Virman SS: I will make u my again one day - Page 45

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update... cute fight btw ansh and virat... thanks for pm... sorry for late comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
loved it
ansh ans sia are so cute
plz cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it but really small
loved virat and ansh part
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nia333

Hi Marry
Mind blowing update dear!!!..
.👏 Thank GOD i haven't missed this update...😛 Its d Best of all ur previous updates...👍🏼 Happy that U haven't discontinued this story...😃 Loved cuteee Ansh n Sia...n their Happy tear Debate with her Mom...😆 Aww... Virat n Ansh fight for their only girl friend n eagerness to meet her 😉😳 was really very cute n not to forget that Sia's shout...so sweet....😆 Totally happy...happy update but it was too short ..its ok i know u r busy...Update whenever u get time n V will read it dear...Don't worry..😊
Lastly sorry for late comment dear...
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Thank u so much for d pm
Love u
Take care
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thanks for u r long comment and its ok and tomorrow I will update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Right decision dear to cntnue it ...
Thanx alot for cntnuing it ...
Abt update its short but sweet...
Love ansh and virat teasing and fighting part...
Sweet and emotional updatr dear...
Do cntnue and keep rocking...
Thnx alot for pm dea...





thank u for u r comment tom I will update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: manuthi

nice update... cute fight btw ansh and virat... thanks for pm... sorry for late comment



its ok and thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jia123sagar

superb update

loved it
ansh ans sia are so cute
plz cont soon
thanks for the pm



thanks yeah both are cute
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: virman.lover

awesome update

loved it but really small
loved virat and ansh part
continue soon
thanks for the pm



yeah its small but I try to give
big update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 12



All are reach inside children park and waiting for manvi and Ansh and Sia are playing Virika watching playing there children and virat is continuously looking park entry to see whether manvi came or not

Vn : look Virat and saying relax she will come u come and sit

V : bhai I can't wait to see her I am dying to see her when she will

J : Ha virenji when mannu will whether she will coming or not

V : Don't tell bhabhi like this my heart is saying she will come

J : Virat my heart also saying that she will coming but I am don't know whether she will come or not I just praying she should come

And other while manvi is coming to children park to meet ansh and sia she very happy to meet them again while she coming her brother arjun came and he ask her where she is going

M : Bhai I am going to meet my new friend in children park

A : New friend

M : yes my new friend ansh and sia

A : ansh and sia

M: yes they both are 3 years and I promise them that I will today to play them so should I go

A : wait I also coming I also want my sister little friend and I have meet Mr viren also regarding our land case

M : ok leg go and she bye there parent and coming to park with her brother Arjun

After sometime she reach park with her brother and start searching Ansh and sia

A : where u r new friend

M : I am also searching them only and she find them they both are playing in swing she run there and call ansh and sia

When she is calling ansh and sia jevika heard that some girl is call her children and she looking at the direction and hoping she should her mannu

J : jeevika is very happy when she turn the direction and the girl is not other than her mannu who is calling her children she is very happy seeing mannu and tear coming from her eye

V and vn also turn that direction where jeevika is looking and they both also very happy seeing manvi

when manvi call ansh and sia they look at that direction and they both are happy and run toward manvi and hug her

V,Vn,J see ansh and sia running toward manvi and hug her

V : bhai I want to go near manvi and hug her very tightly saying while tear his eye seeing manvi

Vn: virat Jeevika control u r self what we have decide that first will find the truth control u both u r emotional

J : virenji how could I control myself seeing my mannu after 2 year

Vn : listen jeevika u should control then we get all manvi back because we don't how she will react seeing u both u

V : bhai why u r saying liking I know she will defiantly recognize me

Vn : virat control u r self I know that she will not recognize as her husband because when she cam my office she behave like I am unknown person of her

V : bhai pls I want go near her I want her in life again

Vn : try to understand this is not right time control u r emotional and put his hand on virat shoulder

they are seeing how ansh and sia playing and happy with manvi they are able control there smile seeing manvi ansh sia playing jumping here and there and there is one more who happy seeing manvi and he is arjun he happy seeing how manvi is happy and playing with 2 kids and she also become kid

Ansh and sia: while playing he stop and look manvi and tell her to come with him

M : ansh ,sia where u taking me

Sia : to meet u our parent they also came in this park

M : oh where are they looking here there

Ansh And Sia : lookinfg where there parent and there chachu stand and loudly they shout momma ,papa saying they run while holding manvi hand

J : Controlling her tear and try to behave normal front manvi and asking ansh ,sia what happen why u both are shouting

Ansh : meet my girlfriend look how beauty full she is I told u na

Sai: And she my best friend also

J : Yes she beautiful

Ansh : so now should I marry her

V : Ansh what are u saying how could u marriage her giving cute angry look to ansh and it means time controlling his emotion and feeling toward her and looking manvi

Vn : ansh behave

Ansh : pout his face

M : No no its ok there are kid why u r shouting while taking to them manvi feeling some connection toward jeevika,viren and virat but she can't understand what was that feeling like she know them

Ansh : Girlfriend don't call me kid while saying he again pout his face and looking manvi

M : little smile ok u r not kid my little handsome know its ok

Ansh : giving million dollars smile to manvi and said ok

m : again looking jeevika ,virat and viren like she know her there is emotion running her heart

while looking everyone manvi eye stop on virat and there is small eye lock btw then and there eye lock broken listen Arjun voice who is call her

A : Mannu now we should I also want meet to our also and looking virat ,jeevika and viren and he stop on viren he know viren vadhera because famous lawyer

Vn : who are u

A : Hi I am arjun kapoor manvi brother and prem kapoor son and if I am not wrong u r mr viren vadhera

J and V shock when Arjun introduce as a manvi brother

Vn : yes I am viren vadhera

A : I coming to u r office only with my sister to meet u regarding our land case

Vn: Don't worry I read case I am calling u today but my children want we should stay play with them

A : oh this is u r kid I want say thanks to u taking our land case and u r children because of them I see my mannu so happy today

J : why what happen to her hopping she should get to no what happen to her

A : avoiding jeevika and giving small smile nothing like that I am saying and looking virat he saying u know virat my mannu is very big fan of u r she never missing u r single interview and u r preform when ever u show is showing tv she watch them

M : yes mr .virat vadhra I am big fan of u r can I get u r autograph pls making puppy face

V : Looking at her give small smile and thinking in mind( manvi I am today whatever is because of u I just want u back in life pls come back in my life pls try to remember me I am u r virat manvi I am only celebrate and big singer for other but for u my u r husband u r virat I know I only said to forget me but its hurting me that u r not recognize me ) while thinking all this tear came from his eye but before anybody notice he wipw that tear and take book from her and give autograph her

M : thank u

V : NO need to thanks me I am whatever is today because u saying all this looking at her

Vn,J,A,M looking at virat viren jeevika why he is telling like this but arjun is confuse and manvi she more confuse but little bit happy but she doesn't why

A : Because of mannu what to means

V : virat came in sense and tell that its meand there is not need to thanks because my fan I am today became big singer and try to avoid very one gaze on him

Vn : Arjun if u doesn't have any problem so u and manvi come our house right know we will discuss there only

while saying viren is hoping that arjun yes so they get more time to spend with manvi and they will get to know more about her what happen to her in past 2 years and manvi also meet other family

A : while arjun thinking

J : Yes u should with us in our house

Ansh and Sia: Pls come with us in our house pls pls girlfriend

A : Girlfriend looking manvi

Ansh : Yes she my girlfriend and I am her handsome boyfriend and I want to marry her so that she play with me and sia

Vn,J,V : Ansh

A : u want to marry my sister so u should play with her

Ansh And Sia : yes

Sia : Yes Arjun uncle because momma saying girls is going husband house after marriage so when my best friend marriage ansh she will come our house and she will play with me and ansh

Ansh : And more thing I want marriage her

A : and what is that

Ansh : she so beautiful

While all conversation going on manvi mouth open and virat is again jealous on ansh talking to himself soutan where ever coming btwn me and manvi and he so fast he was asking manvi hand front of her brother

A : Arjun start laughing and looking at manvi and saying u r boyfriend came soon husband is very cute I like him u like him while saying all this to tease manvi

M : Bhai u also teasing

A : arjun while teasing manvi and asnh I am ready u should marriage her

Ansh : Smile and saying ok I am ready

All are started laughing but virat get irritated and saying what u guy are talking he is such small little handsome kid while all this virat look ansh with cute angry face

Vn : ok now stop arjun come let go

and everyone moving there care virat catch ansh hand saying u want marriage her I will see How u will

Ansh : Chachu I already clear know see how manvi will marriage with me

V : I will see beta how could marriage her and u r kid

Ansh : I am not a kid

V : kid

Ansh : no

V : yes

Ansh : While crying running with a his momma

J and Vn : Virat

And all are move at vadhera house

Part 12 finish I really don't its up the mark or not because I write what came in mind and if u like pls press like button and give u r comment and my other I will update tomorrow and any grammatical mistake pls avoid and anybody want pm then send me buddy request it easy for me to send pm and silent reader press at least like button


















Edited by pink1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update
luv manvi ansh and sia convo
waiting for next update soon...
and yipee i am the first one to comment
Edited by MeenalKhare99 - 11 years ago

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