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Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Awesome but short..!!! Waiting n how Virat gets her back in his life...!!! Please write a longer update..only if u can..:)!

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pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: rasp_berry
Awesome updt...but again its short...where is manvi? Wat happend in btw them?...cont soon

thank u and u will get to know very soon

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pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: virumanu
this was too short yaar..y like this ah.
Bt loved to the core.
Plz cntinue soon plz

thank u I will update soon

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pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: niki795
awesome
loved iit
but again short
where is manvi bring her soon

thank u I will bring her soon

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pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Jannat94
awesome update dear...but too short...make it longer plz
waiting for next part
update soon 😃

thank u very soon u will get update

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pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: iluviratmanvi
nice but next update soon

thanks I will

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pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Syed695
Awesome but short..!!! Waiting n how Virat gets her back in his life...!!! Please write a longer update..only if u can..:)!

thanks and I will try to update long

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pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: jia123sagar
superb update
liked it
cont soon

thanks and very soon I will update

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pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Part 3

V : Thinking about his and her flackbalck came smile on his face
they are married its not easy to convence both family for there
they are gone lot of family drama but at last his babhi and bhai support
came front convence both the family and lost of convence them both are
get married and he promise her he will keep happy her and he will support her he will stand near her and fulfill her all dream he will listen her
but when she need him he left her alone he was not trust her not ready
to listen what saying he hurt her so much and more than he only hold
her hand and through her out of house thinkng all this his smile face turn
into sad

other SB snd Vm talking to each other

SB : Bhabhi its very strange the who I didn't to daughter in law this
house I always thinks she so immature irresposible but u know slowly
slowly I start to like her but I never thought virat will do I like this
to her he was so much love her he go against for family to marriage her
and he behave like this to her we really didn't know where she gone
how she is she alive or

Vm : Di I know all truth that time but still I cannot do anything
I cannot tell the truth virat I was so helpless filling that time
I didn't under stand how should I tell truth to him and when
in front of my eye he was holding her hand throughing out of house
then also I can't do anything I feel so angry to me that I cann't
stop him to behaving so rude to her

Dadaji listen Sb and Vm talk from outside standing near room door
he feel very sad that when very one gone out for relative marriage all this happen to manvi and that time nobody was there to support her she so alone that time

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Kapoor Manson

Mr .Prem and Mrs. Summan Kapoor sit near the bed and
continously changing there daughter forehead wet clothes
which they kept when they get know there having high
temperature and there Arjun after 10 min checking temperature
by holding termometer and they she there daguther is slowly slowly
opening her eye Arjun run his little sister hold her hand take her name Mannu and her parrent take Manvi at same time Manvi look at them

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Edited by pink1 - 12 years ago