Arshi SS ~ For Your Sake #3 ~ Chapter 7 (Last) - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago

Both Arnav and Khushi are so hurt. Yet they both are thinking from different perspectives.

Khushi assumes her body to be a burden but Arnav believes that her body should be worshipped. She is the only one that he wants to be with regardless of all else. He does not care that they cant naturally have kids.
But for Khushi its slightly different. There is a quote that says 'A mother is the second identity of a woman''. I think that is what Khushi is thinking. For her, her body is a curse, its one that will forever make her feel incomplete. And she is being selfless from her perspective because she is willing to let Arnav go so that he does not feel the same way as she does and feel incomplete. She knows that he can father kids normally and does not want to eclipse him with the same hollow feeling that has encompassed her.
Now finally the 'deed' has been done. But for different reasons. Arnav wants to show Khushi that her body is the only one that he wants to be with in that way but Khushi she thinks this is just a one off that will be over just like her dream in the blink of an eye.
Cant wait to see how this unfolded after what just happened between them.
An amazing update.
Thanks for the PM
Edited by LondonChick - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Marvelous update ...
khushi thought she will leave him after lovemaking ..
i dont think that will even happend becoz our hero will not let her leave fabulous update dear ...
waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally one step ahead arshi
hopefully this will bring them closer reduce a few barriers
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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved this chapter A. I am enjoying the pace of this story, the way the events move. Its gripping to say the least.


Khushi Khushi Khushi - She is drowning further and further in guilt and taking on all she can. At this rate shell forgive Arnav even murder in future. Isnt she bordering on stubbornness now? And stubbornness alone cannot make a character. If she doesnt think beyond what she perceives to be incomplete, she will lose herself completely and will compromise on anything for Arnav, all because she will think she deserves to make it up to him for having put him through that pain. I want her to think and I want some reason and I want some spunk.


Arnav - I am absolutely in love with him. He is angry, as he should be. Disappointed, as he should be. Upset, as he should be. In Love with her with a longing that sears his soul.

But may I say that was a brilliant move on your part as a writer. He is attracted to her and what better way to show her how much he needs her, how much she needs him, how much they need each other. Love can be maifested verbally, emotionally and physically. Here the verbal and emotional have failed to make Khushi understand why she needs to be with Arnav and hence the physical comes to the rescue.

And you did complete justice to that scene...it was stunning.

Edited by AquaSandhya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..really very good..please do continue soon..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
They are o stubborn. suffering from 2 different reasons of same thing. and I frevently hope it wont end in a disaster
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update
It was hot
Cant wait for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey thnxx for d pm,lvoed d update. Amazingly good. Cudnt be more better. Wonderful. Khushi feels going away from arnav wud bring goodness to him. Very well written. Keep updating.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Good update, and very good expression with "Just this once..."

Like it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Anamika

When I had read the 5th chapter, I had felt that Khushi's share of tragedy was more poignant and painful than that of Arnav's in the entire turn of events which happened 11 years back. It might have broken Arnav as a man who had had a heart to beat - turning him into a cold ruthless machine but for Khushi- it broke her as a woman - as "being a woman" in the most fundamental way - as a bearer of a progeny - at least from her point of view. Her tragedy was bigger and her sorrows and feeling incompleteness had the effect of shutting down the doors to happiness forever. She is in a sense really a broken soul ... After all it is one thing to have loved and lost and carry the torch ... and entirely different thing to dismiss altogether one's natural and most basic need of " loving someone and getting loved by someone".
I'd wondered how you will deal with this aspect and you are dealing it in most wonderful way! Congratulations!!!
I can not think of any incident or any sentence or any word could have been written different way in all the chapters... You have built up their world so well -- the walls which Khushi has built around herself or the deep entreches which Arnav had dug up around himself so far. Very beautifully you have made Arnav to cross this chasms to reach to his Khushi. I am sure the next chapter will be very beautiful and this story will turn out to be the one of most passionate and unique love story that I have ever read.

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