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cocoamob

@cocoamob

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Aww - such a cute family story !

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Natasha08

@Natasha08

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

really beautiful

loved the family bonding..

loved arnav and mannat..

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kristin

@sweet_5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Awesome as always! Again I curse the fact that we didn't get to see any Arhi children!

Of course Arnav would be bad cop! Lol

Please continue to bring us more Arhi stories

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Aww this is so cute.

I loved the bonding between father and daughter. Aww they were watching TV together. I liked the name Mannat very much. You are an amazing writer:)

Loved the way Khushi pacified her daughter.

Waiting for the next one:)

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rini_kat

@rini_kat

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

A very cute and loving story...😊

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Omg that was such a beautiful and touching update! Love that name mannath. Khushi and Arnav both supporting eachother as parents. Awww the perfect family

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jojo21

@jojo21

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

What a great one shot!! So cute, I loved the relationship crafted not only between father and daughter but also mother and daughter. Sweet story.

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Cute6

@Cute6

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

blayde another beauty from you..u are very talented and dis has just proved how much u are..u have taken d meaning of one shots to a whole different level..i have read lots and lots of one shots by many of the writers here every1 had der own style but d one u rite always leave me with a sense of satisfaction and smile and longing for next one😊!! they are unique and dis one was no exception..each an every os has a feeling of his khushi and her arnavji intact 😊ur thot process is just brilliant👍🏼👏 and everytym i read anything form you im just speechless and in dreamland thinking about arnav-khushi..and ur blog just helps me to imagine sanaya and barun as arnav khushi..im in love wid ur blog😆😃

Mannat singh raizada is the epitome of cuteness!! dis was a total diffent oneshot and it was so so cute...

the bonding and love between the three wow...😊

wen u rote about arz singh raizada i asked y about a junior khushi and here u gave an os on her thanq...😊

the way u mentioned the father daughter relationship she playing ofyc ofyc with her babbie,having her own garden imitating har father in watering her plants aww i cant even express how m feeling😆 magical...

khushi a stern and loving mother perfectly suits her...

MAYBE SHE HAS GOT DAT FROM YOU.. these spoke volumes about the relationship love and passion between d couple dis did raise the temperatures by few degrees☺️😉😆

and den the mother daughter scene moved me literally to tears (happy wala)😊

and d dance at the end aww..

u see comments also are full of aww's😆

but really blayde it was fabulous and i enojed it to fullest...😊❤️

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Just loved it!! Always wanted to see scenes like this on the show. You just have a beautiful way with words.

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AdaJ

@AdaJ

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Hi

Thank you for the PM
I was kinda expecting a grown up Arz but you surprised me with a little girl, Mannat instead.
I remember wanting a little father son bonding when you introduced baby Arz to you, and I loved the daughter father moment in this story as well as the mother daughter setting.
You seem to have created a wonderful mix of Arnav and Khushi in 3 year old Mannat, a delight to read and very sweet and fluffy. Looking forward to more of your one shots

Keep on writing

Ada :)

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