Thread 4: Arhi FF: Making You Mine chp 14-17,#5 link pg 1[COMPLETED]

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shaheen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

What was that???
N where is Arnav?

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anamnoor

@anamnoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Sid u are dead do god damn dead
No one messes with ASR N MRS ASR
Waiting eagerly for d nxt one
Sid ka band jo bajne wala hai

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PSharada

@PSharada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

WOW this update was nice. So Khushi and Arnav are playing who is superior and now Khushi is in deep trouble. Will Arnav come to rescue her. Will Khushi blurt out what she was feeling after this. Man this is a cliff hanger. Hope you will update soon and not delay for the next update.

PS:- I am loving the way you are giving updates so fast. Please do update soon.

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siamesecat

@siamesecat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Wow!!!!! What amazing awesone heartstopping update. Was waiting so much for this chapt Now I want to read. next part asap.

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JCJS

@JCJS

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Ho my she is trapped by sid . Now she Will get Arnav's intention good lesson Mrs.Raizadha. Poor Arnav is trying really hard to woo her. Excited for the next update. Thks for the pm dear.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Wow, thank you for updating at lightening fast speed.

The update was amazing and superb, absolutely loved it.

I'm loving Khushi she knows how too show she is in control and also having the upper hand.

It's a shame she danced with Sid to wind Arnav up but the pathetic man is taking advantage.

Hope Arnav's comes on time and rescues khushi and hopefully beats up Sid.

I'm sure we can expect a very heated confrontation in the next update, can't wait.

Loved the update, awesome writing.

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 12 years ago

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sasr

@sasr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Awesome update...

I knw arnav'l cum 2 rescue her n wanna read dat part very soon

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

seriously is this the way u say sorry to her by rattling her more and by deciding for her...ok i know u know that sid is a slime ball but instead of letting ur ego come in between u cud ve danced with her...poor stupid khushi now what will she do...

loved the update

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Jyothsna

@joe4joe

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

cliffhanger,y did u do tis to us di?
Updt sn.
Arnav just held her like a toy.
He dont consider her as human being. He was toying with her feelings.
Khushi,cntn ur silent treatment.