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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was a hot update
I can't comment more as I m still under 18.:P
Waiting for next part
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys finally im updating last part of this SS...and thank u so much for such a lovely response...thank u from bottom of my heart...hope u guys will like this part..pls read and give me feed back😊😊😊
Part - 5

In the peak of night the wind blew ...trying to suppress the raging bonfire ...making an attempt to come in between two souls who were lost in their world of passion and love to even feel the chillness of the wind... ..

Sweating and gasping for air...Swayam looked at Sharon who was in a same condition as him...he looked into her eyes...as a tear escaped from her eye...

Swayam: tum...tum...thik ho...

Sharon nodded her head...

Swayam: did i hurt you...ye aansoon...

Sharon pulled him more to herself...

Sharon: i love you swayam...i love u so much... promise me...ke hum hamesha saath rahenge...chahe kuch bhi ho...

Forwarding her hand...

Swayam took her hand ...kissed her palm...

Swayam: i promise...i love you... kissing her forehead...

Sharon smiled and pulled him for a kiss...and Swayam pulled her into his arms and finally they slept peacefully...

Gang has started in a van following Gps directions given by Vicky who was showing off his new phone...and Rey was driving the van and as usual they were having their usual masti...

After so long rey was enjoying with his friends...lots of misunderstandings...ow finally he got some mental peace...But still one thing was tormenting him...what if they go to same place and Swayam and Sharon...he was scared and left everything to god and started driving...

Sharon opened her eyes to see love of her life sleeping peacefully having her in his arms...she slowly released herself from his arms and she got up and admired him for long...running her hand through his hair...

Just then she looked outside it looked as if sun is just gonna rise...She moved away...got herself dressed in hr shorts..and Swayam's Tshirt for a change went out and saw...

The view she was breathtaking...lake side...sunrise...Wow she thought...

She went back to tent...

(scene is kind of copy from ishaqzaade...)

Sharon: Swayam she whispered into his ears...

Swayam: he just moaned...hmmm

Sharon: Swayam utto...she whispered again...

Swayam: Sone do na Sharon...im sleepy... u dint allow me to sleep...

Sharon eyes widened with shock...and then the turned red thinking the previous night...she immediately composed herself...

Sharon: Swayam pls utto ...view is so good...u would not want to miss this...get up pls...

Swayam: nahi...he said taking her hand and hugging it and slept..

Sharon saw outside sun will rise any moment...so she just went near swayam...

Sharon: SWAYAAAMMM she shouted...

Swayam woke up with a jerk and Sharon started laughing her heart out looking at him...

Swayam : Whats wrong with u...he said yawning...And whats so funny...

Sharon: look at u...

Swayam: ya look at u...kya hai...

Sharon: chalo bahar chalo view is too good...pls she said grabbing his hand to make him stand...and pulling bed sheet...

Swayam: woah...sharon...dont...ok... pulling the bed sheet back... feeling a bit weird infront of her...

Sharon started laughing again...

Sharon: Swayam tum bhi na...itna shy...

Swayam: acha...chalo mujhe koi problem nahi hai he said as he was getting up...

Sharon: nahi...

Sharon immediately closing her eyes... as heart pounded...

She tried peeping through her fingers to find swayam wrapped in bedsheet laughing at her...

Swayam: kya hua...badi has rahi thi...

Shaoron cut him...ok...im waiting out side...u come...

Swayam: ha par mere kapde...wait a min...ye mera t shirt hai...

Sharon: ha...tum kuch aur dhundlo...im waiting outside...

Swayam: ha par... she ran and made some arrangements so that they can watch sunrise sitting lake side...

Swayam got dressed up and came out and hugged her from behind covering them with the blanket...

Sharon smiled at him and they got settled on the rock waiting for the sun to rise...

Sharon made herself in Swayam's arms ...and they just sat there in silence... just enjoying being with each other not looking at each other...

Finally Sharon broke the silence

Sharon: kitni shanthi hai na yaha pe...

Swayam: hmmm... hugging her and resting her head on her shoulder...

Sharon: this is so beautiful...

Swayam: hmm not more than you...

Sharon looked back ...finally staring into his eyes...and immediately looking down...and resting her head in crook of his neck...

Swayam: waise tumn he mere T shirt kyun pehna...

Sharon blushed again and dint answer...

Swayam: kyun??

Sharon: kyun ki mujhe acha lagta hai... i feels so good...she said honestly looking into his eyes...

Swayam smiled and pecked her lips

Sharon again rested her head in crook of his neck...and they stayed there...

Sharon was something on his neck...and she blushed furiously...and somewhere it made her laugh also...

Swayam: kya hua...

Sharon: kuch nahi...

Swayam: arrey bolo..na

Sharon: woh...tumhare neck pe...

Swayam: kya...

She touched the mark...which was a love bite...which pained him a bit...

Sharon turned red...as Swayam gave her a smirk...

Swayam: Btw someone was really out of her box yesterday...

Sharon: enough...

Swayam: kyun ...has rahi thi na...

Sharon: Swayam pls na...

Swayam: ok...ok...he said kissing her on cheek...i wish yeh mark chal jaye jaldi se...

Sharon: kyun.?/

Swayam: woh agar gang dekhe ga tho...u know...

Sharon started laughing again...

Swayam: haso mat...waise bhi...im so hungry Sharon...

Sharon: ya mujhe bhi...chalo we will eat something...

Meanwhile gang has lost their way royally because of Vicky... They came to a dead end where they couldn't drive anymore...All of them got out of the van and started walking so that they will find some place to rest...

Meanwhile Swayam and Sharon are enjoying their best...making breakfast...coffee...romancing...

Between Swayam went off somewhere telling Sharon that he will be back in a while...and Sharon was waiting for him...

Meanwhile gang were walking their way down trecking and cursing Vicky...

Rinni: arrey yaar aur kitna door jana padega...yeha rocks aur keede ke alawa kuch nahi hai...

Simmi: Ya...all thaks to Vicky aur uska naya mobile

Neha: pls...babu ko itna not cursing...yaha pe network not getting.not babu ka fault...

Amar: ha ha tu to uska side legi na..

Rey: guys crib karke koi faida nahi hai...chalo

Gang: ha chalo...

Sharon was waiting fro swayam who went off somewhere...

Sharon: kaha chala gaya mujhe aise chodke...

She felt something soft near her legs...she saw it was a chotu sa rabbit...it was so cute...

She saw swayam sitting next to it...

Sharon: Hey this is so cute...

Swayam: hai na...pakdo...

Sharon: nahi nahi mujhe dar lagta hai...

Swayam: kuch nahi hota hai Sharon...

He made her sit...and made her play with it...

Sharon: Omg this is so cute... i love you...so much

Swayam: thank u

Sharon: tumne nahi bola...this one...aww...swayam...

Swayam: u look so cute with it...

Sharon: isko khan eke liye kya de...

Swayam: kya...yeh tho...grass khayegi na...

Sharon: nahi,,...grass nahi...ha...swayam...i have carrots...pls go na get them...

Swayam went and got them...

They spent lot of time playing with it..

Meanwhile gang walked a lot...finally they found some tent kind of thing...they started trekking towards that place...

Sharon got so possessive about the rabbit that she named it..bunny and she dint allow swayam to touch it...she was enjoying with it full time

Swayam: Sharon not fair na... mujhe bhi do

Sharon: nahi...aww bunny ur so cute...

When Swayam went to grab the rabbit..Sharon started running...

As gang trekked they came a bit near to tent...they saw two people running...

Vicky:arrey guys yeh dono tho honey moon couple lag raha hai...

Neha: ha kitna romantic couple hai na...

Rey got little suspicious hearing word romantic couple...he tried to figure out..but he couldn't make sure of they were Swayam and Sharon...

As Swayam caught Sharon and he twirled her ...and kissed her...

Simmi: OMG...yeh log tho...they are so dreamy ...

Rinni: Ha rinni dream holiday lag raha hai na...

Nilesh: girls baad mein dream kare...jaldi nahi pahuncha na...

Amar: Yehi pe mar jayenge...

Bharat: ha...

Sharon:Ok i give up...thak gayi mein...

Swayam: Mein bhi...phir se bhook lagi hain...

Sharon: Mine chai banau

Swayam: Tum babogi??

Sharon: ha...

Swayam: Wow...chalo..

And they started making tea( Imagine Camping Wali chai making)

Swayam was sitting in tent and staring at Sharon who was struggling to make tea...

As the gang cam near...

Bharat: Bhai log..yeh ladka...jaana pehchana sa lag raha hai...

Vicky: kya...

Rey got scared...:" Oh god...ab kya hoga"

Nilesh: Ha yaar...woh hair style...

Amar: woh shirt...

Just then Swayam got up and Swayam's face was visible to gang

Gang: WHAT THE HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Vicky: guys yeh tho Swayam hai...

Bharat: par yeh tho jodhpur mein...

Amar: ha yaar chupa rustum nikla

Nilesh: ha yaar...

Neha: par...Swayam kiske saath hai...
Rinni,Simmi: ha...yeh ladki kaun hai

Nilesh: ha yaar...aur woh bhi...honeymoon couple jaisa...

Vicky: Swayam...

Bharat: aise kaise aur mujhe nahi pata////

Amar: chalo dekhte hai...

They couldn't see Sharon as they were facing her back...

Rey was praying all gods...

Gang ran fast so that they could see girls face...Rey couldn't stop them as they were all very curious to know who the girl was...

Swayam and Sharon were taking their own time in making chai...( ditto Camping wali chai date)...

Swayam helping Sharon in making chai...

Gang came almost near...but still they couldn't see sharon's face as Swayam was blocking her...

Vicky: arrey ye Swayam ke life mein mystery girl hai kaun...

Nilesh: Aashi hogi kya...

Neha: nahi..aashi tho apni mummy ke pass hai...

Simmi,was trying to make sense...then everything hit her,...OMG...sharonb she thought...she looked at Rey who was tensed to the core...

Amar: Aashi nahi hai...us din suna...ek ladki ki awaaz ayi...

Bharath: ha...

Rinni: par yeh hai kaun...

Just then they saw Swayam kissing that girl...

Vicky: yaar mujhe aur nahi hoga...im gonna go and ask him directly...

Simmi: Vicky are u mad or what

Nilesh: aur nahi tho kya...Swayam ka honeymoon dekhe kya...

Just then Sharon came infront placed her arms around Swayam's neck and pecked him on his lips...( Gang can see her from side View)...

Gang except Simmi and Rey became numb...

Rinni was about to faint...

Simmi couldn't help but smile...

Vicky , Bharat , Nilesh and Amar ...they were not able to talk...they just couldn't digest the fact...

Vicky: Woh...ladki

Nilesh: woh ladki...

Bharat: ha bahi log woj

Amar: ha...

Gang : SHARONNN WHAT THE FISSSHHH

Swayam and Sharon heard a loud scream and turned that side to see 7 shocked to death faces...and one guilty face who was hiding his face,,,,,,,

They were hell shocked...and looked at each other

Swayam: yeh gang kaha se tapka beech mein...

Sharon: Oh god Swayam ab kya...

Swayam: kuch nahi...just calm down...calm down swayam...

They held each others hand...

After a long time gang actually came back to senses and came to Swayam and Sharon who were looking at them like culprits...

Vicky: arrey bharat..yeh jodhpur hai kya...

Rinni: nahi nahi yeh shimla hai ha simmi...

Nilesh : nahi guys...i think...yeh junction hai...dono ka...tabhi tho yeh dono...yaha..

Swayam: guys...

Bharat: bahi log...woh kya hai na...Swayam ghum ho gaya hai...jodhpur mein woh kya...ha trek karte hue...

Simmi: ha aur Sharon... mujhe nahi pata ki inta bada bada machar hote hai...

Sharon: ENOUGH...shooting glares at Rey who was just hiding his face ...

Sharon: ok...by now u must have understood that we are together...she said hugging Swayam...

Gang: Oh..really...

Sharon: shut up...we had some issues so we came here to sort them...

Swayam: ha guys hum tum logo ko bolne hi wale the...yeh sab hogaya...

Vicky: ya ya humhe samajh mein aagaya tum log yaha kyun aaye ho...

Gang started their fake coughing...

Rey: yaar bas bhi karo na ab...

Simmi: tumhe sab kuch pata than a...

Rey: woh mein...

Nilesh:Rey tum bhi...Chal tumhe baad mein dekhenge...

Vicky: Guys...finally..finally...Swayam aur Sharon...waise i still cant believe...we are happy for u brooo

Guys hugged Swayam

And girls faked anger with Sharon when Sharon made a puppy face they went and hugged her...

Rinni: par ye hua kaise...

Swayam: woh sab baad mein...pehle tum log fresh ho jao...

Sharon: ha...

They all got freshened and settled down teasing Swayam and Sharon...

Swayam: wow...ab yeh camping mein aur maza ayega..hum sab sath hai...

Sharon: ya guys...it will be fun goa yaad hai...

Nilesh: abbe tu jhoot mat bol...

Vicky: ha...ye bol na...ki yeh log kyun tapke mera romantic holiday pe...

Swayam : arrey yaar..

Amar: tut ho bada chupa rustum nikla...

Bharat : ha...

Rinni: ha..par tum dono...u r utest couple ever...

Simmi: i agree on that...

And they kept teasing Swayam and Sharon...all the while...and thus happily teasing for Swaron ever after

till i write more on them..

So my dear folks this is the end of this OSor SS...i hope you guys will like it I have loved writing this one...i'll really miss writing it😊😊 Thank u guys so much...for lovely response...😃😃😃

Edited by varsh-mayur - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yape me first..

update wass tooo good ...

really loved it...

ur such a genious in written romance...

di no words 4 dis part
Edited by swaronlove001 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was indeed a superb ss...👍🏼
Read it in one goo 😉
perfct ending ⭐️ ..haha swaron caught.. 😉 it was depicted well.. 😊
thnx fr d pm 😛
Edited by sneha_sharon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome..👏Perfect ending of this beautiful love story.. Keep writing more..😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Such a sweet end of a beautiful story...u are so amazing in portraying the cute SwaRon...lovely SS...really sorry for such short comment ...m not keeping well...still i couldnt stop myself from commenting here...really beautifully written..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was a beautiful update ! 😊

Loved the Romance between Swaron 😊
and the gang got to know about them !!!! OMG !!! 😊
Loved the gang teasing them.. 😊 and Swaron were super cute ! 😊
Thnx for the PM 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was so cute
super duper update
it was just amazing
I loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was Perfect End for this SS.
Swaron enjoying their time with each other nd savour d moments.
Gang came to knw nd they accept them by whole heart.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Varshu i love dis...
Seeing the gang reactions i was completely🤣🤣
Best ending for dis os..
I wish ki it never ended n went on n on...
It was just super cute their romance thier teasing wow just magical☺️
N gang tapkifying was funny n swaron gettin exposed dat was just superb..
Fab work yaar..simply love it..

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