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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lalarukh

its for u both chetna and nishu...both working hard ...love



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna


And the main problem is I was never very studious type...mumma-papa mujhe kaha laake chod diya...😭 😭 😭

awe baby :)...u will rock the world one day...i remember my time od studies...i always wished that teacher ko koi kaam ajaye ...mujhay kuch hojaye in exams days...its like always ...hilarious thoughts just to avoid exams :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
and from cheer up me and chetna means cheer up...not chair up ...hahahaha
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lalarukh

awe baby :)...u will rock the world one day...i remember my time od studies...i always wished that teacher ko koi kaam ajaye ...mujhay kuch hojaye in exams days...its like always ...hilarious thoughts just to avoid exams :)


yeah...we all are like this...😳 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mujhe pata hai Lala...😆 😆 😆

Damn...mera power cut ho gaya...will talk later...bye...Chetna...Lala...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

Mujhe pata hai Lala...😆 😆 😆

Damn...mera power cut ho gaya...will talk later...bye...Chetna...Lala...

i just wrote it to make u laugh...keep laughing...chalo love to both,bye bye
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bye...lala nd nishu...missing dii today...gud nyt ...take care...
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Posted: 12 years ago
edited cppy 17 cmnt on page 79😳😳
hope u enjoy it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Sorry for the late comments...

I just get lazy sometimes... he he, But I do have a reason, anyways leave that aside, coming to the chapters...

Chapter 16

Amazing Update…

The description of his room makes me to see my room, which can be sometimes worse than Khushi's hehe... Oh how can a person be tidy all the time? Thoda ganda hona bhi jaruri hai!!! Hehe...

I really liked the reason why Khushi does not want to tell Arnav about her arrival, I just hope Arnav understands her sooner, but I love their arguments then their romance "Blush"

Only if she knows what Arnav feels for her, that she can make a move...

It's not like he's always rude with her, He only got Angry when he remember of NK and Khushi being together...

I just want Khushi to pin point the concern, care and worry that he shows when she is in some trouble that will help her to take a next step...

The statement "I guess he even sleeps wearing suits." made me laugh when i read that brought the attention of my family, who were looking at me thinking that I have gone crazy...

Hmm Khushi shifted to guest room, ha, I know the reason, it's not that Arnav would have made her uncomfortable in his room, as she was planning to put her clothes in his wardrobe, but the real reason must be as she's a messy person and he's a tidy one, she didn't want to be the victim of his wrath… hehe, Oh I'm just imagining ha…

Kaka is a pleasant person in the house that will help Khushi to win Arnav's heart, as he was with them for so many years, and he will also help Khushi if she's damn angry with Arnav….

I felt really bad for Arnav when he entered his room and searched for Khushi everywhere, and thought that she will share his things- wardrobe bathroom bed… he was just so happy to see her come back in his life but was also not sure of her reasons…

And all his wishes came crushing down with Kaka's revelation of her staying in guestroom and not in his… And poor chair, was kicked because of Khushi's mistake…

Oh Arnav was on full mode to blow his anger on Khushi but was in awe when she hums a song, Oh I so wished Arnav had taken some time from his extremely busy schedule to spend some time with songs to relax him-self, but Mr. Raizada don't have time to eat…

Sometimes Arnav really act as a Monster, why he have to hold her so tight that makes her cry in pain, and he totally lost his control, and started talking about their first night… Thank God Khushi made him stop from speaking any further; it would have been really embarrassing…

One moment he was happy that she was sharing the room, next he became angry knowing that she shifted to guestroom, next to that he himself dragged her to come to him room, and spoke about making love and when realization dawn upon him, he just made her feel like an unimportant person in his life and house…

And I loved the fact that Khushi didn't give up… And put forth the deal... this may surely bring Arnie back…

He really couldn't have his dinner, could he?

The VM was awesome, made me think of the serial and their chemistry…

NO NK….??

Edited by monasha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

I was meaning to comment on Friday or Saturday for Chapter 16, and you already updated the next one… I always liked when you gave big updates, and this was like same thing, only after some days though…

Chapter 17…

Just as superb as ever

Oh! Arnav fell down… lol… Love, Food and Sleep Deprived men… But he's so sweet, I would have loved him from the bottom of my Heart.. the statement is so true "Love changes every being even if that person happens to be the great ASR!"

He can show how rude and arrogant he can get, but deep down he's still the same Arnie…

He made her relax in the chair and protected her from cold by putting blanket…

She involuntarily gripped his fingers and grabbed his hand.. Ah ha… So many emotions must be flown in his heart… he makes sure that he admires his wife when she don't notice…

Ahem He blushed, really?? I so wanted to see the red color creep from his neck to cheeks, Indeed this is the very first sign of getting Arnie back…

Arnav first time in his life in AR went to vending machine to bring chocolate for his wife shocking every one of his way… How sweet…

He must be really surprised to see her cabin being in such a mess only on her first day… Btw AR doesn't have cleaners to clean the cabins that Arnav had to clean it for her…??

I really wished that he just have kept the chocolates on her desk, her happiness would have been priceless… Poor chocolates have been squeezed lashed in the empty bin… I just hate NK.. this is all because of him, that Arnav is in such state of mind…

Dam, Khushi is a late riser?? Her mom has to wake her up.. lol… Poor Garima had to be the victim of Khushi's rants… So Shashi stop Garima to call and wake up Khushi so she understands her responsibility… that's good actually…

Khushi is really Smart one over here, she immediately went into investigation upon remembering that she never took the blanket, while doing the work and started the investigation by sniffing (I wanted to roll on the floor and laugh but just stopped as I wasn't alone in the house)

Military Man sounds really good… But our Laad Governor is best, isn't it.. Got used to it.. Khushi's sense of humor is really good to say, But Arnav is really going spoil his health is he continues to eat medicines without food…

I really pity Mr. Mitthal, he lost his brain… As Arnav is not accepting to do any deal with him, he's gonna take Arnav to court of verbally finalizing… Who's gonna believe him…?

So he did have faith in her and so he decided to cancel the deal even before seeing the report… I wish Khushi understands this… And her questions really make him tongue tied…

But her one slips of tongue her made the cheerful atmosphere into the dangerous one… And he later didn't believe her that she was just kidding…

And he got really angry with that, but her one touch on his cheek made him lots relax (Khushi please take this as a hint to calm him down next time)…

And he made her embarrass later with her statement, but she's not the one to back off, is she?? She brought up the topic of his sleep and then he handed up hurting her with his rude command… Arnav don't be like this please…

I was so happy that she saw the chocolate bars in the dustbin… Actually First I wanted her to see the chocolate when he was throwing it in the dustbin, but she was too late for that.. But this one moment is superb, that he's caught…

And she made him confess that he had brought it, and thrown it in the dustbin… and she did eat it… He should be made realize that ignoring food, or throwing it away should be stopped… he him-self have starved after his families death for so many months and now that he has enough money why can't he just sit and eat???

Oh No NK in this Update also…

Edited by monasha - 12 years ago

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