Naina Jo Begaane Hain __ VirMan os

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Posted: 12 years ago
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i donno why i named this os " naina jo begaane hain..." (from baat humari pakki hai) may be bcos i love this song...

here is the link of the song
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Jisko dekha na barso
Dekhunga main kal parso
Jaane wo kaisi hogi re...

Virat was listening to this particular lines of the song again and again. Cmon why wouldnt he... He will see his childhood buddy tomorrow... His manvi will be coming back tomorrow... The very thought of manvi belonging to jim delighted virat... He learned only one thing n it was that he was manvi's and manvi was his.

Virat : come soon meri jalpari... Ab aur intezaar ni ho rha... Ufff ye ghadi kahin rukk toh ni gayi... (tapping his wrist watch with his knuckle) ni... Ye toh chal ri hai... Par ye waqt beet kyun ni rha... Ohhh god...

After 24 hours
Manvi came out of the airport smiling and looked around to catch a glimpse of her annoying irritating best buddy virat. Manvi was looking around when something caught her attention. A board reading "welcome back jalpari" caught her attention and she knew it was virat. Only he called him jalpari and only he has the right to call her that...

Manvi : you are so gone virat...
Manvi went near the board and snatched it from virat forcefully.
Virat : pleaae mujhe chod do... Please meri ozzat pe haath mat daalo... Main shadi se pehle -
Manvi : kyun jaaneman...?? Tujh jaise mal ko kaise chod doon... Aur shadi ke baad toh tumhe aur bhi exploit karungi main viru...
Virat : manvi ji hum toh aapke hi hain... Aap jo chahe kar sakti hai par please mujhe shadi tak pavitra rehne dejiye plzzz...
Manvi : theek hai... Sirf tumhare liye...
Virat : ok thanx a ton n now gimme a hug...
Manvi : ok... Sure...

They hugged which seemed like eternity...
Virat : now u dare leave me n go anywhere manvi...???
Manvi : ohh hello... U were also not here all this time... You just returned three days back n taunting me like u have been waiting for me from the last 20 years or something...???
Virat : 3 days means 72 hours... N yes i am seeing you after 6 long years...
Manvi : Hawww then i m also seeing u after 6 long years... Just the difference is i am not a cry baby like you...
Virat : so am i a cry baby...???
Manvi : yes...
Virat : i will tell you once we get married...

Manvi smiled a little and picked up her luggage...
Virat : give it to me sweetheart... Main hoon na tumhara deewana...
Manvi : ghar chale...???
Virat : sure my jalpari...


at night
Terrace

Virat : manvi...??
Manvi : hmm...
Virat : i know the answer but i still wanna ask it... Did you miss me...??
Manvi : ofcourse i missed you baby...
Virat : i love you manvi...
(taking her hand in his n eyes drinking her serene beauty)
Manvi looked down and replied " i love you too virat ".
Virat took it as something else and thought that manvi blushed.
Virat : manvi i cant stay away from you... Lets get married...
Manvi : we will virat... Excuse me now... Mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai...
Virat : ok go sleep meri nanhi pari...
Manvi : hmm... Goodnight...

After few days...
Virat : what is this manvi...???
Manvi was scared n looked down...
Virat : answer me manvi... I m asking something...
Manvi : virat... Woh virat...
Virat : why didnt you wear it manvi...??? Its our engagement ring god damn it...
Manvi : a... Actually... I.. I
Virat : wear it right now manvi... You shouldnt take it off... I also wear it n expects the same from you...
Manvi : okkk

That night
phone convo

manvi : virat... what are u doing...???
virat : i am sleeping manvi... what would i do at night...?? i am not married u see...
manvi : virat can u come over... please...
virat : now...??
manvi : yes now...
virat : okk... gimme 10 minutes...
manvi : i am waiting...

terrace
virat : so tell me why did you call me...???
manvi : i wanted to talk to you...
virat : talk to me... but about what...??
manvi : virat i know you love me... i also love you... but suppose if...
virat : cut it out manvi... come to the point baby...
manvi : what if one of us cheat on the other one...??
virat : what...??? cheat...?? we love each other so much that we would die rather than cheating on each other...
manvi : but what if it happens one day...??? agar... agar u come to know that i cheated on you... then what will you do...?? will you break this engagement...??

virat was now angry... he never expected manvi to bring up such a topic...
virat : did u cheat on me...???
manvi : me... a..ahh... tell me no virat what will you do...???
(scaring from the look in his eyes)
virat : i will probably kill myself... i can live away from you for your happiness but i cant live thinking that i am not enough for you... the single thought of you having feelings for anybody else other than me scares the hell out of me... it kills me manvi... if u ever cheat on me, it would kill me n my soul... i would die if anything like this happens... forget blaming you or hurting you...
manvi hugged virat and he hugged her back unaware of what was manvi thinking...
this reply made manvi even more guilty and she settled on burying that truth in her heart for life long... she would never tell him that she betrayed his trust and his love for her... she would never tell him that she actually thought for sometime that she loves someone else and that she even crossed her limit... she wouldnt tell him that his manvi forget about him for sometime back in london... she would not hurt the guy (virat) who loves her soo much... she would marry him and give him all the happiness and love possible... she wouldnt let his heart break... she would love him till her breath... she would make up for the time lost... she would be his... only his... and he would be the only man to own her and her soul...

XXX @@@@ XXX @@@@ THE END...
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naina927 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashishi

keep rocking nainu❤️

nainu will keep rocking like MINU 😊
love u mishu... ❤️
i want to see you on fb tomorrow morning... is that clear...???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: naina927

nainu will keep rocking like MINU 😊
love u mishu... ❤️
i want to see you on fb tomorrow morning... is that clear...???

yea tmrw i vl be on fb n if also dnt worry for tmrw🤗i love u too❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awwwie i loved the virman nautanki wali bonding sooo cute 😃😃
and yeh kya manvi ne virat pe cheat kiya 😲😲
virat ko pata chala na usko maar dalega...
interesting one naina ji ...update next part soon 😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb os Nainuu !!
Very sweet n nice !! ❤️
Loved it ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Keep it up girl!!
Love u nd ur ff loads. Xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsm os dear... Luv virat...hw can mannu cheat him ,,,, but happy endng means beautiful n new starting !!!!!! Really sweet os,,, luv it!!!!!! Waiting for pm dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Manvi cheated on Virat??? How could she?? Poor Virat! 😔 Manvi shouldn't have done this.. He loves her so much.. Though she realized her mistake & came back to him yet I felt bad for him.. Amazing OS Naina! ❤️ Very different.. Superbly written! 👏👏 Take care 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os naina 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os..but why did manvi cheated on virat

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