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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Deelight

awesome dear... loved it!! ol d best fa ur exmz do well... n updae sooon 'l be waitin fa d update !!! tc

Thank you!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

Sorry dear couldn't do this yesterday

My net was being right pain in the well you can guess where

And the most annoying thing is it decided to do that just when I sat down to do your stories and other longish stories

The damn thing was working fine before

Best of luck for your exams

And hope your hand is good


I can understand! Stupid net! They used to do the same thing for me! Today also I sat to update at 10 and the net went bye bye on me! But came back soon! So was able to update!


My hand has gone mad. It pains at really odd times. Suddenly without reason it pains and then the pain vanishes suddenly too. Stopped worrying about it these days! Just wear the wrist band and continue with what I am doing! The pain is also not that intense! It is more of an annoyance now!😡


Well lets see how arhi and maneet shall cope with their meeting again

And what our ASR and MSK shall behave like with the one they love

DD and LG they will be for sure ufff poor geet and khushi I tell Ya


I know! Idiots!😡


Awww you have to give it to anj she cares for her a lot

Well she cares for others a lot more sometimes I think forgetting herself

So once khushi gets to their house with payal anj can finally pay some attention to herself too


That is why I love Anjali! She is so caring and loving!😊


Hey bhagwaan she is asking khushi to come there and choose for her sisters

With the possibility of arnie coming there too

Danger alert I tell ya for her


Wish Khushi could have heard your danger alert!


But of course she would go and help anj why wont she

Hmmm so geet whose office you going to sweetie not your DD

Of course she is going to work for her dusht danav man

Hmmm he wont make it easy for her though am sure not that we want him to

So she is joining KC ahhh this should be good

And I must say good move dev getting your bhabhi closer to your bhai again

Geet thand paa le kuch nahin hoga

Well of course KC is like that ek ASR ki nahin balki MSK too is right terror

But don't you go afraid dear doesn't suit you for sure

Hain geet and pinky know one another

But how I wonder but cool naa that she found some friends her already


Pinky is one of the characters in the show! Geet came from HP to Dilli and stayed Pinky's house in the show! Pinky's father and Geet's father were friends and Pinky and her dad shifted to Dilli from HP when the girls were kids. when Geet had to escape HP her dad had called Pinky's dad and told Geet to meet Pinky and her dad and stay there!


No she isn't married and if she was pinky dear then her surname shall be khurana

Well you will know soon why she is raizada and not handa soon enough dear

Hmmm well he sure is eager aint he to get her a job here

Bless you geet ke devar haiyye ab toh love story shuru hone se phir se koi nahin rok sakta

Not even maan himself


Yeh baat toh ek dum sach hai! Let the love story begin!😆


Yup your geet is here

But of course when you are in front of her you wont be maan but MSK or DD as she shall call you soon enough

And no it aint your dream either

Dude like I said not dream but reality only mate

But then lets not let him know too soon

And you cant forget someone who stays in your heart in your soul and basically in you

Then you will have to forget yourself too mate


So true!


Hmmm what job did he give her and how soon shall maan know about it

Okies so she is the new trainee architect who shall be working under sasha hmmm

Hmmm so he got her in and maan don't know as of yet

But of course he will know eventually after all company unki hai

So let the games of love begin I hope


Yes! Let it begin!


I know right she is gonna make him fall in love with her again no matter what

We shall always be grateful for dev for doing this for them

Not only dev but NT came to their rescue too man


This must be one of the few FFs where people adore Dev and NT!


And this way geet got her job at KC and got this much closer to maan again yipeee

Oh yes it is still valid for the reasons known more to him

But its not as if she isn't good at it either

He isn't just keeping her so maneet get closer but also because she has the potential

Stage one of their plan was a success but of course it just got harder from here

Manzil tak ke raaste kaanton se bhare hi hote hain!😆


Awww he thinks still he is hallucinating when that aint the case

Awww you feel for him don't ya

Wait till it comes to him as a shock that she was there and she is back in his life

Awww so she too was hiding from him

Pssttt geet if you do that aap dono ki love story phir se kaise bhadegi ji

Well if we can wait that long we can wait more naa


You dont have to wait too much! Only till Chapter 65 after which separation track will be over!😃


Oh ho so he has started to affect her man now that's good news right

She at least has a crush on him that's a start people

Well she too cant run from the love her heart feels for him

Though her mind might not remember him but her heart cant forget his either


Mind can forget somebody but how can heart forget someone who they loved so much? How can a soul forget its soulmate?😊


Hmmm this just got more fun here

Oh ho so now khushi turn with arnie well lets see then

Awww so our khushi is playing with her future bhanja

Well am sure arnie is gonna come before she goes for sure


So right!


Oh lord arnie really

Even though she did what she did was bad you still cant console her

She lost her babuji and all you can think about is what she did

And am sure he is gonna make things worse aint he

Well him and maan are expert at doing that


Yup! Arnav toh apne paav pe khuraadi maarne mein expert hain!😉


Kabhi kabhi dil ki bhi sunn liya kariye aap dono parr nahin they wont

Man its time like this I just wish I could oh forget it no point he wont listen anyway

He is gonna break her heart aint he like she did yup

Oh khushi can you ever be happy to see him hate you

Even though you wanted him to do that

After all he is the one you love so of course its gonna hurt and he is here to make it worse

Excuse me inhe koi shauk nahin hai apna dil aur toodne ka parr she is here only because your sister asked her to come

But of course you wont know and just blast her for wrong thing

This is gonna haunt him later on for sure


That it will!


Cant believe he could say that to her

Baaki samajh mein aata hain but that was the worst thing he could say

Well one of the worse things he could say

He shall regret it later on saying all this to her


I will make sure he will regret it!


But now his anger is just gonna take over

Am afraid this is the only reason his brain shall come up with

You see he has fallen in love but still don't know how to use his heart for that


So true!


Hard luck dear to have fallen for him but then guess what he is like this would be his reaction only

Agar apne pyaar parr bharosa hota he wouldn't have thought of you like this

And neither would he have hid his love from his family

Okay that's bit harsh right I guess

Arnie what to do

The less said here the better I am afraid

Or might just end up abusing him lots for sure


😆


He can see and feel his pain but not the one she has

Kaisa yeh oyaar hai ji

So geet is back again I see and this time maneet face to face for sure

Arrey waah first day and bam she is in his arms

Haiyye kya scene hai boss


😆


Mann gaye bhale hi inka pyaar naa badh raha ho parr maahi moments toh bann hi jaate hain


😆


As if he will let her fall ever

Maan my man she wasnt a hallucination but reality for sure

Soni nahin sirf geet guess he will have to forget that facet of geet and fall for this geet


But Geet and Soni are the same na? I mean dono ke ek hi personality hain! So Maan is already in love with Geet! But he just wants Geet to have fair chance in choosing her life partner hence, he separates Soni from Geet in his mind!


Dono ek doosre ki aankhon mein khoye huye hain

And no one said anything hain how did that happen ji

Peeps get out of it this aint KM but KC snap snap

No actually don't come out of it please

Just be in each others arms and be lost in one another


😆


See told ya in KC not KM my dears so this was gonna happen

Hmmm not him too man hadh hain inn dono lover boys ki

Jab dekho gussa aur sirf gussa hota hai naak parr

Oh so geet shall meet the MSK it seems

Dev my man you are dead meat


😆


But then he knew this would happen

Tasha dear he knows who she is more than anyone else so don't tell him that

But then how is she to know

Loved how geet spoke for herself though good tell your dusht daanva you aint scared of him

Well he became the angry young man since you came back into his life but without you remembering him

So dear it will be only you who will get him back to his normal self again


Poor Geet! Such a big task in her hand! Turn MSk into Maan again!😭😆


Dev ke liye sab prathna kariye ki who maan ke gusse se bach sake

He shall need all his wits to survive this right yup geetke babaji protect this man please


😆


Good one lets go for being innocent here and make him say why he is mad

In the end it wont matter any way will it

Dude don't say about geet being khurana or he might just explode on you

Even I don't like to see NT in white saree please


😆


So he got her the internship in London hmm interesting for sure

Well we all know that wont help

Dev has to make sure she stays more with you so the love happens again naa

Sorry to say but this one thing he cant do for you at all

That is so true where is maan there shall be geet too yaar

Wow love this man so much I do yaar

Tussi toh chaah gaye boss


This is one of the few FFs where everyone is loving Dev so much!


Anj here am with arnie no way can someone con buaji that easily

She can make anyone cower in fear before her

But well how to tell her that

But this means more arhi meeting and that's not good either

I know right arnie god save that person trying to fool buaji including you mate

Pathetic aint it when he thinks its good he is hurting her

Okay better not start on him again


Go ahead! Abuse him! While as a writer I love him, coz he is such an interesting character to write but as a female I hate him so much that I might even join you in abusing him!😆


She aint faking it she is really afraid of what you might say to break her fragile heart again mate

He can see she is hurt with him saying such things but does he relent hell no

Haan haan sirf aap ka hi dil toota that she is really happy aint she

She has been cryinf tears of blood here mate

But then why would you bother to find out the real reason

All he can see is his hurt and heart break not hers

Really you are happy to see her cry arnie

Your heart doesn't melt seeing her cry

Was that all the love you had for her

Am this made me cry when she did

Hope she makes him pay for every single tears for hers later on


Dont worry! Arnav will pay for it!


But of course she wont after all she is khushi naa


She wont but Arnav will pay!


Dammmit arnie don't do this please

But when has he ever listened

You really think that he is good choice for your sister

If he can you in tears he can make her cry too

Do we really want that for your sister

And khushi you should know that he has turned into ruthless heartless arrogant jerk again

Ahhh this is hard to see her broken like this

Come one khushi you have to show him that you wont fall any more

That if he cant tell why you did this don't waste your time in trying to make him see sense

I know being harsh on arnie but why is everything to do with him

Its always me me me me for this man never about her


So true! Arnav is so selfish! But dont worry, he will be nornal when we reach Chapter 64!


Trust me you don't know he can be even worse but then in the end it will be he who suffers too

I wonder what maan did that she is this mad

Waise agar apni heroines too get to it they can give the heroes a run for their money in the anger department and geet is just demonstrating that it seems


😆


Oh teri she sure is scaring nani with her anger yaar

Thank god for kanha man he sure cooled her down

So was it maan the dusht daanav or someone else

Though I doubt it can be any one else

Waise it seems kanha is gonna be good there to reduce anger of people it seems starting with geet


Kanha ki jai ho!😆


Well that is so apt way of describing her future hubby

By the way this also goes for the rakshash laad governor too

But then he isn't being discussed but maan so back to him

Sheesh waah kya baat hai isse ohele no one else would have called him all those names but then they aint geet naa so of course they wouldn't say that


Geet aur uske antics!😆


Well since you forgot him he is back to being a machine

Warna even we have seen what lover boy was doing didn't we

Arrey haan gussa how can we forget that huh

Waise itni toh who gustaki nahin karenge ki aap ko bina wajah daante

Warna aap bhi thodi naa hain unn logon mein se joh chup baithe hain naa geet

Awww geet you will see more of this MSK am afraid but then only you can stop him from being MSK either dear

Anj no need to interfere in this yaar

Yeh toh maneet ke beech main hi solved hogi

After all she is the only one who can have a lasting affect on him

And this way she can be closer to him my dear

But then they don't know naa

You go girl if he does do that make sure you make him see your angry side he needs it

No one said that he is bad person but he sure can be right pain when he wants to be

And especially now that geet isn't there to cool him down

She is slowly falling for him

Awww she was thinking about him that way cool yaar


Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai! Aadha Ho Jaayega!😆


Well that's a start for sure

I call it some progress

But arhi unka kya hoga what with arnie being such rakshash

Okay best of luck for your exam dear

And what a wonderful update

But you must forgive me for being so mean to arnie sorry dear

Hope you don't hate me too much

Cheers for pm

Thanks for the review!
And I dont hate you for bashing Arnav! He deserves it!😆
Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashavi

loved the update...
loved Maaneet's first meeting in office...atleast Maan understands Geet's feeling but very disappointed with Arnav...it was all due 2 hisaction that they are in this mess and he s hurting Khushi with his cutting words...if he s in pain then Khushi s in more pain than him...y s he accusing Khushi that she trapped him in her love,it was he who used 2 stalk her and nt the other way around...once he realises his mistake Khushi should nt forgive him easily as he was at more fault than her and he s hurting her self respect a lot...please don't show Khushi 2 b all forgiving when Arnav realises her stand as he s nt even trying 2 understand her POV bt still s throwing accusation at her...if he feels Khushi has betrayed him then even he had betrayed her by hiding his real identity from her...
so nw Geet and Dusht Davan's love story will start...so Geet's heart has not 4go10 her love for Maan...
good update...
update soon...

Dont worry! Khushi wont forgive Arnav easily! I have planned something hatke for them!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sutapasarbabhom

Nice update arnav is so cruel to kushi if he realy lov her hw can he huqt her so much wish their misunderstanding wil clear soon lov geet in kc scene

Wasnt Arnav the same way in the show? I have tried to stay true to the characters!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kushigowda

buaji arnav-khushi ki baath suni kya??
when will NK come???

Buaji did not listen!
Nk will enter after chapter 64!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: coolflora

idiot arnav

always do like that
but khushi is no less always sacrificing for love ones
i think sometime it good to be selfish then selfless

one question whom does lavnaya love?
nk or some other person i am sure he gona enter soon

i love geet maan scene
MSK back to dusht dhanav forms

Lavanya loved a guy from her college named Rohan! But now they have broken up! She will be paired with NK now!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav

haye lovely update

so now mannet's track is coming
but what abt arhi
grt one

Arhi will keep on clashing till Geet falls for Maan again. Then both the couples will have a hatke twist and the story will be back on the main track!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

Hopefully today my net won't betray me

Let's see shall we


Thanks for the review!😃


Poor maan I so feel for him

Well not as much as I feel for his geet though

Oh ho so she is back in your dreams

Wearing your mother given saree for her bahu wow

And this was bound to happen which is why dev gave geet this job


Exactly! Dev ki mehnat aise hi thodi na waste jaayegi!😉


He wanted those feelings of love for geet that you have buried in you to be alive again

And you did just that

Well your heart for sure did

But of course this wont be enough for maan to be with his love again

Ufff at least in your dreams don't run from her itna toh aap karr sakte hain ji


😆


Ek saal hoy a 50 saal pyaar toh aap unhi se hi karenge and you know it

You can try to keep her away but the truth is you cant really succeed dude

Ufff maan you feelings aren't some clients or employees that they will listen to your MSKness


🤣


They will do what they think is right

And for your feelings and heart she is the one naa

Waise jitni bhi koshish karr lijiye but you cant let those feelings for her stay buried some deep corner of your heart

They are bound to come out when you see her feel her and that's what happened


Exactly!


Ufff abb pyaar toh aisa hi hota hai you cant supress it even if you wanna so sorry maan or is it MSK you cant win against it and you know so

Well there he wanted to send her further from him but instead she seems to be getting closer

What a timing my man now that's something


😃


Maan kya baat hai aap ke toh bhaag hi khul gaye

But of course you wont let that get to you that easily

After all you are in your DD mode naa

What a scene that is and after so long too haiyye main toh flat ho gayi ji


Achcha laga last line padhke!😃


Sorry dear this just isn't in your control to be away from him

You have been too much apart from him but not anymore

Arrey inhe apne crush ki padi hai aur wahan maan ka control aur mushkil hota jaa raha hai


🤣


Kya situation paida kari ji aap ne ji

Dude snap out of it chaddo why bother


😆


That's the second time mate and in the office too

Sheesh adi pinky and tasha and full staff oh ho bas inhi logon ki kami thi


😆


Wow he was too lost in her and she had to do something to bring him out of his stupor for sure

Don't you glare at her mate she tried to bring you back to reality but you were too lost in her

And here comes his MSK mode for sure

Haila khud toh dekh kar nahin chal rahe the aur inhe blame karr rahe hai

Bechari geet inki toh kismet hi kharab hai ji


So true!


Oh ho don't come to such conclusions dear but of well now that you have that's okay too

Aap ki aankhon ko kya hua who bhi toh button jaisi ho jaati hai with her close by


😆


Man that was bound to happen

If it didn't well then it wouldn't be MSK naa

But that's a start anyway hai naa so lets continue with that

So she don't want to be near him are ya sure sweetie

When we all know that isn't the case but further from it right

Sorry babaji cant listen to that pray of yours


😆


Ahhh so here cometh ASR yeh toh MSK se bhi do kadam aage hain

Ufff him and his anger issues


😆


Poor khushi yaar

She is the one who is faring out the worst and all because of one mistake of breaking his heart

After all according to arnie only he is heart broken while khushi is being so happy and living her life peacefully


I can feel the sarcasm here!😃


As if its even worse for her not only has she lost her love to her sister but she cant see her sister with that love but she has to for now

Great so this means he is gonna be a rakshash again aint of course what else to expect


So true!


Just once I wanted for him to think of it from her pov


He will! One day!😊


But guess that wont be happening

So I hope she makes him pay for all this he is doing now when all is well

That will teach him few things for sure


He will pay!


Arrey yeh bua bhi naa give him more chances to taunt khushi

But then she don't know naa

No wonder khushi was willing to go and get the Prasad to avoid him

But guess her luck is not going well for now

Don't make it worse I keep saying it but he wont listen


When did ASR listen to anybody but himself?


Rakshash laad governor

Now how is he gonna taunt her with buaji absence

I would like to see him try it in front of other agar itni hi himmat hai inme

But if he did then this situation wouldn't have come either would it


So true! Maan toh ise dho daalta! Aur phir Anjali ise kachcha chabaa deti! Phir Naani aur Buai bhi toh peeche nahi rahenge! Aur phir Geet ka keher bhi barsega! in short, agar Arnav ne Khushi ko sabke saamne taunt kiya toh uski full on band baji!


You know what arnav you are asking for your own down fall


Agreed!


Khushi don't just don't give a damn to him please

He is not worth it at the moment if at all


Agreed!


Dammit arnav even I have doubts if you ever loved

What kind of love is this that takes satisfaction I making her cry

He just cant be understood by me but then he was betrayed or so he thinks


This is how he behaves when he thinks he has been betrayed. By the way, dont ask me how he thinks. I just write what I saw in the show! If you want to understand him, better contact the writers of the show!😆😉


At least just once as his right of being her love he should have asked why she did what she did

But no why would he after all he is ASR aint he sad man real sad that attitude of his is gonna cause him to loose a lot one hopes


So true!


What is dev up to now with the radio I wonder something good for sure


You are so right!


Uff inka pyaar bhi ajeeb hai naa

But then love is strange in itself for sure


So true!


He wants to be sure that geet goes off safely but cant go fight for that love

Yaar sach mein kaise premi mile hain hamari geet aur khushi ko


😆So true!


Well phela pyaar hai aur uppar se they both are useless when it comes to heart emotions and stuff

And the only ones who made them feel those things aren't with them so this right

I know who is maan fooling except himself man

As if it is hard to forget your first love whom you still love and will continue to love no matter what

Dev you are right perfect song for maneet that is one of my favs


Mine too!


Naino se nain ladh rahe hai kya baat hai ji

Kab tak aap apni nazar inse churayenge maan

Well yes she doesn't know now but that wont be for too long either

Aap unhe dekhein ya naa you still cant keep your love for her buried for too long


So true!


Haiyye FB of all their moments wow that was perfect there

Dude you haven't really lost her but how to tell him this right

Ahhh geet if you knew why he is like this well we wouldn't be in this situation but what to do this too was necessary naa

Kya Karen bechare ne apna phela pyaar khoya well not really but he thinks so naa

As if he can forget any memories related to her ever and with her in front of his eyes at KC even more harder not that we would want him to forget her love ever


Exactly!


Pyaar kabhi pooch karr nahin hota hai maan bas ho jaata hai

And you cant stop yourself from falling no matter what

Kab tak yeh appne nazrein inse chura paayenge even I wanna know


Pata nahi! Tab tak kitne Chapters lagenge calculate nahi kiya!😉


He was very far off in that land where just the two of you were there geet

Hmmm so her ride is her some relief for maan or not

Jaate jaate she gave him one last look waah kya baat hai

No don't buaji these songs only bring them sadness but she don't know dammit it why didn't anyone know that was the major headache in their love story


😆


Very few knew of their love compared to maneet

Oh dear this is such sad times for them all

Well you had the right to say something to her once before you started hating her but you didn't do that either

That sure is true his heart is with her while the same is true for her

But he is hell bent on breaking that heart dear

Actually even she wants to know why she met you not just you arnav


😆


Well you are far from him only because of your one decision but as if you had any choice right

But I wish you had told him just once why you did what you did knowing he wont ask

Thought he also never gave you that chance

Because arnav love cant be gotten rid of that easily I just said same for maan

But the two of you think that love can be gotten rid of just because you don't have your lover with you sorry but it don't work like that ever


So true! Dono ke dono ullu ke patthe!😆


Yes if only he did but he didn't and look what happened right well what to do this love lark was new for him so this was bound to happen

If both maan and arnav didn't do what they are doing that would be so not them naa


So true!


Yes it's a good song but not if you are heart broken then it just makes that heart break even worse and makes you cry too

And so they meet again but of course we still have so much heart break about what to do

So all went in their own groups minus few who aren't here

Well guess annie and jun shall be back in time for the weddings to right partners hai naa

Geet yaar tere veere ko sirf sad songs hi kyun sujhte hain


Veere ko nahi soojhte! Aakash ka bas chale toh woh sirf romantic gaane gaaye! But it is Geet who is requesting such sad songs!


Jabki inko inka pyaar mil chukka hai

Dude when you know you cant win against your little sis why do you even bother


😆


Lo this time it wasn't aki who sang the sad song but geet herself suggested it why yaar

As it is there is enough sadness with her adding more to it

And isn't that the more reason not to listen to such sad songs but guess it goes with the modd of the lovers so why bother

Hmmm one side its arnav accusing his love and the other maan asking her why she did this to him

Oh ho these sad songs sure are making them think of their bhooli bisri yaadien


So true!


Wow it sure again is appropriate for these four lovers

Man I feel so bad for these lovers but what to do no one can win against their fate or destiny but the same will give them their love back

Great there she is enjoying the song the only one but then only because she don't remember well that is the biggest headache naa


Wasn't it ironic that Geet is the only one enjoying it while rest of the three were feeling so sad?


Tears and only tears for them all but not for too long I know so this sad phase shall be over soon we just gotta be patient shame that is one thing I never can be


I know! Even I am impatient to write the rest of the parts but kya karein! My hand cannot type so much so fast!😭


Aki is the only one who can smile as he is the only one out of these who got his love naa


So true!


Ahh his brother and his wife they are still routing for maneet love unlike his rest of family and also helping him win his love back too thank god for small mercies


Aren't Dev and NT awesome?😉


Well she left you only to come back again to you only mate

Geet he is in pain as his love doesn't remember him and its you that love

What to do love can be bliss but it can also be painful very much so


So true!


Maan it seems nothing is going in your favour right

Well when once again is destiny bringing your love back to you don't go back from it mate

Haw not again yaar

Ab iss mein iss bechari ka kya kasoor that you didn't fight for her love

That you cant forget her love but she forgot you

Am sure had she a choice she wouldn't have forgotten

Dekh lijiye gaa we so want you to do what you are threatening

Tabhi toh mazaa ayegaa naa kyun

Don't spare him next time my dear

You show him hell from you and make him realise that you aint no pushover


Dont worry! Geet Maan ki bolti band jaroor karegi!


Aye haiyye so it was dev plan huh

I swear he is even better than rest well experience naa so he can help his bro get his love back

Last time also they fell in love slowly slowly due to their fights only and this time too naa

Bas beta dev don't get caught by maan or you are so doomed for sure


No! Dev wont get caught!


Well anj she knew that already

I knew it he would do this again but why does it matter you hate khushi so why make her jealous

But of course he will do it wont he

Dude she is easy but not that much

And you are underestimating her too she has a lot of endurance for such things

Finally she aint letting it show how much she is hurt by his remarks

It had to be done or he would break her too much and then all could be ruined naa

I knew it she wont show her hurt when he mentioned la and red sarees sorry but she is made of sterner stuff


Exactly! Our Khushi is stronger!


So are we gonna just look at her standing there or give her a lift too mate

Well how can he stop worrying for his love no matter what happened

But of course this time geet wont make it easy for him either

Kya excuse diya hai inhone well sach toh bol nahin sakte toh yehi sahi


😆


He shall never listen to you about this no matter what you say to him

Oh ho maan we waved back to her good that's some progress for now

He will be out of his sadness once you are back with him dear

And of course our maan is good looking

So this is how her love started for him again


Yup!


And that will help only further to him only

Haiyye kya baat hai kya solid chapter tha boss

And luckily this time my stupid net didn't let me down wooohoo

So lets see what else is in store for maneet and arhi

What ever it is am sure it will be rocking and fun too

Cheers for pm

Thanks for the review! And I hope my story keeps you hooked in future too!😉
Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

Oh ho so back with this

Cant wait for this
Will be with you soon
And one is back finally if i say so myself

So in this one geet shall fall in love with maan finally


Yes, the process of falling in love will start!😉


And apparently arhi shall have some moments

Cant wait for this now

So lets see what you have for us today then

Hmmm so with arnie it starts huh

Well go check who is giggling mate

Ahhh who else but kushi right

She sure has gotten close to kanha right

Well how can she not after all future mami to be naa

Only if he as in his mamu don't ruin things more of course


😆


With him one never can tell for sure

No she really is there you aint hallucinating

Arnie don't do anything with the child being present

Or you will scare him too and that shall be bad real bad

See she thought you wont be here

But her bad that you are here man

I knew it she wouldn't come while he was at home

After all khushi has no death wish you know


😆


Wonder what song is aki on about

And how that song shall affect ahi

Am sure its bound to be heard by them


You are so right!


He is right about one thing if he don't pay attention his bhai will fry him for sure

As it is his mood is off these days due to his love being lost

Thank god anj came to take kanha away

At least one innocent is not gonna get it from arnie


😆


Haste huye jo rote hain naa arnie they are the ones who are able to live

Really dude not helping for sure

And this incident sure is bound to get khushi protectiveness and concern out

Well she cant see him like that in pain physically naa what ever she may have done

Uff anj be careful in your quest to make sure that your chotte is okay don't forget about yourself dear

Ufff arnie what to do with you

Even though you haven't stopped taunting her since what she did khushi still wants to take care of you

Does that not say something about her arnie please look deeper into her love and don't think of it as shallow


Wish Arnie could listen to you!


Khushi you so did right thing anj would have done just that ignored her possiblility of getting hurt due to arnie

Yeh pyaar aur concern nazar aaya parr who nahin jab aap ko who apni behen ko saunp rahi this arnie

Thank god for some small mercies arnie

But I still wish he would at least once just once think about her pov about all this


He will! One day!😉


Or at least try to know why she did what she did yaar

Is that too much to ask I wonder

Hmm with aki even arhi shall enjoy the song

But that wont last for too long naa

Man how do you do it find the appropriate song for the given situation


That is simple! You have got it in reverse! When I listen to a song, I get a vision (like getting a vision of Khushi doing marham patti to Arnav when I was listening to Do Pal Ruka) and I note it down and then go through my story plan searching for a place where I can insert the song!😆😉


This so goes for their situation

Its gonna happen with arhi too they are here now but then they too shall separate

Ohhh khushi seeing you like that breaks my heart

So I hope she gives it all back to him and soon

And she maks him suffer after they get married of course

Just this once don't ruin the moment arnie please

Oh so beautiful moments he didn't do anything bad

Well they have only this and then back to what it was

She loves him so does he but their situation doesn't let them have their love with one another

How sad that is even worse than maneet situation


So true!


He does care for you but his ASR persona doesn't let him do that for too long

After all its his defence mechanism to hurt you as you hurt him

But the thing is even that wont help him

How can one not cry at this juncture for them

Being so close and yet so far from one another


I can sense how much attached you are to this story by the above comments!😊


Ahhh they shall cherish this hug as this is all they have for now

He hugged her back, his hold getting as tight as possible.

But khushi this wont be for long and she knows it too

They say if your love is with you all is well but this at the moment is just an illusion of sorts

But one day you will have your love and then all shall be fine

Well home is where the heart is khushi and arnie is your heart dear

And the spell was broken as it was bound to

She hurt him once again as she had to

And he is back to being ASR and angry at her for doing this to him again

Now this question you should ponder at

Please don't give up on it


He won't!


Why did she do this go and ask her why was she so concerned for you

Just get your answer arnie but he wont am sure

She wants happiness of her sister at the cost of happiness of the love she has for you

That's what she wants but cant tell you either

Just for once in your life listen to your heart

Its right in this case but he wont will he

All this confusion can be over if you want

And only you can do it she wont

As she wont willingly ruin her sister happiness even if it costs her hers


You know Arnie and Khushi so well!


Ahhh there is Romeo number two

Hehe he has hoping to blast his younger brother but instead the love of his life cometh

That sure shut him up for sure so funny naa


Happy that you enjoyed it!


Well you didn't think you can run away from her maan

Not when she works for you mate

Funny she should think that but she is his ex well not really but it will do


😆


Good one dev that line of his was funny

And also so true too in a way

Arrey waah tussi toh mahan ho dev

Kya opportunities use karte ho maneet ko paas lanne ke liye


Dev ki jai ho!😆


Thank god pinky wasn't there yaar sorry but then maneet ka mamala hai naa toh chalega

Ji nahin apse nafrat nahin pyaar

Which is why he tris to avoid you so he doesn't show that love shuv to you dear

Trust me when you know apne inka kya bigada hai then all shall be fine


😆


Haila maan your love is thinking you to be a Grinch

Man only she can think like this about him right

But then she has all the rights to do so even if she may not know it

Ahhh this girl is funny love her as geet in comparison to soni sorry dear

As this is the real soni naa

What she would have been like had she not lost her memory


Soni and Geet are same but the reason you find them different is because due to loosing memory Geet had become confused and unsure which made her polite and sweet to everybody she met! but the new Geet is confident and also thinks that she has not lost anything major except two months of her life so she is more confident and bindaas! Plus, there is also the added bonus of being ASR's sister! Thats bound to make her more bold!


Awww her older sister packed food for her

And in the same one her veere used to take bless that's cute

God really jealous of your own brother who is trying to get the two of you closer

But hen this is gonna happen naa after all its maan


😆


[QUOTE Wow so pasta is her fav

Hmmm they even have same fav dishes arrey waah yaar

Oh ho this is even better man

She loves pasta all thanx to maan right


Yup!😃


But she doesn't even know it dang it

Good question dev my man

If she really forgot you then whats with pasta being her fav

She hasn't really forgotten you

You are still in her subconscious somewhere but are able to go to her conscious mind mate

Well it was necessary to tell him this to ponder on right

Think about it maan you need to

Love dev more and more thanx to his efforts


I think my readers have started loving Dev more than Maan!😆


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Deelight

u noe wz nt able 2 sleep without readin ur update.. hd been waitin a whole week... wz awake jz 2 read it... thnx a looot fa updating !!!!

Aww! So sweet of you! Did not know you are so hooked on to my FF! Really touched to read this post!😊

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