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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

wow so astha gained her memory back

and she was jealous dat tym also
and wat shlok said was wow
do update soon


thanks a lot dear
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Thanks guys.updating in a while...

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Part-26

She was walking on the road looking for the direction to find out her home...

Should I go back to home and talk to ayii baba? I don't have a mobile even...she thought...

When suddenly she could hear horns from all sides bringing her back to reality, she found herself standing in the middle of the road. Suddenly something stroked her mind making her feel dizzy... She held her head and immediately walked towards the footpath sitting there on a side...

Astha was standing in the middle of the road crying while people were shouting at her to stand away from the road when Shlok came running there all upset pulling her form the road to home...

Astha was still crying while Shlok was shouting at her...

Kitni baar kha hai maine ghar se bahar akeli mat jaya kro... Agar tumhe kuch ho jata to..(how many times I have told you not to go outside alone)... tumnhe pta bhi hai, meri jaan nikal rhi thi yhan pe..(I was dying for you)

To maine ajju se kha tha mujhe ice cream chayhiye wo lekar nahi gyi... (I have asked ajju for ice cream but she didn't bother) Astha spoke crying...

To main aa jata na sham ko... tumhe la deta...na? (I could have be back by evening na?) Shlok shouting shooking her shoulders...

Ek to main itni mushkil se ghar ayi hun upar se tum chilla rhe ho mujhpe...(I am back home by difficulty and you are shouting at me?) Astha shouted back on Shlok...

Shut up Astha...tumhari har galti maaf karta hun main par ye nahi...tum janti ho agar tumhe kuch ho jata to mera kya hota...(no Astha, I am not going to forgive you this time) Shlok pulled her as closer as he could and suddenly pushed her away leaving the place...

Shlok had shut the door of the room while Astah was crying outside... When ajju cam eto her...

Dekha astha maine roka than a ke shlok ko aa jane do...she caressed her face... Jayo ab jaa ke mafi mango shlok se...(I have told you Astha, now ask for forgiveness form him)

Wo nahi manega ajju... She spoke sobbing...(he will not agree)

Beta jayo to... Ajju pushed her towards his room..

Darwaja khol do, I am sorry..she was crying... But shlok didn't open the door...

It was night by then Astha was still standing at the door but Shlok has not opened the door even once...her sobs were finished now...she was regretting for shlok...slowly knocking at the door... when ajju came there...

Astha ayoo beta, khana kha lo...(have some dinner astha) she tried to move her...

Nahi main dost ke sath hi khaungi... (no I will eat with him only)

Zid nahi karte astha, fir tumhe dwai bhi leni hai..(don't argue Astha, you have to take medicine too)

Nahi jab tak wo mujhe maaf nai crega, main kuch nahi kahungi...(no I will not eat anything till he forgive me)

Finally ajju interfered and knocked the gate... On listening ajju's voice shlok opened the gate, his eyes were red... Maybe he had cried a lot both in the fear of losing astha as well as for shouting at her for the first time after so long...

Before shlok could say anything, Astha held her ears making puppy face... she had tears in her eyes...seeing Astha in such condition, Shlok could ot hold his anger anymore...

He immediately moved ahead and hugged he rtight...

Ajju smile don seeing them and left the place...

Astha too hugged him tight for long...Finally shlok broke the hug taking astha into his arms... Asth again held her ears an dspoke.i am sorry.main aj ke baa dkabhi bahar nahi jaungi...(I will never go outside)

Shlok cupped her face moving closer...its all right sweety.par tumhe pta hai agar tumehe kuch ho jata to?

Par kujhe ice cream khani thi... (but I have to eat ice-cream)

Shlok smile don er innocence and hugged her tight... khana khaya)(had dinner?)

Astha nodded in no...

Lets go.shlok spake taking her for dinner...

After dinner... Shlok wrote something on paper and put it in Astha's bag...Ye bag tum hamesha sath lekar jati ho na? ye hamare ghar ka address hai aur mera phone no... ise hamesha apne sath rakhna..Ok sweety? He tapped her face...

She smiled with tears and hugged him...

Sitting on the footpath, she immediately opened her bag... Checked all the belongings, finally found an old almost torn slip...She had tears on reading the paper.


Aaoge Jab Tum Ho Saajana,Angana Phool Khilenge

Barsega Saawan,Barsega Saawan Jhoom Jhoom Ke,Do Dil Aise Milenge

She asked an auto wala the address written on paper and walked in the direction remembering the moments, she had passed with Shlok... laughing, eating, sleeping , enjoying...


Naina Tere Kajraare Hai,Naino Pe Hum Dil Haare Hai

Anjaane Hi Tere Naino Ne,Waade Kiye Kai Saare Hai

Saanson Ki Lay,Madham Chalein,Tose Gaye Barasega Saawan ,Barasega Saawan ,Jhoom Jhoomke

Do Dil Aise Milenge,
Aaoge Jab Tum Ho Saajana,Angana Phool Khilenge


As she reached near the house, everything was clear to her now...it looked her like her own... There was a name plate on the gate... it read as "Astha Niwas". Mrs. and Mr. Shlok Agnihotri... She sweetly caressed the name plate...


Chanda Ko Taaku Raaton Mein,Hai Zindagi Tere Haanthon Mein
Palkon Pe Jhilmil Taarein Hain,Aana Bhari Barsaaton Mein
Sapnon Ka Jahaan,Hoga Khila Khila
Barasega Saawan ,Barasega Saawan Jhoom Jhoom Ke
Do Dil Aise Milenge,Angana Phool Khilenge
Angana Phool Khilenge

She reached the gate and bell the door...an old lady opened the door...

Astha bibiji? The lady shouted with joy...

Bimla... Bimla bhai? Astha recognized her as their maid...

Aap akeli? Sahib khan hain? Apko pta hai jab se apka truck se accident huya tha, sahib ki to khushian hi khatam ho gyi hain...bhut udas rehte hain... ab ap aa gyi hain to sab thik ho jayega...(where is sir, you know since your accident happened, he is completely lost)

Wo aa hayenge (he will be back soon)... She smiled moving inside..

In the hall there were large collage of Astha with different postures... a lot teddies were placed in the sofa and a number of toys were there in a stand near by... tears were continuously flowing through her eyes seeing all these things and remembering what he had done for her...

Main abhi sahib ko phone kar deti hun... (I will call sahib now) Bimla was about to call Shlok...

Nahi rehne do, he is on the way... ap ko jana hai to chali jayiye, aj khana main banaungi... (I will cook today, you may leave,) Astha smiled...

Listening, Bimla had left telling her everything about the kitchen...

Astha remembered Shlok's favorite dishes and cooked food for him...

After one hour she moved towards their room... she opened the Almirah and saw more than fifty gowns were hanging in the almirah. A smile appeared on her face...shlok had never said her no for anything...she checked for more and found a saree in almirah...She held the saree closer to her heart and remembered the moments when Ajju had pushed her to behave like a wife..

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Astha...shlok called entering in house... But no reply.it was quite unusual as whne shlok used to enter in the house, Astah was already in the hall ready to hang around him after the wait since morning...

Astha...he called again...but again no reply...

Ajju.he called for ajju.ajju came there...

Ajju where is astha and why it is s quite today? Where are all toys and teddies form hall? Shlok spoke looking here and there...

When Astha came slowly with a try of glass .shlok was surprised to see her like this.she was wearing a red saree with green bangles, mangalsutra and all makeup.but no happiness on her face...

Sahib pani... She offered awter to shlok .in shock he picked the glass.whne she sat near is feet an dstarted opening laces of his shoes... Shlok pulled his feet backwards...

Astha ye kya kar rhi ho?(what are you doing astha?) he aske diwth a shock...

Main apki biwi hun na ye mera farz hai...she spoke with tears in her eyes..(I am your wife na dthis is my duty)

Kisne kha tumse ye sab?(Who told you so?)Shlok ha danger in his eyes...

Astha started sobbing and looked towards ajju...

Nahi nahi,tum meri biwi thoda ho, tm to meri best friend ho. Aur aisa koi bhi nahi karta... (NO you are not my wife, you are my best friend)he mad eher stand form floor with a showe in he rhand...

To ye sab mujhe nahi karna? (So I sont need to d all this?) she jumped with jy...

Never.shlok spoke with a smile...

Thankyou thankyou dost...she hugged her throwing his shoe on table... breaking the glass of table...

Shlok looked towards her in anger,she made a puppy face and held her ears... sorry.shlok smiled on this.now go and change your clothes...

Listening she removed her saree in the hall when shlok shouted at her. Not here, go to the room...

She showed tongue and thumb to ajju and ran to room...

Shlok , I wish she must behave a bit mature now, its two years to your marriage. I want to see growth in your relation.

Ajju...I request you never force her for such things, she doesn't understand. I love her as she is... and if you are afraid, till how I will survive like this, then it's a promise...forever...

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Shlok, you had said na, I don't understand things... But now I understand each and everything...she spoke with a smile and went towards washroom...

Ayii, we have checked each and every place... but could not find her... Its evening and she is lost since morning... I think I should complain to police now. Shlok was almost crying at Kirloskar home...

You are right Shlok. We should go to police now...Avdhoot spoke in tension...

But did you check area near you home? Kalindi asked...may be she could reach there...

No, I didn't...Baba, do one thing, you go to police station, I will check for some other places where we used to go near our home... Maybe she had reached there... Saying shlok left...

He reached in the market near his house and asked a number of people when bimla bhai came to him... Sahib ap yhan? Bibiji ne bheja hoga? Mujhe badi khushi huyi bibiji ghar aa gyi...(sir you here? Mama have sent you? I am very happy for you..)

Astha is at home? Shlok was surprised... Before she could say anything else, Shlok ran towards his home...

He reached home, found the gate locked and opened the gate with the spare key..

As he opened the gate...he saw Astha standing near dining table wearing red saree with open hair...

Before he could say anything. Astha started shouting...

Aa gye app, ye time ahi ghar an aka? Pta hai na ghar pe biwi apki wiat kar rhi hai? (reached home? Is it time to come back? Don't you remember, wife is waiting for you?)

Listening he had tears in his eyes...he ran towards Astha taking her into his arms... Hugging her tight Astha too hugged him crying into his arms...

I am sorry shlok...she spoke cupping his face... you have to suffer a lot for me...

No...Shlok too cupped her face into his hands. I am sorry. All this happened due to me... when his phone rang...it was Avdhoot...

Before he could say anything... Astha picked the call... Baba, I am at my home. And I am sorry I could not inform you...

Avdhoot shouted with happiness. You are with Shlok?

Ji baba...Astha spoke...

Baba, ap bhi aa jayiye yhan pe, we will be together today. Shlok spoke taking phone from her...

Nahi beta, aaj nahi... Avdhoot smiled... We will come tomorrow...and he cut the call...

When Shlok again hugged Astha into his arms...Astha looked into his eyes smiling at him...he slowly moved closer at placed his placed his lips on her...


OK, wanted to complete it today but was getting longer enough.so could not.tomorrow will be definitely last with lot Ashlok moments... Stay tuned...

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome...looking forward to the last chapter!!
it was really nice story...there was a moment where i failed to understand, but as soon as i did it got cleared to me..

thanks a lot for this FF!!! hope you will come back with new story...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sireesha76

me first

really wonderful update


Thanks a lot dear
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Originally posted by: Serviana

awesome...looking forward to the last chapter!!

it was really nice story...there was a moment where i failed to understand, but as soon as i did it got cleared to me..

thanks a lot for this FF!!! hope you will come back with new story...🤗


thanks a lot dear.ya a lot of people were puzzled with flashbacks...
ya definitely i will be back with new story after diwali break...
will let you know...when i will write something...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oohhh thank you jeenia for add this song in your lovely update...
What a emotional and cute ashlok moments...

Zindgi le k aayi hai beete dino ki kitab
Gheere hai, ab hume yaadain, behisaab
Binn puche mile muje kitne saare jawab
Chaha tha kya, paya hai kya humne dekhiye
Dill me magar, jalte rahe , chahat k diyee
Tere liye, tere liye...

Aastha is behaving like a wife now...soo sweet she is...
Now shlok is very happy because his love aastha complete him...Mind blowing part jeenia 👏...I really loved it...🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
you know dear how long i was waiting for your update
iam in my college just now and was continuosly cheking whether you updated or not in every break

no long comments today
splendid and fabulous update 👏
this is for you my sweetheart

kissy kissy for you..

Edited by LECHU123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Oohhh thank you jeenia for add this song in your lovely update...

What a emotional and cute ashlok moments...

Zindgi le k aayi hai beete dino ki kitab
Gheere hai, ab hume yaadain, behisaab
Binn puche mile muje kitne saare jawab
Chaha tha kya, paya hai kya humne dekhiye
Dill me magar, jalte rahe , chahat k diyee
Tere liye, tere liye...

Aastha is behaving like a wife now...soo sweet she is...
Now shlok is very happy because his love aastha complete him...Mind blowing part jeenia 👏...I really loved it...🤗


No, i thank you for suggesting such beautiful song.
and song tere Liye... will try to add in epilogue...
YA, finally they are together... now tomorrow in last part, just Ashlok moments with final celebration...

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