ARHI FF 'Crawling Back To You' #2 On Hiatus(127) 18th Dec

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priyanka1998

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Posted: 11 years ago

#591

lovely update

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adhu11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#592

Beautiful. Loved the way u written about arnav inner thoughts

Hope he will succeed in his future plans

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#593

awesome update
thanks for the pm

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reenaraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#594

Fabulous chappyyy !!!
Lovd it ... So now hope we get to see a new arnav ...
Thanx for the pm ...
Cant wait to read the next chappyyy !!!
Updt sooonnn plzzz ...

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sakhter90

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Posted: 11 years ago

#595

Arnav has changed so much after his confession. He feels so light now and has started to think about the future. He has taken his responsibility on board. Nice to see him this way.

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archa2810

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Posted: 11 years ago

#596

this is exactly what we were waiting for... the in control arnav... all will b well now

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xXShriyaXx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#597

Just read all 19 parts in one go and i absolutely loved the unique concept and your wonderful writing style:-). Pls upate soon

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nature-lover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#598

This is a fab story
Totally fabulous. I read it all in one go. Can't wait to read more...

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dis_arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#599

nice update

if arnav wants to win her trust back he has to shoe his love for her

in every possible way

and must stop talking about lavanya now

he said about her to khushi na

now thats enough of her

now they must start their own life without anyone in it

they have a little family

arnav khushi and their baby :)

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Anu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#600

I guess its very rare to find an author trying to draw comparison between the emotions of past & present of an individual taking a imbecile place like a water pool as a reference and you have done an exceptional job with it, vanhi. Each time you don't cease to surprise me and whats more amazing to see is your graph as a author, pushing up a notch higher without being stagnant. Both arnav's & khushi's emotions starting from the very beginning to till date, were presented as pretty as a picture. No doubt that both arnav and khushi have put up with lot of grief in the past, each suffering in thier own way and not to forget their own share of faults, but everything was in their hands to raise above all & to start afresh and I am glad that they have made the decision to move on, as its no use to cry over the split milk. Khushi's character in one of the strongest characters of our stories so far, with so many layers to explore and khushi here is an epitome of a woman ( a daughter, a lover, a wife, a mother and more importantly a fighter) and so is lavanay, but in a bit different context. I guess lavanya is a epitome of a true lover, its her firm belief in love which forced her to take such a huge leap just to ensure that her love was safe, even if that meant to stay away from her love.As far as arnav is concerned, he is one broken soul who carved nothing but love all along his life and all he got was pain for loving someone but with khushi by his side, he has healed over the time and has learned to love again. Its a heart wrenching tale of three innocent souls, racked with pain & grief all along their life being the mere puppets of cruel people and kudos to you for presenting it so beautifully with loads of emotions.

I am sorry for being late, its just that with most of the stories shifted to blog I hardly log into IF.

Edited by anushri - 11 years ago