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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#191

So this is what leads him to think khushi lyk That girl . . Nd khushi at l8 ni8, may b knwg the consequence of the pbm she eloped ? !
Waiting. . Thanx fo d pm

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teja21

@teja21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

interesting...

cant wait fr d nxt update

continue soon

thanx fr d pm dear

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Wow very interesting start
So Arnav thinks khushi is the girl who he won in the card game
Did the guy just kidnap the first girl that came by or did her step mom having anything to do with it
Wow Arnav was quite shameless there checking her out
N khushi although she was firm was thinking how hot he was too ...love her restraint
Looking forward to seeing what Arnav does next
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#194

awsum update...

bt jst hate khushi's step mom..😡😡

luking forward 4 nxt..

continue soon..

thanx 4 da pm😊

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#195

I do not like khushi's step mom

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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#196

nice start dear
khushi is new mom is not good and is very rude to him
her father is just a mere puppet of her
arnav is involved in gambling
a different concept from your other stories
looking forward to it
update soon
thanks for pm

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usha

@ushankitvc

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#197

a new concept...looking frwrd to read more of it...continue sooon

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Niranjana R

@meniranjana00

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#198

oho... now hw that girl happen to be khushi

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sabz105

@sabz105

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#199

Thanks Maria for always sending me PMs, really appreciate it!!!

The first chapter of your new FF 'Fate's Deception' is really interesting!!!!

Poor Khushi, her father married again and bought a cruel step mother for her!!!!

I wonder who that black beaded man is??? Is it Khushi's father???

I'm so eager to know how Khushi get's in the hand's of Arnav!!!!

It must have something to do with her step mother trying to get rid of Khushi from their lives!!!

Also Arnav's character in this FF, is he a grey shaded character???

I just hope Khushi doesn't get into any problems that she later can't get out of!!!!

Please Maria try and update the second chapter of 'Fate's Deception' soon, waiting eagerly to know what's going to happen next!!!

Thanks for a great read as usual!!!

Keep up the amazing work you're doing Maria and looking forward to next chapter!!!

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vinothini

@glv_15

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#200

awesome start
dif concept...
kushi s step mother want to get rid of kushi from this house...
seems to be kushi is not crying baby,she is strong in this story ha na..
wanting to read more abt arnav
loved it
thanks for pm

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