything but him...beautiful

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Aparna

@-aparna-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#180

Ok so this proves again that m crazy...very crazy
whatever arnav do , did in past i cant hate him in any story;(
goshh m crying like silly reading this. I cant see arnav suffering.
And m so happy dat i guessed K was pretending all along.
When u described k i cudnt think of K doing this to arnav no matter what. Even if she had lost her memory and my guess was right:D
this was really beautiful
loved how he falls in love wid her and last confrotation.
When did K learn to kiss so good?:p