Loved this chapter A. I am enjoying the pace of this story, the way the events move. Its gripping to say the least.
Khushi Khushi Khushi - She is drowning further and further in guilt and taking on all she can. At this rate shell forgive Arnav even murder in future. Isnt she bordering on stubbornness now? And stubbornness alone cannot make a character. If she doesnt think beyond what she perceives to be incomplete, she will lose herself completely and will compromise on anything for Arnav, all because she will think she deserves to make it up to him for having put him through that pain. I want her to think and I want some reason and I want some spunk.
Arnav - I am absolutely in love with him. He is angry, as he should be. Disappointed, as he should be. Upset, as he should be. In Love with her with a longing that sears his soul.
But may I say that was a brilliant move on your part as a writer. He is attracted to her and what better way to show her how much he needs her, how much she needs him, how much they need each other. Love can be maifested verbally, emotionally and physically. Here the verbal and emotional have failed to make Khushi understand why she needs to be with Arnav and hence the physical comes to the rescue.
And you did complete justice to that scene...it was stunning.
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