VirMan OS: Dil Toh Aakhir Dil Haina

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.LiveLaughLove.

@.LiveLaughLove.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: shirhid
amazing os
manvi is so cute
thanx for pm 😊

Thank you. 😳

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Shanae

@..Shanae..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

awesome OS jenny! (Hope i can say tht 😊)
Loved it alot! Especially Maanvi's character! It was extremely different from all other characters i have read about... And ur writing skills are superb! The way u describe everything. I Especially loved the eating apple part 😆 u described it really well!

And loved how the whole story unravelled... How Virat changed and the ending was really cute and unexpected...

Thank you for pm. Great work!

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.LiveLaughLove.

@.LiveLaughLove.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: innocentmanvi1
lovely keep it up

Thanks! 😃

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.LiveLaughLove.

@.LiveLaughLove.

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: ..Shanae..
awesome OS jenny! (Hope i can say tht 😊)
Loved it alot! Especially Maanvi's character! It was extremely different from all other characters i have read about... And ur writing skills are superb! The way u describe everything. I Especially loved the eating apple part 😆 u described it really well!

And loved how the whole story unravelled... How Virat changed and the ending was really cute and unexpected...

Thank you for pm. Great work!

Thank youuu!! Of course, you can!

Am reli glad u liked it 😊 Lol... That just pop into my mind, that apple scene 😆

Thanks!

Don't mention it... Thank you so much for this comment. Means a lot to me 😳

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Captain_Pari

@Captain_Pari

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

That was a nice and sweet OS. Loved Virat and how he was so confused yet sure of his love for her.

-Luv Pari

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vaarya

@Vaarya53

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

i red it again ...and trust me, i found it as beautiful as i did for the first time . u write amazingly u know ...u should take it seriously and write more..it would be a treat to read . ur expression of every single thing was what i loved the most . manvis character , I'm in love with it! the whole os was lovely!! do write more plzz!

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Aenna

@Aenna

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Omggg I just read it
Nd its mind blowing I really loved it to core...
It was amazing virman were sooo cute specially
Manviii awww she didn't no how to kiss lol she
Asked virat nd he was everyready I guess lolzz
Loved it...

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.LiveLaughLove.

@.LiveLaughLove.

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Vaarya53
i red it again ...and trust me, i found it as beautiful as i did for the first time . u write amazingly u know ...u should take it seriously and write more..it would be a treat to read . ur expression of every single thing was what i loved the most . manvis character , I'm in love with it! the whole os was lovely!! do write more plzz!

Thanks!! 😳

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.LiveLaughLove.

@.LiveLaughLove.

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Aenna
Omggg I just read it
Nd its mind blowing I really loved it to core...
It was amazing virman were sooo cute specially
Manviii awww she didn't no how to kiss lol she
Asked virat nd he was everyready I guess lolzz
Loved it...

Glad u loved it. Thanks! ❤️

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@wanderlust09

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Hey dear...just happened to read dis beautiful piece of work...n m shocked dat i missed it inspite being a regular visitor of the forum...

Neways...cumin to ur virman fantasy...it was reallly amazing...seemed like reading a fairytale...

U hav beautifully portrayed Manvi's character...her innocence, positivity ...n her innocent question "If I like you does this mean I have to kiss you?" shez really cute😳

truly a treat to read...

plzz do cum up wid more...

PS: A biiig request...plzz do pm me for ur future works...dont wanna miss any 😊