FF: The Healing Touch #3:Ch 16 Pg 134, New Thread Pg 149

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Sharmila

@spsharmila

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Wonderful chapter...loved the way Arnav took Khushi to the places which had very fond memories from his childhood...and also loved the way Khushi responded ..it was a memorable trip..and there is still more left to it...can't wait to read more...please update soon 😃

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..Jyoti..

@..Jyoti..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Congrats on d new thread
lovely update dear

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Im glad Arnav made Khushi see his world and that he was able to relive all the happy memories with Khushi's support...

Fabulous update😊

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shubhanjli

@shubhanjli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Firstly congrats on yr new thread.

Secondly banner is just awesome.

And finally fantastic update. I just loved this romantic and quiet outing. Finally Arnav is coming out of his grief. Hopefully soon he ll realize his love for her.

Try and update whenever possible...

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Congratulations on the new thread .. and the new Banner ...

Am glad he is opening upto Khushi ...

Spending the day with her ...

going down memory lane with her ...

reminiscing about his childhood and the pleasant memories it held will

help him heal his wounded soul ...

Thanks Nidhi ...

Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: mem1
AWESOMENESS!

Nidhi...I was missing you and getting worried. You were gone too long. But now you are back with a bang. That was a beautiful update. Loved every bit of it.

NASCAR Hall of Fame, the Biltmore and a football game. what more could one ask for! 😆

I did have one question :If Arnav is tired, why can't Khushi drive??? Not that I would have complained about "staying overnight " ... we know what your Arnav and Khushi do when they say overnight. 😉

Very good question! Khushi doesn't drive and it will be shown soon. Remember her riding her bike in the first chapter?

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henamani

@henamani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

the comfort level is growing. i have always admired the way you show the growth in relationships

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

awesome update beautifully done loved arnav taking her to the places that made him feel happy loved his walk down memory lane remembering the good and just pushing the bad away loved how she was just there for him loved how he was thinking if she would love it or hate is so cute she wants him to heal and be happy even if she is not there if that's not love wonder what is arnav is tired the should have stayed the night awesome update thanks for the email

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago

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cherrybloom1

@cherrybloom1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007

Very good question! Khushi doesn't drive and it will be shown soon. Remember her riding her bike in the first chapter?

wow di!

how do u have such little little things in order? i mean i can never do it!

i wud just be writing a chapter and notice how i have never mentioned anything about it before and then i wud just be like "Shit! what am i supposed to do now?"

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Jenna

@LondonChick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Will comment properly once I am back from my vacation

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That was so beautifully written. The chemistry between Arnav and is so beautiful to read about.

I loved how Arnav, the guy who has long ago buried his past and hated bringing it up suddenly opened up and remembered his past, that too happily all because of a girl he just met.

So early on in their relationship Khushi has already changed him so much. I just cannot wait to read about the other changes in him.

I feel like this is only the beginning but at the same time I feel like this is the calm before the storm. I just shudder to think of what will happen when Arnav goes back and Khushi remains in the US because though they have not realised it yet, those two are more attuned to one another than they can comprehend. It was so palbable in this chapter. The day they spent was such a mundane day if you looked at it from a far , but up close you could see how this day, the time they spent together was so new to them, but at the same time it felt as if they had been doing this forever, spending time with one another regularly.

I loved how you wrote about Arnav not knowing where to take Khushi but then knowing exactly where to take her as soon as he got into the car.

Not only that, but Khushi easy accpetance of both cars and footballs, I cant help but think depicts how as a person she is very understanding, accepting and very open. And just like she has come into Arnav's world and helped him to revisit his past and accepted the things that make up his world, just like that she too will accept him the way he is even with his faults and extra baggage.

I loved this chapter and God only knows how long I have been waiting to read it. I loved this chapter. It was just so cute.

I cant wait for the new one. Please dont make us wait as long this time else I wont be able to survive the wait.

Edited by LondonChick - 12 years ago