Smitar's: Saving Khushi#1 Part 7 Pg 122 Link to # 2 on Pg 1

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

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Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Awesome update guys 😃

Honeymoon suite for Arshi 😉

Beautiful interpretation Rashmi...loved it 😊

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Hetal

@Divyahet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#592

Awesome and an amazing update Smitaji...
morning morning maa hi chhori ke chehre ko bade hi pyaar se dekha...
ji haan ASR ka swarg!...

Nainitaal..aur woh dhaaba...haaye...
uparse auntiji ki comment...😳

Reshu interpretation...👏👏👏👏👏👏
thanks for the pm.

for both of you my darlings...

take care.😛

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

Awwwieee... How sweet was that... They are back in Nainital...Hope Shyam is arrested soon...

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#594

Wonderful interpretation Rashmi!!! :)
I loved it to bits!

A few lines caught my eye. They voiced exactly what I thought, but I couldn't put them into proper words, like you did:

He was of singular mind, ready to give in to her wishes for he knew that he was the cause for her smile to vanish. When Shyam had been persecuting her, she had not broken down but had fought back. But the minute she had realized how low he had held her in his opinion she had become like a rag doll, limp and lifeless.

He realized how much he matters to her. And how important it is to be the cause of someone's smile. Like Auntyji said, "Aaise aisse life guzar jaayegi and you won't even know." 😳

P.S: I forgot about the Raksha dhaaga! Glad that it fell in the cowdung 😆

Lovely read! :)
Thanks for the PM! :)

Edited by .sobtian. - 12 years ago