Arshi SS ~ For Your Sake #3 ~ Chapter 7 (Last) - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
Was waiting for an update...
Andcthat was a super chapter...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gopijimodi

Hi Anony_mous,

amazing update.
Khushi proposes and Arnav disposes. wow.
I have a feeling that this consumation will make a miracle.
I enjoyed reading the update. Your are a master of narration.
They did not have dialogues as they were not talking most of time.
But your narration was creating clear visuals.
I am glad that Khushi's brother has access to elevator.
These are small joys that we people with legs take them for granted.
That elevator scene touched my heart.
I understand where Khushi is coming from. she is thinking practically.
Well Arnav is at the top of his game. He wanted kids earlier.
she may or may not be able to provide.
so she is the one thinking practically here.
Life is not fair. Really.



cudnt agree more with u.. especially with the bold part...

i hv been saying this ever since i started reading her stories...

i love reading.. n i hv read atleast some 200 stories on IF.. including arnav-khushi, maan-geet...
fiction by gr8 writers ( paper books ie) .. atleast some 50-60 novels fr sure...

n till date.. thsi is the best narration i hv come across.. i cant leave a word of it.. at times reading the sentences twice in the same flow ... coz i love them soo much.. coz they hold so much meaning n visuals... coz it tks a second read to get the depth tht they put fwd...

i m raedy to stand on my roof n scream this aloud.. if tht wud mk the world knw tht anonymous has the bestest ever narration capabilities...

most fictions run based on conversations.. i m ready to read a full story by her in simple narration..

:) :)

love every bit of ur work anonymous :) :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Was waiting for an update...
And that was a super chapter...
Loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

another lovely chapter...thanks a lot.i can't say how much i enjoy ur writing .loved the way u potary their point of view nd i feel both r right on their place.Arnav is determind nd he isapplying all possible tactis which is simply accepectable.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Glad tht Arnav had taken such a way to make hher understand to see the sense...let her crave for him..love him unconditionally she has done alreay..now she has to luv them..hope Arnav is succful..his stubborn lovely nymph...
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Posted: 12 years ago
unresss...
what an update.!!!!!! the way you expressed their inner turmoils,pain, confusion and helplessness was WOW..
khushi really needs to overcome her self doubts and consider arnav's pov as well..she's not wrong in her place..her love for arnav is soo much that she sacrificed her happiness and is ready to do it again ..but she's ignoring the fact (even now) that he can never be happy without her,he's definitely not better off without her
I love this arnav..he's doing every possible thing to make her understand, to make her his forever
last part was unexpected but I guess it was needed ..now no matter what happen arnav will never let her go

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Posted: 12 years ago
Res...[ will unres in the noon]:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant !! The detailed analysis of their inner turmoils and POVs was outstanding!! I love a persuasive Arnav.
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update!! Hope Khushi agrees to marry him...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved how u described both of their POV...their feelings...so beautifully written...and then their passionate moment...how Arnav couldnt stop despite his resolve...how Khushi couldnt stop despite wanting...and her just this once...it cant be just this once coz Arnav will not let her go ever...such an amazing update...all our waiting worth it...

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