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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutemishti

I read all the parts in one go.
I like ur writing. Superb FF.
Its too much roller coaster for sloke and aastha.
From hatred feeling to love.
Cont.soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Amna1234567890

omg.. its awesome year.. can't want.. update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Miracle_lover

wowww your story is great !! It's making me impatient to know more about what's going to happen next 😃 Seriously you should submit your stories to Star plus I think your a much better writer than the current writers of IPKKND...EPB !! With your fabulous stories trp will go rocket high !! plzzz keep writing more 😃

thanks a lot dear. but i ma not too good. i have read many wonderful writers in the IF... just got inspired from those...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiru2992

amazing story..:-)
Loved it..:-)
Plzz do continue asap..:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fathima85

read all the parts in one go yaar

very nice
waiting for the next part

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Guys.. thanks for the overwhelming response , i am getting...
Here is the last update of the week... busy at weekend. Next update will be on Monday... so enjoy and keep commenting... Love you all...

Part-9

Whats wrong with shlok now. He could tell me politely she is his sister, why he got so aggressive and moreover why was he so hurt? Astha was thinking continuously when she went home...

Astha? Everything Ok? his father asked her...

Ji baba... Everything is fine now. I just completed my first project... She smiled...

Yes Niranjan ji called me to appreciate you. He told you handled everything very well... Avdhoot told proudly...

Fir beti kiski hun? Astha made a proudly face hugging her father... But thinking. By tomorrow I will not be going to Shlok's office?

She went to her room and tried his phone again and again... But his phone was continuously switched off...

Why has he switched off his phone? Why. She was worried now...

The whole day passed like this and her father had arranged dinner for her and her family in a restaurant in happiness of her first success...As they came back , it was ten pm...

Ok Ayii, I am going to sleep now... its very late... saying Astha left for her room...

She entered the room and pushed the door... as she pushed the door, someone closed it covering Astha bolting it from inside... Astha could feel him and knew who he was...

Shlok...she spoke with a surprise...

Shlok switched on the light...he was standing close to her pinning her to the gate itself...astha looked towards him. His eyes were dark red as if he had cried to his heart and was looking continuously at Astha...

I am sorry, I didn't know...so I misunderstood... she spoke into one breath...

Its...its fine... Shlok spoke giving her way... Astha could feel pain in his voice...

Ap...ap yhan kaise? Finally she asked...

He signaled towards window... a smiled appeared on Astha's face...

Can we talk? Shlok asked with the same sad face...

Nodding Astha signaled him to sit on couch and she too sat near him... She almost knew, what he wanted to talk about...

Shlok was hesitant to start... Astha held his hand slightly..shlok looked towards her... she nodded him pressing his hand...

She was Puja... my sister... Finally he spoke...

Puja? Astha was surprised... but as much as I know, you have only one sister...jyoti married to Abhay...

I have two sisters... Puja and Jyoti... both are younger to me... And I love them both... But Puja had always been closer to me than Jyoti...You know how my mom is... a typical girl hater lady...Puja had never liked her partiality with them but jyoti never minded about it... she used to tell me bhaiya ek din main ayii ko chod ke bhag jyaungi to inhe pta chalega how much I value to her...She used to share her every thought with me...except one thing... shlok paused for a moment...

Astha caressed his shoulder...while shlok held her hand tightly...

She...she loved someone...he spoke looking towards Astha...

So whats wrong in it? Astha asked...

She loved one boy who was from other cast... Aseem Mohammad...she knew no one will agree for it.so she never told anyone even to me... Her big brother, he support at home as well as her best friend...

Then? Astha asked...

One day baba saw her with that boy in the college... that day was black day of our family... Ayii slapped her and closed her in a room. Next day she opened the door, may be puja will understand by then. But she was not there... she had left home giving a shame to all of us... baba and I went to Aseem's hostel to bring her back but there we found, he too was not there...Till then, I have never seen her face...

And what about others? She asked...

Baba kept quite in complete matter while ayii...shlok paused...

Ayii? Astha asked...

Next day she called pandit ji and told everyone there is hawan at home... We somehow all got ready for hawan... And you know what that hawan was for? Shlok looked towards astha...

Puja ki Atma ki shanti ke liye... Ayii had declared her dead for our family and for all... she had told all relatives, puja died in a car accident...Shlok covered his face with his hands...

What? Astha was shocked... how can a mother do so with her own daughter? No matter how much wrong children are , but its parents duty to understand them...

Astha could feel his sobs a bit. ...She caressed his shoulder... shlok held her hand... Astha I hate my ayii for that.i know how much I resisted not to do that but she didn't listen a word... I promised her I will find Puja and make her understand but usen mujhe baba ki kasam di to never try to find about Puja...

Till that day, i hate that lady, I never called her ayii... I hate her for not respecting relations...I had left my house the same day after hawan and come occasionally here... This is the first time, I am living here since fifteen days...Astha pressed his arm to give him courage...

What about Puja? She asked...

I don't know... he replied looking at the floor... I hate her... Shlok spoke...

What? Astha was shocked...

Yes, I hate her... she brought so much shame to our family .we could never tell anybody where is she... I hate her because she cheated me. She broke my trust, if she could have told me before... I could do something. Maybe make her understand...but no... she didn't tell me anything...

She was in love shlok...she was not wrong, she knew, no one will understand. Thats why she took such drastic step...

But even once she thought of our family? Shlok looked into her eyes...

Then why do you still keep her picture with you always?

She was my sister demn...no matter how wrong she was...Shlok shouted a bit...

No, She is your sister Shlok...Astha caressed his face...

A tear dropped from his eye on Astha's hand...

Astha moved a bit closer to him cupping his face in her hands and wiped the tears with her thumbs...

Shlok held her both hands when Astha pulled him closer taking into her embrace...Shlok was broken completely... May be he was sharing his pain for the first time with someone...Astha continued hugging him caressing his back...

After some time Shlok broke the hug...

Are you ok? Astha asked him...

I am better, feeling very light today after so long... thanks for listening me... Shlok smiled.

Astha too smiled when Shlok held her hands... Astha...I am sorry...

Sorry? For what?

For shouting at you in office...

No Shlok...infect it was me who pulled you to the edge...

I think, I should leave now...its too late... Shlok spoke...

Astha nodded in yes with a smile...

He went near window and was about to leave...when Astha held his hand... He looked towards her...

Everything will be fine soon... She moved closer to him and caressed his face...take care of yourself..

He smiled and moved closer to her putting his hand on her waist...slowly pulling her more and more closer finally his complete body was touching her... He picked her face by holding her chin slowly. he moved closer and placed his lips on her... after few seconds he removed his lips from her.. and saw her face... Astha had closed her eyes and he found her blushing badly...a smile appeared on his face...and he again placed his lips on her but this time for a strong passionate kiss pulling her completely into him... her hands were moving into shlok's hair...

After some time he pulled apart... Astha opened her eyes shyly...he looked into her eyes...while astha hugged him in shyness...

He placed his hand on Astha's face picking it up from his chest and placing a small kiss on her forehead and took his lips closer to her ear... He whispered...Good night and sweet dreams... saying he left from the window...

Astha too whispered blushing... Good night... ...Astha still was standing at window ...touching her swollen lips and thinking what had happened right now...

Edited by jeenia123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
So shlok open his heart finally. ...
Aastha with him as his strength...
Love it...very nice updet...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

So shlok open his heart finally. ...

Aastha with him as his strength...
Love it...very nice updet...

yup... finally he is open hearted now... and they both moving ahead together... thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it so much . Feeling so bad for shlok. Loved the way aastha supported him . Continue soon dear

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